hey thanks, yea we decided not to use cockney accents due to the fact there was no reason to use them and would've seemed out of place, as there's no reference anywhere to London.
I wrote this way before ' lock stock ' so didn't get influenced by their use of witty lines, which every body's got used too. This was meant to be more hard nosed but have more of a dark comedic irony, IE with the gun going off when it wasn't supposed too, so every thing just became messed up.
Not bad but it could have done with some good sound FX and the audio sorting...... Apart from that it was watchable....
juicedupmedia1 2 months ago
lol! That was awesome!
I loved the settings and lighting and tone. I think it could of been written slightly better perhaps? Some dialogue was a bit hit and miss.
But hey, i loved it! Have a look at the two gangster videos I've made - would love to hear your feedback!
TinyTim121 2 years ago
good, all it needed was cockney accents
and maybe some wittier lines
jackano11 3 years ago
hey thanks, yea we decided not to use cockney accents due to the fact there was no reason to use them and would've seemed out of place, as there's no reference anywhere to London.
I wrote this way before ' lock stock ' so didn't get influenced by their use of witty lines, which every body's got used too. This was meant to be more hard nosed but have more of a dark comedic irony, IE with the gun going off when it wasn't supposed too, so every thing just became messed up.
Appreciate your comments
sundancerhythm 3 years ago
Jonathan!!!
Love the film! =)
xoxoxo
Back when you had hair. ;)
Sheesh you guys say fuck a lot.
HAHA
trancebrat 5 years ago