um..it's a little choppy (tho i'm not familiar with original song.. so maybe it's supposed to be that way *shrugs*) for the "i want to fly well" (did i get that right *scratches head* ) i'd suggest maybe bringing it down an octave, you're holding it ok as in there's no screeching um but it's a little shocking on the ears.. not sure if that's coming out the way i mean it, but um, it feels that if it were a lil bit lower um it would flow a lot better *nods*
Thanks for the great response! The song is meant to be that high because it's really the chorus, and its supposed to be very pure. Sorry if I sound screeching xD Either A) its because my camera sucks. or B) because I suck :P
Also, with your advice on moving it down an octave, just some somgs really wouldn't work like that, and I do believe that this is one of them, since the main focus is hitting the higher register notes in here, but its a nice thought :3
again nice voice *nods*
um..it's a little choppy (tho i'm not familiar with original song.. so maybe it's supposed to be that way *shrugs*) for the "i want to fly well" (did i get that right *scratches head* ) i'd suggest maybe bringing it down an octave, you're holding it ok as in there's no screeching um but it's a little shocking on the ears.. not sure if that's coming out the way i mean it, but um, it feels that if it were a lil bit lower um it would flow a lot better *nods*
meishcreature 2 years ago
Thanks for the great response! The song is meant to be that high because it's really the chorus, and its supposed to be very pure. Sorry if I sound screeching xD Either A) its because my camera sucks. or B) because I suck :P
Also, with your advice on moving it down an octave, just some somgs really wouldn't work like that, and I do believe that this is one of them, since the main focus is hitting the higher register notes in here, but its a nice thought :3
SakuSongs 2 years ago
I'd opt with "A" *nods*
meishcreature 2 years ago