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From: JonasBrotherLuver222
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  • ew, you're taking this way too fast. hate to be rude, really. ;] it's just going too fast for me.

  • yeah i like it but its kinda weird cuz its just the beggining and cassie is already giving him her number.. isnt that too fast ? anyway im gonna read the rest to see what happnes :)

  • lol yeah i know i wrote tyhis like forever ago, i think it like sucks lmfao but like thats when i used to write stories kind of crappy, and i wanted everything to just move along yuh kno? but i guess yu shud keep reading it, i mean a lil further in i think is good. :)

  • oh btw; xxLydiaaxx, the one im on is my other account, im JonasBrotherLuver222, just lettting you know lol

  • i loved it ! and I subbed !! :) could you check out my stories ?

  • hey wheres 1?

  • uhh idk lol check the channel in the vids just type in like 2, and check what vids are there

    im sure its there. :]

    thanks for watching! ox

  • sorry but it sucks,

    you need words.

    if it a love story where is the love?

  • i need words?

    umm, what?

  • yu need to read the rest because were not done

    duhh.

  • its the 2nd episode be patient

  • Nick: So that's your name? yur beautiful eyes match it well, I noticed them on stage, your eyes stand out lik one bright star in a dark sky..

    Awe how romantic, i always was a true romantic, you should check out my stories, theyre like yours. :)

  • i loved your first chapter, but this was WAY to rushed! you could have made this so much better! In my opinion, a bad beginning kinda ruins the rest for me

  • yeah, sorry bout that. when i wrote it, it didnt seem lik that, in my opinion, lol, i even tihnk its a little rushed, but i do think if you keep watching it, it will get better, it totally drama filled, yeah the begining is rushed, but i only wanted to get things moving, personally i think you should read it. Theres tons of drama to come, and its really good! =)

  • Well...i've got the whole day to do nothing since my plans for 4th of july fell through...I might as well. I am writing a JB love story also, but i think i kinda dragged out the beginning, as in, its moving realllyyy slow. i think i'm like on the 8th chapter, and only one couple are BF GF, and then theres one couple that they just kissed but nnow there moving away to different places. then the other two are just friends (for now) i love writing with using my name in it, lolz, it's more fun!

  • lol. its kool!!1 i luv the jonas brothers so music or no music it still kicks ass!!!

  • okay sorry but u really hav 2 add music or sumthin...otherwise the pics were cool

  • lol, i kno, sorry, my friend Colleen usually uploads them but her computer is lik gay and she cant put music on it, we wanted to, but it doesnt work, idky...Sorry =[

    -Lydia Xx

  • loved it!

  • haha cool! =]

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