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  • Bhaiya wenz da new vid cumin out?

  • soon inshallah little sister, after i finish my exams. it will be good man, you'll like it

    say hi to your baby sister (you know which one i mean) lol and everybody else too

  • gd cnt wait 2 see it- i betta be da first 1 tho lol

  • u no wah shohid luks sexccccc hehe hehe he noes hu dis is so itl all kool,

    na i like dis esp wen he gets up and the part wen he walks past the shop with help wanted =D

  • What the fuck was that? My eyes are bleeding. When did Reading become homofied? Now children, we have learnt many lessons here, but the main lesson here is don't smoke crack.

  • crack is jokes

  • Why did Abedin put on a fake accent? Sounds like he tried to suck on helium but didnt do it right lol... should have just used his normal voice it sounds creepy and demented enough as it is! ^_^

    Interesting vid.

  • wow zayn hu eva u are hope ur readin dis mate ma bro iz in luv wid u lmao holla t him sumtym init haha

  • get a life lubna

    LOL

  • Lmao dnt be tellin me 2 get a lyff u da 1 hu sed zayn iz a sexy bastard so ur callin him a bastard n ur sayin hes sexy so u lyk him so u must be gay...ryt?

    i alredy hav a lyf mate u needta get 1 u can liv up 2 u greased crap lol

  • i'm tellin ur mum

  • nooooooooooo srry srry sryyyyyyyy loozah

  • Ello "Dreamahhhh"'s brother

    LOL

  • ummm....hu da hell r u?? i ent dreamas bro am THEE dreamahhhh.....n waz dah menta be funny?...

  • well done on the great short.

  • great movie baya. how did you make that hand. or wait a minute did you really chop that guys hand off lol. but yh well done.

  • Lmao bhaiya dah vid iz jokes haha u lukd lyk a geek in it ahahaa n u call me a geek hmmm lol how did u make da hand??!! it scared da shit outa me i fort it waz real hahaa i bet u got it frm big cook little cook LMFAAOOO nahh am onli jkn lol

    btww huz da barman i swer i seen him sumwhere b4...hmmmm

    aiii sfeeee

  • the barman is adam!!

    safe for the comment...get your friends to watch it!!

  • that barman is a handsome chap. its good, i like it.

  • that's adam

    he's ok. bit weedy

  • this was really really well.

    btw: nice to see something of you ;D

    i like your vids a lot...

  • thanks dude

    i'll have some more up soon hopefully

  • Cinematography - excellent. 8/10 for the shots. You have obviously planned that well with storyboards or shooting lists. The image of a gritty England is captured well, whether intentional or not. The streets synch well with Shohids downtrodded character.

  • I feel that you should improve on the sound however. You can hear the hiss in the background of the voice. It's good practice nontheless but make sure you add some atmospheric sounds in the background. For example when Shohi is in bed, you could have put the radio sound on or a sound effect of a fridge etc. Because it sounds jumpy when it goes from one scene to another.

    And just to be picky, you pause Shohi and the guy with the pan on one side and then he gets hit from the other lol XD

  • Shohi's character is very relatable, Especially me. Jobs are hard to find. So i like that, plus he looked it with the bum look lol.

    The ending was gross and hilarious. I didnt expect that one bit. Reminds me of a GTA cutscene ha.

    Also, some shots did drag a bit. Like Shohi walking, reading newspaper - you should cut inbetween them, id say at least 5-6 seconds of each as we know what he is doing.

    Nonetheless good job. 7/10 for me.

    Keep it up.

  • thanks for the advice bro

    will take it in to consideration for the next video

  • ha ha zayn i ws da 1st  2 see it!!! very funny ur accent LOL n keep up da gud wrk guys!!

  • zayn is a sexy bastard ennit

    PSYCHE

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