A good deal of this film is awkward, and not in the way I think you intended. The utter silence is eerie and only marginally effective. I'd like to see this with a musical backdrop. I think the potency of sound might emphasize the situation and make the story more clear. Some of the close-ups are great, but overall, the cinematography could be much better. Overall, this is nice, but I've seen better work from you. I would rate this video a 7/10.
Good cut on action although I felt there were some pretty bad jump cuts and some edits that could be tightened up. The premise was good but the fact that it was set in an elevator made for some long points in the film. Guy in the middle was great. And... um... did I see Mong?
A good deal of this film is awkward, and not in the way I think you intended. The utter silence is eerie and only marginally effective. I'd like to see this with a musical backdrop. I think the potency of sound might emphasize the situation and make the story more clear. Some of the close-ups are great, but overall, the cinematography could be much better. Overall, this is nice, but I've seen better work from you. I would rate this video a 7/10.
shinoayeka 3 years ago
Good cut on action although I felt there were some pretty bad jump cuts and some edits that could be tightened up. The premise was good but the fact that it was set in an elevator made for some long points in the film. Guy in the middle was great. And... um... did I see Mong?
mysteryboxfilms 3 years ago
pretty cute!
SophiaMarie92 3 years ago
ahh its sooo quiet lol but that emphasizes the dramaticness lol
scificharacter93 3 years ago
First comment! I liked the vid. I'm a sucker for that dated-film look and some of the close-up shots were cool.
R3pL1cant 3 years ago