Do the Write Thing - Project Indirect, Project Direct

[kimshere2]

I loved it! You are a true talent. I think the phone symbolizes your willingness to communicate. Great Job...

[foxyoxy21]

cool baby!

[italk2youdotcom]

loved your film... very profound.

please keep creating

I added your film to my Project Direct Playlist. You can see it at my channel.

just to let you know one of he finalist "Waste Management" had a late entry Dec 16th. They included it anyway. So the contest rules were not really rules but instead an excuse to eliminate films they didn't like.

So goes the world of Sundance.

cheers

[IntrovertGuy]

Thanks so much Stan! :D

[trickywolffe]

my I please have 5:52 of my life back? I am probably too stupid to understand it so no offense I appreciate that it is difficult to make a video so congrats.

[IntrovertGuy]

Hey trickywolffe!

...sorry you didn't like it...

Thanks for watching & commenting

[kimo121212]

Congrats on this its really great story that keeps you thinking!

[phyn1]

Got this off facebook from my friend, glad I did :)

[mac50tsu]

Sorry but they aren't going to let u in since its late...otherwise I think u did very good!

[b0bb0b80]

Hey were you able to get in? Did they contact you?

[myu007]

A bit dark for me by cool story! :)

[kgb1050]

You sure can write a great story but maybe the editing cuts and lighting can be better

[kzee05]

Loved the ending with the baby, that is like a rebirth right?

[kic1014]

Pure genius :P

[IntrovertGuy]

wow! thanks! :)

[jrp2012]

I can't believe u got so many views but this film you did is very smart!

[pm5001]

There are some really good entries I saw but I think yours is the best of them all

[nat3007]

You should have entered earlier because I honestly think you would have a very good chance

[onxy006]

VERY thought provoking! lol

[pie200]

I got this link from my friend Jeanette do you know her?

[IntrovertGuy]

Hey! That's what I heard too :)

[mpw00]

I liked this one...non cookie cutter thats for sure

[paga]

audio a bit muffled but awesome film dude! I think u will win!

[ntit]

Your video editing could be better but your film blows away all the others i've seen conceptwise

[bnfx]

Enough respect to you! You got writing skillz

[bckq]

You really have a talent for character building in a short film

[Umpa]

Awsome entry, one of the best I've seen

[PetrucciFever]

Goes to my favs of course

[PetrucciFever]

Excellent storyline Cong! I love it! ;) Merry xmas my friend! I´ll get back to you really soon via email. Best Greetz, Julian

[IntrovertGuy]

Thanks a lot for letting me use your songs Julian!

And thanks for watching and favoriting the vid ;)

Hope to hear from you soon!

[juldora]

Your title is cool!! Do the "Write" Thing.. how you come out this idea?

[kimopee]

you stand a good chance for Project Indirect award!!

[alextuffrule]

Good Luck to your video!! hope you get the award from Project Indirect!

[bedrunka001]

I don't think the writer is still alive when the baby cry..

[caleyam123]

What is the message you try to deliver from your video?

[mimiyamap]

Awesome!! you are much better than me!!

[bossyasin]

why the man shot the writer?

[gabbyiy]

I believe the baby is crying due to the gun shot!

[jimmyp0]

the red phone mean the colorful of life?!!

[IntrovertGuy]

You can read the description...it says a few things about it

[kadeyuir]

how can i participate in the Project Indirect?

[IntrovertGuy]

Well I kind of made it up for myself just for myself so I can bypass the deadline :P

[DeXimE]

Nicey done Cong! Loved the little detail shots. It was Einstein who said that about imagination, right? I can see your point of view but Hollywood movies are primarily for entertainment, not many people want to see miserable live stories ;P There are some good movies out there with very sad ends tho.

[DeXimE]

Guess that should have been "life stories" lol

[IntrovertGuy]

Thanks for watching Dex!

Your comment reminded me there was that movie Misery where Kathy Bates said "It's for the best!" before sledgehammering James Caan's leg :P

[DeXimE]

lol ;P

I think it was 7even that gave me a real shitty feeling after watching.

[celestialsam]

I enjoyed your cuts :)

[IntrovertGuy]

Thank you Sam! That big hamburger cut really filled me up!

[ChitsReloaded]

Awesome job. Excellent video.

[IntrovertGuy]

Glad you liked it Chits!:D

[Da3vid]

Hey! I enjoyed watching your video. I 100% can relate to your video... its funny, my submission was on a similar subject, just a different angle! Check it out, I think you'll like it. I like your framing on the shots. It sounds like your audio was recorded too quiet and there is a lot of gain added... you can smooth out your audio cuts by recording room tone and adding it over cuts. Good work over all, also check out my submission!

[IntrovertGuy]

Thank you for watching and for your feedback Da3vid! :)

[lawrencechenfilms]

nice job dude, wish u were part of the contest!

check out my film On Vacation

[lawrencechenfilms]

thanks for the comment! how you get so many views in like 2 days?

[IntrovertGuy]

I spammed YT with "Hey! I like your vids. Want to do view for view?" comments

j/k :)

[IntrovertGuy]

Thanks Lawrence Chen Films!

[squisypimp]

Beautiful ending

[IntrovertGuy]

Thanks for watching all my films squisypimp!

[CellarDoorFilm]

holy shit, u did get alot of views in such a short little time. lol congrats.

[IntrovertGuy]

Thank you!

[IntrovertGuy]

Hey there Wormie!

Thank you for the nice comment and respect!...and for watching too!

The Project Indirect I created myself so I can enter indirectly into "Project Direct" lol :P

[worm2glow]

Great writing!! Respect. kinda socio-critical. and yes, nowadays it's all about "selling dreams". You covered that pretty well. Gotta check that Project Indirect thingie now...