Scorpion - Oriental Space TRAPARA トラパラ テクパラ DANCE ダンス

[cherriesandwine]

no no no, practice more before you put your vids on youtube..your legs are too spaced out, try to make them more at shoulder length..and the arm and hand movements are sloppy..like your drunk or something. try to gain some kind of energy about yourself, your energy just looks dead..

and i know this seems like your first video, but all your other para para vids look like this..

work on it!!

[chiaki13]

sweet! love you clothes :D

[fluffieball]

Try to remove all the audio for the video next time and montage the song into it. You can hear the song good and their won't be distracting sounds in your video. This would really improve your video because your dancing isn't bad but it's just because the sound etc. It's easy to do~You can use a simple program like windows movie maker. Hope it helps ^^

[kris84545]

thanks, was the first time, that i film it ,so for me its a start;), any tips or advice for me

[KaruraHikaru]

@kris84545 you have to define the moves D:

I didn't see anything

[chiaki13]

@kris84545 you hands watch them... they need to go a bit higher :D and don't move your legs to much, they are a bit to far from each other. Just concentrate on you hands the other parts of the body shouldn't move too much :)

[Mafuraai]

Not very well danced...