Awesome video! If you have some time, please check out my final project from film school, a sci-fi drama entitled "NUMERICA" inspired by Kurt Vonnegut's 2 B 0 R 2 B.
It tells the story of a young couple struggling to have a baby in a world where overpopulation is rampant. In fact, for every child born an adult must volunteer to die.
I thought the script was well written and enjoyable. It got across some great scope for the length and budget although this made it a little exposition heavy. If you rely on exposition you need good delivery which leads me onto my other points.
Poor sound, get actors, don't use a 20 year old and call him a war veteran. The ending when he attacked them was unnecessary.
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Awesome video! If you have some time, please check out my final project from film school, a sci-fi drama entitled "NUMERICA" inspired by Kurt Vonnegut's 2 B 0 R 2 B.
It tells the story of a young couple struggling to have a baby in a world where overpopulation is rampant. In fact, for every child born an adult must volunteer to die.
kevinmarkfilms 1 year ago
I thought the script was well written and enjoyable. It got across some great scope for the length and budget although this made it a little exposition heavy. If you rely on exposition you need good delivery which leads me onto my other points.
Poor sound, get actors, don't use a 20 year old and call him a war veteran. The ending when he attacked them was unnecessary.
The script carried it through though. Not bad.
SkyblueX10 2 years ago
pretty good i guess.
shurikenbrothers 3 years ago
A bit Matrix-like in the end...but pretty cool. Good job.
OffKeyMelody 3 years ago
hrmms.. so the posting thingy does work..
well, i may as well say how freaking good we are one more time! YAY US!
bwood1234qwert 3 years ago
How good we are? It's how good you were! One of the great scientist baddies of Australian low budget history :-)
KarlLEmmett 3 years ago
1100 views almost! we are the bomb shizzle! ...i'll be in my trailer..
bwood1234qwert 3 years ago
over 1000 views! sweet!
we are the bomb shizzle ... i'll be in my trailer..
bwood1234qwert 3 years ago
ENBRACE SIMPLICITY I LOVE IT
gabosie7e 4 years ago 2
Awesome! Glad you liked it :-)
KarlLEmmett 4 years ago
this was good, Great camera work and editing but didn't care too much for the acting. . .:)
make more!
peace
Unklesam650 4 years ago
I love Brendan!
conitabonita 4 years ago 2
Isn't he just awesome!!! Must convince him to be in another film.
KarlLEmmett 4 years ago