Friend In Need, Friend Indeed - Contest Edit

[rhysie21]

Cinematography is better here then in the new one, although a few scenes were too dark (open up the iris more, then once it's down to 1/50, slow down the shutter), or obviously falsely lit.

The remembering scene would have been better if the white was a blur rather then white.

The change from the dream scene was really sudden.

The two shot is too sterile and wide.

The shot of the bottle was too obviously far (the person seemed to be like 6ft away from the bottle after dropping it).

[keyblade41]

wow dude way to put down his work.

he put effort into somethin and u point out every flaw in it.

way to be an asshole

[rhysie21]

It's called constructive criticism, it's so he evolves as a filmmaker.

Way to be a retard.

[fuckpreps717]

i liked it

[lostcause1071]

Are you using a boom mic? I suggest working on the audio quality beter and muting the video clips that do not have dialogue in them. Cool shots though.

[oiclolknoob]

exactly what i was thinking!!! Having good audio will make or break a film. this would be ten times better if you had invested in a boom mic. :/

[MEOSHABEAN1]

Nice

[sitreth]

Nice.

What does "Key Grip" mean? I'm listed. but I have no idea what I did...

[Ryan3078]

It means you helped with the lighting on set.

[sitreth]

cool

[runeshai]

Awesome, thanks a lot man! Looks great, hope it gets recognized in the contest!

[UrbanFreak273]

Nice editing man