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  • this sounds a little creepy..... but thats ok it will be something different....

  • JILLLIANNNNNNNNNN

    hi :)

    oooooo ur on msn

    i shall talk to you :)

    you need to send mee those pics of like the love and stuff

    love pics r awesome :)

    PEACE

    now i shall talk to you

    before you even read this...

  • sounds gooooddd :]

    a little creepy... but good

    hahaha

  • this is really cool!! i read it and i was like...dang, thats good  hehe

  • i can't wait

  • cant wait----cool!

    love the song 2!!!!!!!!!!

  • ok, that sounds cool, u HAVE to continue!! i NEED to know whats going on!!

  • you have got to continue this! PLEASE

    ah!!

    i desperately want the first chapter

    :-D

  • you should def post chapter 1 tonight!!

    i also hope you continue NJS

  • i loved it! post again soon!! :D

  • Dude, she's an assassin?

    That's messed up.

    Anyway, this sounds good.

    PPMS!

  • AN ASSASSIN! that is what it's called! I called her a bounty hunter, but she isn't really that is she? I must fix this asap! :D

  • LOL. I didn't know if it was called that when I typed it. But no, she's not a bounty hunter. A bounty hunter is somebody that goes around and arrests people for not paying tickets and fines and missing court dates, etc.

  • hehe

    oops!

    I'll be sure to read through and fix everyone one :p

  • Awsome!

  • Woh!

    Sounds AWESOME!

    Can't wait.

  • wow!!!

    that sounds AMAZING!!!!!

    u realli have to post soon!

  • EPIC :D

    So awesome, I cant wait for chapter 1

  • hehe, I LOVE IT.

    and 'shant.'

    that's one i haven't heard in a while :)

  • pft.

    it is epic ;p

  • haha, perhaps!

  • cool

  • sounds awesome!!!!

    (this may sound weird or stange but like anything that has to do with guns or stuff like the intro is saying i realy like, like the show NCIS anywayz) plz post more

  • AHHHHH

    NCIS BABE! YESSSSSS :D

    Tonyyy and Abby! YESSSSS

    :)

    hehe thanks..

  • they're my faves!!!!

    ur welcome =D

  • YES!

    yay!

    hehe i l o v e NCIS so much. :)

  • me too! i watch it every night its on, and my dad complains if the episode is one we've seen more than 3 times

    (i'm gonna be Abby for halloween)

  • whoa

    that's AWESOME :D:D

  • =) i'm even gonna try to find a gian tcup to fill with soda since Abby always hasone =)

  • SICK :D

  • Cant wait to see how the story goes

    looks great :)

  • hahaa. you 'shant' neglect them?

    thats awesomee. hahaa. =]

    oh my goodness.

    this sounds amazing.

    =]

  • are you making fun of the way I talk? :D:D

    he he :p

  • nno silly.

    i was admiring the way you talk. =]

    i lovee it! x]

    hahaa.

  • oh! I see....

    hehe, my bad.

    Thank you very much...

    hehe :]

    I think it's from reading to many old books... hehe

  • it looks great!

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