KING PETER'S WIFE, WARRIOR OF NARNIA... PLEASE COMMENT

[trendyv]

xena?????????????

[008Serenity]

Peter doesn't ever get married.

[fantasyfreakXD]

@008Serenity ... yah i know its a FANFIC!

[SydneyBristow447]

Haven't read the fic, but from the looks of the vid, I'd have to say your character seems to be a bit of a Mary Sue...

[ayamayofthesand]

Your fanfic sounds like something I might read. Great job. Hey check out mine if you would. You dont have to just wanna get mine out there. The trailer is up here on youtube. Just check out my videos its called the True Narnian Prophecy. Otherwise great great job!

[sunpawspadpaws]

So did you write that yourself? It's very good and so tragic, but at the same time happy when they meet again*Applause*

[randomclash]

i read it and its good

[peterfreak7]

i felt really bad for aella. her mother being the white witch and all, but i had to say i could see that coming. i love that you didn't change the way peter acts. i have read a lot of versions of narnia and peter always is gets married or something like that, but they always change who peter really is. i love that you didn't change him. he is so sweet

[peterfreak7]

hey belive me i know but it was great

[peterfreak7]

hey i read your story and thought it was great. i infact do have my own version of narnia. it dosn't iclude any romance in it and it isn't on the internet. but i just wanted to say that i enjoyed reading the story i've read it twice. but no offence it isn't as good as the original

[fantasyfreakXD]

nothings as good as the original. ever. thats how fanfics go

[Dearheart42]

Two words: MARY SUE.

[fantasyfreakXD]

...?

[ConzSis]

I read the fanfic after watching your tralier they are both wonderful and I really enjoyed them and have faveroted both of them. Grate job, well done

[fantasyfreakXD]

thank you!!!!!

[xxdaniiellee]

that sounds good. :] really good.

i dont think your links are working.

[mazzwillrocu]

i want a full blown epic trailer

[HiddenBeauty]

Good, but you might want to tone down your characters powers a little. If you make her to perfect the story is ruined.

Like, Ali from the Karate kid.

Good potential of a story, though.

[fantasyfreakXD]

believe me, shes not perfect

[HeartofNarnia]

Sounds cool.

[EriksSecretRose]

Heh. Master of four elements, Peter better be careful not to make his wife angry.

[fantasyfreakXD]

hee hee read the story and ull c why

[earogonsbabe]

i read the hole thing and it makes no sense to me i love the video but it is so strange

[fantasyfreakXD]

what doesnt make sense?

[dimeandslenearock]

i don't know exactly but it seems so odd he would be married

[fantasyfreakXD]

i didnt think so... peter's very passionate about narnia... in fact hes passionate in about everything he does. whether its the fighting, or defending his siblings, i think hes just passionate. i thought people would see that better in this story.

[tinasattler1]

this looks neat