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From: Insanatey
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  • :0 Damn...that was unexpected...YOUR REALLY GOOD !!! :)

  • The intro was waaaay to long, but that first verse was good. I like the intensity of your delivery. Now you have to work on your stage presence. Your visual performance should match how you sound. The tough part will be not looking like you are reading the words. Again that first verse was great... did you make that up?

  • @scottyphoto Thank you! and yeah I wrote all of the lyrics (aside from the one's that are sung by the girl in the instrumental). I write all the words I say. As far as stage presence, i apologize, I've been making these videos just to give something to look at while listening to my songs. Hopefully I can make a real video worth watching soon!

    Maybe I'll try to make a real video soon that's worth watching!

  • @Insanatey The second to last line you broke flow, but other than that, this is real good. Now that I know you are not actually making a video I will reserve any comments on visuals until you do.

  • got damn, im fappin to this

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