If We Kiss... A Jonas Brothers Story. Chapter 79

[CiaraT584]

OMJ !! That was......omj!!!

you are a truly amazing writer !!

[JBKevinJonas]

OMG im crying ... our an awesome write x

[MsDramaQueen913]

OMG... i cried so much in this.... you write and cry.... but im an actress so when i read stuff or watch films or even tv programmes i empathize so much with the characters that I AM them..... you really are an amazing writer...

[2good2be4gottenepms]

nNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOO! I FEEL LIKE CRYING BUT ITS 4:20AM AND I JUST CAME FROM A BBQ EARLIER AND HAD LIKE FIVE SPRITES AND A COKE AN HOUR AGO. IM FREAKIN HYPER

[AllyandFroggy]

wow brooke thinks hes going to leave! no!!!!

[snowfoxangel1996]

WoW. that was...WoW...

[madison50364]

To what you said about listening to sad things, I do something similar. When the two main characters have to argue, I totally get into character. I even cry at times. It's devotion to writing so props. And yeah, reading again. Haha.

[Janaaahaa]

I LOVE THIS SONG!

okay gonna read the chap

oh hahaaa, that's right, I sent it to ya hahaha xD

I thank myself for that cause I really really love that song!

you are not an idiot!

and they are not leaving cause nick IS going to be all perfect, if he isn't i'm come over there personally to .. I don't know what him (not gonna kill him hihi) yeah

..

like i could make anyone else coming.. hmm.. had to say that;)

[TheNickJonasFanatic1]

OMJ that was the saddest thing im actually crying right now!!!!!! wow....... you make it sooo realistic!!!!! and brooke shouldnt tell nick to back off!!!! he didnt do anything!!!! he wasnt trying to say goodbye!!!! he was trying to make her feel better!!!

[peacelovejonas916]

OHMYGOD!

NOOOO BROOOKE!

they cant leave!

nick didnt do anything!

[nonaboo208]

i luv this song

[peacelovejonas916]

haha your parents go to sleep at 9?

[NickJLovexo14]

i screamed! it is 9:10pm my parents are asleep and i did a ear piercing scream!!! im in trouble!!! :(

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

[xbeckiilovesjbx]

i did that with another chapter, at 2am. my mum thought she was having a dream. it all worked out well. no punishment. :)

[smileymiley12lol]

THE END WAS INTENSE WOW

[kmandze33]

Damn Summer had to think negative!! GAHHHHHHH lol she better not leave D: DAMN YOU ALLLLLLLL

GGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRR D:

[xoxogg77]

O my gosh that is just about the sadest thing i'v ever read *sniffles* it reminds me to much of my best friend shelby. her mother (who was hardly a mom) was always out late drunk. always bitching and screaming. had 2 kids by some1 other than shelby's dad, who he adopted. shelby and her dad just moved out of the house a few months ago, and i dont think any of shelby's siblings r in contact with their mom, though she sometimes calls drunk in the middle of the night. shelby has sworn to never drink

[coeyjbfan93]

but he didn't do anything!! he wasn't saying goodbye! why else would he be calling after her?

[Boycrazy7484]

ahhhh please post more!! (:

this is so good!!

[bratierocker71]

haha no problem thankyou for posting so much today!=]

[bratierocker71]

all of the chapters you posted today made me cry!

[Shay081793]

That's the greatest comment you can get as a writer :D Thank you soo much <3

[adventurous18]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! They can't leave!!! Nick obviously still loves her!!

[charmedangel95]

You are on my top five list of amazing fanfic writers. Can I have your autograph? lol and I don't think nick is mad l think he just feels for her and wants to be there for her. I hope Summer doesn't go back to New York, that would destroy Nick.

[x0MrsNickJonas11010x]

yeah i agree

[nltvfcjblover]

o

Thanks now I get it LOL i'm slow

[lydiaxo33]

ohhhhhh my frecken jonas this is sooooooooooo sad

[xOsEaNaOx]

nooo they cant leavee..

[arieljonasss]

nick's not mad.

he just reeeeally needs to talk to her.

she shouldn't have bolted like that to the bathroom.

[nltvfcjblover]

no she can't leave him but I really don't get it why is she mad at him .???

[Shay081793]

She's not mad at him :) She's upset. She thinks he's mad at her. :)

[cutierose1234]

*Gasp* Nooooo! Summmmmeerrr!

He's not breaking up with you...he's not going anywhere....noooooooo!

Sorry, I'm sad now lol Like seriously, them last words that Brooke said, hurt ME! haha Seriously, I kinda feel sorry for both Summer AND Nick.

Summer thinks he's leaving her, immediately jumping to what she expected in the first place,

and Nick, they'll just going to leave him. He didn't do anything wrong but love her!

No Emily! Make it right! Make it right! haha

Seriously loved this marathon! <33

[babybethdd14]

NOOOOOOO

they cant leave

don't be mad stupid people *tuts and shakes head in disapprovaly*

awsommeee XD

[jonasbrothersamazee]

oh wow

i dont think he would break up with her

cant wait for the next one : )

[MusicsINmySTRONGsoul]

this is sad:,(.....but he isent breaking up with her is her? he was just going to say it's ok.....right?

[jellyfingers23]

Wow, that was really good. I can't believe that happened too her. She better see sense and realise Nick hasn't broken up with her. I know it doesn't say they haven't but Nick wouldn't break with her because of something like that. Oops this comment wasn't supposed to be so long. Ah well!! Can't wait for the next one

[Shay081793]

I loooove long comments :D So I don't care it wasn't supposed to be so long ;)

[hoopz10195]

i need to know what happens next!!! post more!!!! please!!!!! i love this chapter uz you dont know if he's mad or trying to care??? so thats why i need to know, in the next chapter

[hoopz10195]

ahhh!!! IS Nick MAd or is he caring??? idk post more please!!!! I need to know what happens next

[mrsnickjonas27957]

nonononononno dont let them go back i want nick and summer 2 be like a really really sweet couple

[StacyLuvzNickJonas]

thanks for making me sad emily!

ive just got really happy cos my mum said she would get me a skateboard then BAM i read this and its gone :( joking :P

awesome chapter :) they shouldnt leave! nick still likes her.. well to me it seems like he does O.o

[irongirlstri]

OMG! That was so sad.

Don't get mad at Nick now! I think he wants to help her not brake up with her! He wouldn't do that!

P.S. I cryed, and I didn't have to watch a sad movie or read a sad book. I just read this. :)

[k2babyk2]

GASP!! omg brooke thinks nick is like brandon!!

oh NO dont LEAVE no no no!!!

GAH okay i need to breathe

JEEEZZ youre good!! hee hee

cant wait for the next post!!