shaheem, if i could sing i would sing this song with yuu cuz i feel wat u have to say and i can relate so much, i honestlyy would mix it so bad. but no i cant sing lolol
btw am orthee okay ?? ashfariah is my nik name. lol
just to let you know man all your songs aint gotta be about the bad things of your life, my style is different than this. i kinda got em's old style like it was in the Slim Shady EP, LP, and Marshall Mathers LP days. this is pretty good tho, keep tryin man youll elevate..
lol i dont have an accent...its just video for some reason, its my braces and my mic, i honestly dont have an accent lol, so many ppl on this video said that, and thank you for your support:)
agreed....not only work on quality of equip...but work on pronouncing the words better...delivery...and put ur heart n that shit...it sounds like ur reading a book...but the song is a good concept...decent lyrics...nice shadowville beat...but u can definately double ur listeners and style/quality by simple steps...no dissrespect..just constructive criticism...also how about some OVER DUBS!! n e questions halla at me
2 much of an apu accent from the simpsons lol rappin suits niggaz bruv!!!! giv it up blud u ent flowin eva....or u say is wen i was growin up i cuddnt c or sum shit lyk dat nice try do bruv ye..l0o0ol
what....sorry I couldn't hear you....your' right...my ears are messed up...did you say something...speak up....man I need hearing aids...oh well...sorry..I cant understand what you are saying...perhaps you could talk a little louder next time...
yo dog your shit is wack your a fuckin lightweight mc...stay the fuck off da mic...i'm not tryin to be mean or anything but your seriously wack hommie, my 9 year old sister cud spit betta den u...dats y all pakis shud stay outta da rap game real talkz n if u immediatley reply to my comment it just proves dat ur a wack ass fuckin internet rapper n dat u shud stay in da kitchen making curry and driving some taxis...ya zeet
you piece of shit...YOU obviously have nothing better to do...go back to kindergarden and learn how to spell...and when you flunk out of there..stick your head in a GAS oven and light the dame thing...!!you Jealous piece of CRAP
JELOUS OF THIS PIECE OF SHIT!!?? are you fuckin kidding me??? The motherfucker hasn't even hit puberty yet. I could hear his voice squeeking and cracking up. Hes a fuckin paki, what struggle has he gone through in life? Arranged marrigages? LMAO! Having to merry some butt-ugly, curry, shit stain, smellin'paki who can barley speak a word of english while he works at the local convience store sellin porno magazines and cigarettes to white 16 year old female high school dropouts
what are you, his fuckin bitch? Don't front 'cause you know this shit is wack and if you think this shit sounds good then you should get your fuckin ears checked...real talkz
yeh bitch you think u can rap? lets here u spit some raps then .. mother fuckin nigger .. i'll get the KKK on ur fuckin black ass .. they will fuckin make you their slave ... your fuckin lucky your ancesters got lucky and got free u would had been my personal lil black bitch..
why are you sticking up for this fuckin paki...i really like how your dissin black ppl when you have a fuckin black man as your username TUPAC876...shows that you really love us niggaz...you probably look in your mirror at night wishin you were a black man but slit your wrist with an exacto kinfe after realizing your still some fat, ugly, cracker ass honkee who chokes his chicken to homosexual malazian porn with men who have erected uncircumcised penises...SO DEEP DOWN YA WANNA B ME HOMMIE!!
k fuck you alrite? dont fuckin go around on youtube posting 5 fuckin paragraphs for hate comments .. if he cant rap just give him a 1 star and move on with life ... but no u hav to go on and say shyt and act all tough on the net .. yeh u think ur tough? face this guy in real life .. he might be 5 times ur fuckin height .. this kid will stomp on ur face u fuckin lil turd .. ur prolly some 8 year old sayin shit ..
K look nigger .. first of all i dont want to be black .. being hated by the whole world .. pfft yeah right.. second im surprised that black people can even afford internet and youtube .. EVEN A FUCKIN COMPUTER?? WOW .. i never knew niggers can buy shyt .. Third of all .. u cant rap any good so go back to your street corner and drug deal .. ok? and mayB since ur sis is black she can sell her virginity around the corner with you..
shaheem, if i could sing i would sing this song with yuu cuz i feel wat u have to say and i can relate so much, i honestlyy would mix it so bad. but no i cant sing lolol
btw am orthee okay ?? ashfariah is my nik name. lol
ashfariah 10 months ago
hey man, this song really speaks to me, really an amazing song with perfect lyrics, amazing message man
koffdogga 2 years ago
u n shadowville, i got this beat...banging...
DnL205 2 years ago
2pac-dear mama :) its ok:)
bishopvick25 2 years ago
that was actually what i was thinking about when i was writing this song
ShaheemA13 2 years ago
just to let you know man all your songs aint gotta be about the bad things of your life, my style is different than this. i kinda got em's old style like it was in the Slim Shady EP, LP, and Marshall Mathers LP days. this is pretty good tho, keep tryin man youll elevate..
jawsfan88 2 years ago
fukk off man your still growing up
FaceBreaker123456 3 years ago
horrible
ChrisWoitowich 3 years ago
this has really good mannnn
marco111993 3 years ago
is he dead cuz it says rest in peace
ineedmoney2k 3 years ago
lol no that's another song by me
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
thiz iight
southsiderjokerx3 3 years ago
see this one is my fav
djgolden2 3 years ago
pretty goood
little more feeling :)
eastside2012 3 years ago
quite good :)
i agree with the accent/brace thing tho
altho you cant help that
maybe post some of your songs to a rapper willing to sing it?
that would be great!
livvyz123 3 years ago
did u come up with the music?
xDeathxNotebookx 3 years ago
real talk, i cant understand one fucking word your saying
lyrics are decent but you cant rap for shit
dynomitemike9P 3 years ago
This beats mad chill. Good job dude keep up the good work.
agtsk84life 3 years ago
pretty good kid, I may add your songs on my site. just work on your accent and you well get a record deal.
mymuznet818 3 years ago
lol i dont have an accent...its just video for some reason, its my braces and my mic, i honestly dont have an accent lol, so many ppl on this video said that, and thank you for your support:)
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
when ur braces get removed you`d be a child legend!! best undiscovered rapper ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
xDeathxNotebookx 3 years ago
haha i know! he makes shasdy look bad!
ekoyo1234 3 years ago
I know huh,
when he gets his braces removed be prob be ownin at this shet.
viet925 3 years ago
@mymuznet818 your forgetting getting a recrod deal is no where near that easy
PharoahMicz 1 year ago
lol ur kinda good but ur araki acsent is kinda fukin it
pwntheman 3 years ago
Flows slighty alright on this one....love da lyrics...its real deep man...GET THE FLOW RIGHT
Seagles71 3 years ago
not bad man sounds awsome release a cd man i would buy this in a heart beat man
razjazjoe 3 years ago
Okay, seriouslly Shaheem, get a better mic, work hard on a track, get it heard, you'll be a pretty good success, d:
I'd suggest a Apex-470, very high-quality mic.
aShuckle 3 years ago
agreed....not only work on quality of equip...but work on pronouncing the words better...delivery...and put ur heart n that shit...it sounds like ur reading a book...but the song is a good concept...decent lyrics...nice shadowville beat...but u can definately double ur listeners and style/quality by simple steps...no dissrespect..just constructive criticism...also how about some OVER DUBS!! n e questions halla at me
~BEZ
~MDZ of RedZonE
mdeezie1287 3 years ago
hey u should make gangster songs too it would b bad ass to :D
217eastsideloco 3 years ago
is tight but like ur accent is kinda messing it up but still bad ass u should make a cd
217eastsideloco 3 years ago
thanks man!
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
Its kinda hard to get what youre saying..
tyven55 3 years ago
yea ive been trying to improve on that, i have braces, thats why its difficult to pronounce some words properly
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
2 much of an apu accent from the simpsons lol rappin suits niggaz bruv!!!! giv it up blud u ent flowin eva....or u say is wen i was growin up i cuddnt c or sum shit lyk dat nice try do bruv ye..l0o0ol
punitcuz 3 years ago
.....Wow when he means he couldn't "c" he means that he didn't care about what they did for him....
lilxhermit 3 years ago
quite good like, but get a better quality of mike or suhin, it sounds total unprofesional,
good rap
rosscol106 3 years ago
yea but see i dont want to become a professional rapper, so that's why im not spending money on rapping.
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
Good song, I wish you had a better voice though cuz people wanna listen to the songs without reading lyrics at the same time!
LinkII08 3 years ago
the songs pretty good , but u need to improve to on your voice beause not to be mean but it isn't very good.
nicoleca0427 3 years ago
This is actually pretty good. Keep it up man
HumanCruton 3 years ago
Stop hatin all you haters are basturd guys go fuckaduck or something. yeah peace
BudCatcreations 3 years ago
ii both of yall r just fukin wack dawg...both of yall think ur all that but reality is that ur not...hes guna b the nexx generation baller ya dig.
BELIVE DAT
pokerking93 3 years ago
...no homo
plus77mann 3 years ago
what....sorry I couldn't hear you....your' right...my ears are messed up...did you say something...speak up....man I need hearing aids...oh well...sorry..I cant understand what you are saying...perhaps you could talk a little louder next time...
muzzyjb 3 years ago
yo dog your shit is wack your a fuckin lightweight mc...stay the fuck off da mic...i'm not tryin to be mean or anything but your seriously wack hommie, my 9 year old sister cud spit betta den u...dats y all pakis shud stay outta da rap game real talkz n if u immediatley reply to my comment it just proves dat ur a wack ass fuckin internet rapper n dat u shud stay in da kitchen making curry and driving some taxis...ya zeet
plus77mann 3 years ago
you piece of shit...YOU obviously have nothing better to do...go back to kindergarden and learn how to spell...and when you flunk out of there..stick your head in a GAS oven and light the dame thing...!!you Jealous piece of CRAP
muzzyjb 3 years ago 2
JELOUS OF THIS PIECE OF SHIT!!?? are you fuckin kidding me??? The motherfucker hasn't even hit puberty yet. I could hear his voice squeeking and cracking up. Hes a fuckin paki, what struggle has he gone through in life? Arranged marrigages? LMAO! Having to merry some butt-ugly, curry, shit stain, smellin'paki who can barley speak a word of english while he works at the local convience store sellin porno magazines and cigarettes to white 16 year old female high school dropouts
plus77mann 3 years ago
Wow you killed it so bad man chill the fuck down!
BudCatcreations 3 years ago
what are you, his fuckin bitch? Don't front 'cause you know this shit is wack and if you think this shit sounds good then you should get your fuckin ears checked...real talkz
plus77mann 3 years ago
yeh bitch you think u can rap? lets here u spit some raps then .. mother fuckin nigger .. i'll get the KKK on ur fuckin black ass .. they will fuckin make you their slave ... your fuckin lucky your ancesters got lucky and got free u would had been my personal lil black bitch..
Tupac876 3 years ago
why are you sticking up for this fuckin paki...i really like how your dissin black ppl when you have a fuckin black man as your username TUPAC876...shows that you really love us niggaz...you probably look in your mirror at night wishin you were a black man but slit your wrist with an exacto kinfe after realizing your still some fat, ugly, cracker ass honkee who chokes his chicken to homosexual malazian porn with men who have erected uncircumcised penises...SO DEEP DOWN YA WANNA B ME HOMMIE!!
plus77mann 3 years ago
What a racist fuck! go eat you fuking fried waffle and fried chicken or what ever you fukin dawg!
BudCatcreations 3 years ago
k fuck you alrite? dont fuckin go around on youtube posting 5 fuckin paragraphs for hate comments .. if he cant rap just give him a 1 star and move on with life ... but no u hav to go on and say shyt and act all tough on the net .. yeh u think ur tough? face this guy in real life .. he might be 5 times ur fuckin height .. this kid will stomp on ur face u fuckin lil turd .. ur prolly some 8 year old sayin shit ..
Tupac876 3 years ago
K look nigger .. first of all i dont want to be black .. being hated by the whole world .. pfft yeah right.. second im surprised that black people can even afford internet and youtube .. EVEN A FUCKIN COMPUTER?? WOW .. i never knew niggers can buy shyt .. Third of all .. u cant rap any good so go back to your street corner and drug deal .. ok? and mayB since ur sis is black she can sell her virginity around the corner with you..
Tupac876 3 years ago
Can u change your name, coz your a dumb cunt and a wannabe
parislanes 3 years ago
oh and this and why are my fav but this one well I would buy this one..seriously..
muzzyjb 3 years ago
:( cant say more..
muzzyjb 3 years ago
damn you're getting better. strong lyrics too!
spawrtan117 3 years ago
"You cant change the past, but you can think ahead"
True!
and it's sad that we don't see a lot of things at the time.. but it's always good when we eventually do appreciate.. cuz some of us never do
bacteriadoesntwork 3 years ago
yea man, better late than never:)
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
fukin sick song, sick lyrics
japabearing 3 years ago
thank you:)
ShaheemA13 3 years ago
YOOOOO... DAMN i love this beat!!!!!!n the lyrics are sick broooo!!!!!!!
yzarcrazyomar 3 years ago