yeah i like it but its kinda weird cuz its just the beggining and cassie is already giving him her number.. isnt that too fast ? anyway im gonna read the rest to see what happnes :)
lol yeah i know i wrote tyhis like forever ago, i think it like sucks lmfao but like thats when i used to write stories kind of crappy, and i wanted everything to just move along yuh kno? but i guess yu shud keep reading it, i mean a lil further in i think is good. :)
i loved your first chapter, but this was WAY to rushed! you could have made this so much better! In my opinion, a bad beginning kinda ruins the rest for me
yeah, sorry bout that. when i wrote it, it didnt seem lik that, in my opinion, lol, i even tihnk its a little rushed, but i do think if you keep watching it, it will get better, it totally drama filled, yeah the begining is rushed, but i only wanted to get things moving, personally i think you should read it. Theres tons of drama to come, and its really good! =)
Well...i've got the whole day to do nothing since my plans for 4th of july fell through...I might as well. I am writing a JB love story also, but i think i kinda dragged out the beginning, as in, its moving realllyyy slow. i think i'm like on the 8th chapter, and only one couple are BF GF, and then theres one couple that they just kissed but nnow there moving away to different places. then the other two are just friends (for now) i love writing with using my name in it, lolz, it's more fun!
lol, i kno, sorry, my friend Colleen usually uploads them but her computer is lik gay and she cant put music on it, we wanted to, but it doesnt work, idky...Sorry =[
ew, you're taking this way too fast. hate to be rude, really. ;] it's just going too fast for me.
callmemrsjoejonass27 2 years ago 2
yeah i like it but its kinda weird cuz its just the beggining and cassie is already giving him her number.. isnt that too fast ? anyway im gonna read the rest to see what happnes :)
LittleAnnStar 3 years ago
lol yeah i know i wrote tyhis like forever ago, i think it like sucks lmfao but like thats when i used to write stories kind of crappy, and i wanted everything to just move along yuh kno? but i guess yu shud keep reading it, i mean a lil further in i think is good. :)
xxLydiaaxx 3 years ago
oh btw; xxLydiaaxx, the one im on is my other account, im JonasBrotherLuver222, just lettting you know lol
xxLydiaaxx 3 years ago
i loved it ! and I subbed !! :) could you check out my stories ?
LittleAnnStar 3 years ago
hey wheres 1?
lotsoflyrics 3 years ago
uhh idk lol check the channel in the vids just type in like 2, and check what vids are there
im sure its there. :]
thanks for watching! ox
JonasBrotherLuver222 3 years ago
sorry but it sucks,
you need words.
if it a love story where is the love?
madz12mcac34 3 years ago
i need words?
umm, what?
JonasBrotherLuver222 3 years ago
yu need to read the rest because were not done
duhh.
JonasBrotherLuver222 3 years ago
its the 2nd episode be patient
cheesequest001 2 years ago
Nick: So that's your name? yur beautiful eyes match it well, I noticed them on stage, your eyes stand out lik one bright star in a dark sky..
Awe how romantic, i always was a true romantic, you should check out my stories, theyre like yours. :)
MrsNickjonas4lifee 3 years ago
i loved your first chapter, but this was WAY to rushed! you could have made this so much better! In my opinion, a bad beginning kinda ruins the rest for me
KoolChristianGirl12 3 years ago
yeah, sorry bout that. when i wrote it, it didnt seem lik that, in my opinion, lol, i even tihnk its a little rushed, but i do think if you keep watching it, it will get better, it totally drama filled, yeah the begining is rushed, but i only wanted to get things moving, personally i think you should read it. Theres tons of drama to come, and its really good! =)
JonasBrotherLuver222 3 years ago
Well...i've got the whole day to do nothing since my plans for 4th of july fell through...I might as well. I am writing a JB love story also, but i think i kinda dragged out the beginning, as in, its moving realllyyy slow. i think i'm like on the 8th chapter, and only one couple are BF GF, and then theres one couple that they just kissed but nnow there moving away to different places. then the other two are just friends (for now) i love writing with using my name in it, lolz, it's more fun!
JBstoryMAKER 3 years ago
lol. its kool!!1 i luv the jonas brothers so music or no music it still kicks ass!!!
ohhhemmmgeee 3 years ago
okay sorry but u really hav 2 add music or sumthin...otherwise the pics were cool
ohhhemmmgeee 3 years ago
lol, i kno, sorry, my friend Colleen usually uploads them but her computer is lik gay and she cant put music on it, we wanted to, but it doesnt work, idky...Sorry =[
-Lydia Xx
JonasBrotherLuver222 3 years ago
loved it!
smiley28101 3 years ago
haha cool! =]
caityyy0817 3 years ago