Jathia's Wager Open Soure Science Fiction Movie in HD

[cpuwrite]

As a writer and a novel editor, I have always believed that good conflicts make good stories. This story has no antagonist, and thererfor no conflict.

When a story has no antagonist, or the antagonist is a pushover, and the conflict is provided through infighting among the protagonists, I call this disease of the story "McCaffery Syndrome," after a Fantasy Novelist with that name.

This has that problem.

No space to explain how to fix it. Out of characters remaining.

[deannashm]

Very creative, great quality too!

[J99Jamz]

Really cool story line, somehow seems kind of plausible making it engaging. Nice job!