Washing Patroklos

[medicinesocks]

Great work! Excellent poem.

[gusleonard]

Great stuff! My daughter brought your poem and presentation to school today and the entire 5th grade watched and listened. They are impressed that you actually wrote it all. They knew it was iamb 5-meter. And I told her I knew you--that really made her day! Thanks for all you do!

[Alicia7777777]

Impressive presentation.

[jalathrop]

Nice reading of Achilles speech upon learning of Patroklos death from "The Illiad" by Homer.

[glenfitch]

This speech written by ME to cover an omission by Homer.

[alienskaterfreak]

omg thank you

you gave me an idea on my monologue ^-^

[glenfitch]

glad I could help

take care

[helvis213]

Wonderful! 10 Stars!

I love your poem. It reminds me of Gilgamesh and Enkidu. A terrific production and I agree with brychar66, the writing is excellent.

Thanks for a true delight.

[samuelgodfreygeorge]

Great passion and tremendous depth in expression

[antnhec]

nicely done... very diff for a youtube vid... if you get a chance in uk we have had a series of essays on Radio 3 the BbC which looks at Greek artists and histroy, check it out on listen again.. very well done hope to see more.

[brychar66]

wow that was superb x 3! superb writing, reading & video. but superb writing above all. not many can give us true iambic pentameters as you have done: they impart an authoritative & ringing music to the piece.

[Theotokos86]

I like this. Very powerful and well written. Did you write this?

[glenfitch]

oh, yes, I wrote every iamb

glad you liked it

Now I need two hunky actors to do it,

one playing dead of course

Glen