Prophecy Of A Shattered Heart || Part 9

[ChemicalReactionProd]

My mom caught me watching the first episode. She enjoyed it, so she read farther. And now, she's beside me and she's like, "OHMYGOD, THEY DID IT!" And it was so hilarious. You, my friend, deserve a grammy. They should make this into a movie someday.

[princessaal]

It is so Rachel but I think Daniel is going to run down and explain that Ariana was cold so she came and slept over or something

[xxxsmileygirlxxxable]

@ x3Nelena I can't look part 10 because in germany it isn't allow. Can you do anything??

[dannasilva14]

1. when they did "it"

2.when he tells her he loves her

3. rachel !!

[juliee0602]

wheres part 10.?? i need it or im die of suspense.!!!

[x3Nelena]

@juliee0602 part 10 is out (: you'll find it on my channel!

[juliee0602]

@x3Nelena ok now im totally going to subricse now(: you totally deserve it.

[crazyhulahyperAVShow]

UPDATEEE PLEASE! this fan fiction is so good <3

[x3Nelena]

@crazyhulahyperAVShow Part 10 should be up tonight! :) and thank you for your kind words.

[crazyhulahyperAVShow]

@x3Nelena yeeees thank you! i love this story so much <3

[MsCrazy4ubabe]

where is the next one

[x3Nelena]

@MsCrazy4ubabe Part 10 should be up tonight!

[WorldOFJonasx]

1. When Daniel said he was in love with her!

2. Same as the first?

3. RACHEL. Who else? The Pizza man?

[charmed502]

There's waaaay over 60 comments, when's the next one?!

[FernandaM96]

Next plsssss

PART TEN!!!!! <3 plsssss

[HannahMontanaGirl111]

When is part 10 coming out???

[x3Nelena]

@HannahMontanaGirl111 Tonight! :)

[MsMusicfan13]

Hey, where is part 10???

[MsMusicfan13]

SOMEONE'S UNLOCKING THE DOOR!!! OH SHIT!!!! ITS RACHEL BABY!!!! DANIEL IS SCREWED!!! RACHEL WILL HATE ARIANA!!! ARIAN WILL DIE OF EMBARASMENT!!!! TENISHA AND JACOB WILL HOOK UP!!!!! :D I babble :)

[mischiefmanagedx3]

bro. i fucking love this story. please make more. or at least one more episode telling us how it ends. pleaseeee:) we need more. this is a lovely story by the way!

[aquafresh0]

please maker moerre, I LOVEEEEEEEE THIS = D

[funlovegames]

omg i love it, i want more !!!! xx

[Nellingtonsmithe]

OMGG,, your an amazing writer !

Nextt?? ;D <3

[NileyStayx3]

LOOOOOVED IT. Please, make more;D

[jessiesalzer]

when are u making another epi i love this series so ,much its been months

[ilyniley4ever]

1)when he said he loved her

2) EVERYTHING

3)Maid

[AnimeXgeek4ever]

EEEP! Please make more..... It's been a while :(

[nelenastory321]

Make next part soon :)) love this series! 

[nelenaloveforever67]

PART TEN!!!!!!

[starflower250]

1) when Daniel & Ariana are making love..

2)everything

3) Rachel

great seris...cant wait see the next one!!!

[mermaidloverx3]

i fell in love with this series ; plsmake part ten !!! :)

[YourMofcknBitch]

MAKE PART TEN ! YOUR KILLING ME HERE ! i need to know what happens, this is like my new obsession <3

[nelenastory321]

wow i fell in love with this series i first day i started watching it!

oh and please post the next one soonnnnnn!!!!

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

no rush lol :)

[EcilaCrown]

oh god i fell in love with this within the first ep and i LOVE this so much!! pls post the next soon!! =)

♥

[kenna93343]

K well idk what my fav line was but I sure hope it's not Rachel opening the door I'm afraid but I really want another episode

[Musicaddict1011000]

Damnnn,ii'm Likee Addictedd to Youur Storiesss[<3]

Nexxt Oneee,Youu ALreadyy Havee 90&Wihtt Thiss Onee Iss 91(;

[kenna93343]

Make a next one pleasssse

[starflower250]

cant wait for the next :D 

[WexHeartxUsFreaks]

Wow this is amazing. it rreally shocks me in how this so can be true. its amazing how you can do this. i tell you, youll be famous one day. as a writer which can catch and move peoples heart :/ you will kill me. <3

[BloodyNewtons]

AHHHH NEXT ONE PLEASE <3

[nelenastory321]

whens the next part coming out?!?!?!?!? LOVED IT! <3

[1PixiDoll]

OMG !! amazing

[nelenaloveforever67]

When r u posting?

[blueguitargurl]

I cannot wait for the next part.

I am waiting for my fix

:)

[Ritzroze1225]

its 80 comments, wen is the next one comin out?

[Gemz4LoganLerman]

Thats amazing pease upload the next one x

[aly1742]

aaahhh!!! that was crazy....please post the next one soon!!!!!!

[heytheresweetheartx3]

This series is AMAZING. I seriously am obsessed. i think its rachel who walked in..

[starflower250]

next one plz

[loganlermanhottest]

Please make the next episode

[peaceloveandmusicx3]

oh please update soon<33

their love is beautiful.

[Dyanaviera]

NEXT!

[nelenaloveforever67]

More!!!!!!!

[Chixierox]

1. i loved all of it but my fav part had to be when daniel said he loved her

2. "Damnit , Ariana! I'm in love with you!" ahaa so romantic and he's so sweet!!

3. Definately rachel.

i only want to see rachel and see what happens between them. I'm OBSESSED!!!! <3

[Nickmyboyfriendjonas]

1. i loved allllll of this :)

2. Damnit Ariana i'm in love with you!!

3. def. Rachel.

- just wondering whens the next one because im obsessed with this <3 :)

[HolaChicaAdios]

1.All of the vid

2. Damnit, Ariana I`m in love with you

3. Not Rachel. I hope

[nelenaloveforever67]

NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!­!!!!!!!

[cheleenblueangel23]

1. when... it started till it ended. haha.

2. "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you" so cute and romantic. :)

3. oh no! please dont let it be rachel :O

[newmoon629]

already more than 60 can you put the next 1 i can't wait any longer im excited!

[xsupermufffin]

1. Everything.

2. "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you."

3. Rachel.

[totallyrandomstalker]

omg. favorite series.

1. 0:00 - 8:03

2. like just about everyone else said. haha(:

3. rachel or jacob

[GhostGirlfriendsPast]

I just freakin' love this couple and there you go making me love it more than I possibly can!

1. Everything, it was too perfect.

2. "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you." - Romantic, he finally tells her!

3. Rachel

[Dyanaviera]

already more than 60!! U made me addicted to this!

[rileystar123]

1.I don't have one,everything was just too perfect!you have written this so perfectly!

2."Damnit,Ariana!I'm in love with you." he finally says what he feels<3

3.Rachel or Jacob I think

and I have to say,your an awesome writer!from the moment it began until the end it was perfect!And I'm honest right now:you made me cry!that doesn't happen really often when I'm reading a youtube story:)

and sorry my comment's a bit late but better late than never right?:D

[melubl]

I'm the comment number 60! You'll have to upload now! muahahah xD It was really good though... I love it when characters who are in love argue about the fact of being in love xD

[Selenaisawsome101]

Ahhh oh no if it's rachel everything will be ruined she'll hate her sister and as a good sister ariana would have to stop herself from being in love with daniel and and Just don't be rachel I beg of u

[newmoon629]

OMG OMG OMG IS IT GONNA BE RACHEL !

[SelenaMileyDemi100]

1. Everything!!

2. Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you! Because he finally let her know, that he loves her!

3. Rachel.

I love love love love this story!!!!

[elisin124]

i freaking love the story

[MsHannahGreen]

1. The whole "I love you - I love you too" thing (:

2. "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you."

3. Rachel. But I hope it's just the cleaner or Jacob.

And I just wanted to say that I loveeeeeeeeeeee the new intro..

I think I already said it but I lovee it so much that I had to say it again ;-)

[themichelletheresa]

OH CRAP OH CRAP OH CRAP!

[RAWRkatiex3]

1. The whole thing. But probably when he confesses that he loves her.

2. "This chemistry between us could destroy his place." because is so true.

3. rachel.

[nelenajemilove]

1) ending

2) "Im in love with you!" because he finally confesses

3) i really hope james, buts its probably rachel

[sarisjay]

NOOO PLEASE LET IT NOT BE RACHELLL!

1. Moment: When daniel said he loved her! <3

2. line: "This chemistry between us could destroy this place" IT WAS EPIC! and true... you could practically feel the emotions just reading it!

3. Rachel or jacob. Which sucks cuz i REALLY dont want it to be rachel!

[sofbalcrazy05]

1. Favorite moment? All the whole thing but probably the ending.

2. Favorite line? (why?) I agree "This chemistry between us could destroy this place" because it was seriously perfect with line ever!

3. Who do you think is at the door? Rachel or... a maid.

[L3xL3x1235]

1. The entire part love the way you lie was playin

2. "this chemistry between us could destroy"

[Taylenacutestcouple]

1) I loved all of it.

2) Selena: "You ... you love me?" Logan nodded. :) I just love them.

3) i think it's rachel.

[luvnelenaaa1]

1.Are you crazy about asking about a favorite MOMENT? I loved the whole thing! And now you made me to excited ;D

2. What @EllisinNetherland said "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you"

3.Either Rachel or Tanisha.

You've become my favourite writer on youtube :) I remember I used to love nishitaa1, but you changed it.

[RockFreakx3]

- ALL OF IT. this whole episode made me so darn happy (:

- ''this chemistry between us could destroy this place!'' hell yes. daniel and ariana forever.

- rachel? dear lord, please don't let it be her.

[EllisinNetherland]

1 the whole episode(l)

2 damnit arianna! Im in love with you! That was soo romantic(l)

3 rachel, i think

O i just love this!! I hope you get enough comments en upload the next one soon!

[missaretta97]

aww i lovedi it!!!!

[shazziexzx]

Amazing as always! I think it could to Tony at the door...

[xxsashiewashiexx]

HOLY MOTHER STUBBER this was AWESOME! OMG OMG OMG . this is such an AWESOME series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT EPI :D

hehe

hmmm

1. when they both said they loved each other ;D

2. hmmm............ idk the whole thing? :P

3. DANIEL'S FIANCEEEEEEE ;D

[mrsjoejonas4578]

OH SHIZNIT. O_O

[loveuubabyx]

woah!!

[jobrosaremylife68]

Love it!!! <33

[XXWhiteHorse3XX]

1. It had to be the whole episode! <3

2. "Damnit, Ariana! Im in love you you,"

3. It has to be...Well, I think it'd be,, Racheal.. O.o

Oh my gods, I should have been on...10 hours ago?EXCATLY when you posted it xD I still seriously screamed when I saw it my subscriptions again... <3 This story is my obession, and I hope you give us a marathon since it's almost Christmas! :D :D :D Not that I expect you to, just an idea *nudge, nudge* xD

I jjust..like LOVE you and this story! :D :D :D <3

[SarahGmusic]

I screamed when i saw this in my subscription box lolz

1. pretty much the whole episode :) daniel and ariana!! <3

2. dammit ariana! i'm in love with you!

oh daniel x]

3. could be anybody. either way they'll get caught . oppies!

[HehehePeace]

At the end I want all gaga! haha

1. When Daniel said 'I love you' to Ariana :) And when they were fighting.

2. "Dammit, Ariana! I'm in love with you," he snapped and continued on, letting yet - again - his heart speak to him. XD

3. =o Rachel? If it is then they're dead. Maybe it's one the guys.. or not.

Omg! I can't wait for the next one!

[crazyybeautifulx3]

1. The Morning After scene was EPIC.

2. I think you know already, when they both said they loved each other

3. I'm hoping its a maid. :/

Update soon, this story is like my addiction. ♥

[bellaloverr101]

1. He admitted he loved her

2. ' "What we did last night can not happened again. " His teeth clenched together. '

Thats hows he doesn't want it too stop. Even thought i hate him saying those words but what his actioans were afterwards is what the good thing is.

3. maid or rachel/:

[Dyanaviera]

who's at the door?????

[AnimeXgeek4ever]

1. EVERYTHING!!!

2. "Dammit Ariana I'm in love with you"

3. Rachel or some maid of somesort.

[jennlolena]

1. the whole thing

2."Dammit Ariana I'm in love with you"

3. its definatley room service lol

[nelenaloveforever67]

1. when daniel said he loved ariana

2. "Damnit Ariana! I'm in love with you!"

3. It's either Rachel or Jacob

[lOlEnAx3]

1.when they kissed after the argument

2."DAMiiT, i love you ariana" :D

3.TONY or JACOB

[GenieJonas1]

1. I honestly liked the arguing for some absurd reason

2. "Damnit Ariana! I'm in love with you!" ---- CLASS LINE.

3. I want it to be Racheal but it's probably gonna be Tony :/

[jennlolena]

@GenieJonas1 whose tony?!

[GenieJonas1]

@jennlolena you know, I've probably got the name wrong but i meant Nick's character cuse he was staying round with them, right?

[njplovesjb4life]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­!!!!!!!

DAMN YOUUUUU!!!

[xxmsfloraxx]

OH.

NO.

YOU.

DIDNT!

YOU DID NOT JUST END IT RIGHT THERE!!

HOW COULD YOU :)

[standbyurside12]

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH­HHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!

[xPanicItsAlexisx]

oh my gosh.

every time i see one of these in my inbox i seriously feel like yelling out 'FUCK YEAH.' seriously. these just make my day.

1) i like the end, when they're mad at each other but they kiss, it's so passionate.(:

2) "damn it ariana, i'm in love with you!"

3) rachel ! :D

[samsheable]

ahh! who's at the door?

[aylajonas]

OMG WHOS AT THE DOOR?

SO GOOD!

[zanessaforever101]

1. When they kissed at the end DUH

2."I'm in love with you" Writing beautifully

3. Rachel without a doubt

[JonasBrothersfan96]

AAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT??????????? UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! PLZ PLZ

1. when he said he loved her!!!

2. "I'm in love with you too" cuz i was waiting for to say it back!!! lol

3. Rachel.... dun dun duuunnn.

btw major props to u for writing a sex scene without sounding perverted and vulgar. I've read lots of fanfics that r very.... graphic lol u made it sound so romantic and perfect. congratulations.

[ChloesLife]

1. UMM hello the whole thing was amazing'

2. "DAMNIT Ariana I love you" that was the most beautiful thing i've ever read (you are an artist with your word)

3.Rachel...

[iMileySelenaDemi]

whoever opened that door, i hope falls in a hole.

1. when they tell each other they love each other :)

2. i dont even know, this story is just to amazing.

3. i'll be the odd one out, tony or probably just the maid or something. :p

ahhhhhhhhhh, crossed fingers for the next one to come out soon! :D

[DemiLavoto2009]

1. When he told her he loves her!

2."Of course your good enough..." I just love that because of the love and passion it holds in it!

3.I think it's Joe's character or maybe Ariana's sister?

[foreverNalwaysILY]

1.OMG WHEN THEY CONFESSED THEIR LOVE FOR EACHOTHER!

2. "I'm in love with you" he snapped and continued on, letting yet -again- his heart speak for him. <- that was deep and ahh you know its true because it came from this heart! <3 ahh! and i like died when he was all "this chemistry between us could destroy this place!" AHHHH!!!

3.the thing that is preventing them from being together :P SHE JUST HAD TO RUIN THE MOMENT!

[xstarzxforevax]

AHHHHHH! i LOVE this seriessssssssssssssss!

1.) When he admitted he love herr :P

2.) "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you [...] but I can't do anyhting about it, I can't...I"

3.) Rachel :/

[Teresasea]

Cute

[Romancechica1013]

Oh my God! You left us with a cliff hanger?! I love this storyline. You should totally write this story and get it published into an acctual book. I would totally read it. Hurry, hurry, hurry! Update it soon!

[MillyDeex]

CLEANER!

[dor3os]

I NEED A GOOD CAT FIGHT.. BE RACHEL O_O or Either be Anna or Jacob like comming to tell Daniel Rachel needs to talk to him and lol have Ariana hide. blahblahblah. i just want drama! lmfao.

[1914051109x]

NOOOO ! RACHEL BACK OFF ! please let it be the pizza guy xD

AMAZING EPISODE !! MY FAVOURITE SO FAR XD

[xmarcelamoura]

all the arguing and the love together was waaaaaaaaay to good.

oh my god .. seriously! you killed me with this episode!

and well, you can continue doing episodes all about Daniel&Ariana, I love it, okay? hahaha :p this episode couldn't be better.. I LOVE YOU!!! haha :p

sorry if I'm way too weird is just that I'm kinda freaking out :D

I'm sooo hoping that it reaches 60 comments SOON!

thank you for this amazing story (:

[xmarcelamoura]

OH MY EFFING GOD!

aaaaaaaaaah this is the best . episode. story. writer. ever.

GOSSHH I don't even know what to comment ooooooh maaaaaaaannnnn

I'm freaking out this episode was all about their emotions, it was AH-MAZING!

you described it so perfectly, you're such an amazing writer!

1. at the end when she thought he wouldn't kiss her back but he did *O*

2. "Damnit, Ariana! I'm in love with you [...] but I can't do anyhting about it, I can't...I"

3. Rachel!

.. I am going to comment again ha /\

[KajenMayurKashSajan]

Oh btw.. I Frikin loved this!

Amazing job.

Worth the wait... :)

[KajenMayurKashSajan]

1. When he confessed that he loved her...

2. I like the dampness with heat line... Lol i dont remember the whole thing.. Its my iPod.! :)

3. Rachel umm or some person hes sharinf a room with or room service!

[anacatarinamillan]

Y DO U HAVE TO BE SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER?

YOU MAKE ME LOVE LOLENA EVEN MORE !

seriously, stunning !

1) the beginning

2) "It fucking metters a lot to me too!"

3) rachel !