I find it extremely cool. I liked the car alarm shot--very realistic, good camera work. Good acting on the part of Erica--nervous but determined. Makes me want to learn the back story, and what happens next--and isn't that the mark of a good short? Something that makes you want to know more? It certainly got my interest.
The key scene was necessary because keys were a mandatory prop. Obviously the gun was a horrible prop but I guess A for u for stating the obvious and I believe the description says alot needs to be fixed..
@gungrave4ever We thought we had a good gun before we begin shooting, but we couldn't find it. SO we had to use that crappy piece of shit. We had different mics set up for each person thats why the sound is weird. And the shots where the guy is talking were really dark due to the lighting we had so we had to color grade it in post. The car explosion was the main thing we had to get done before anything else, but when we were approaching the deadline we couldn't fit anything else.
I find it extremely cool. I liked the car alarm shot--very realistic, good camera work. Good acting on the part of Erica--nervous but determined. Makes me want to learn the back story, and what happens next--and isn't that the mark of a good short? Something that makes you want to know more? It certainly got my interest.
tkarnold 1 year ago
the shooting looked fake
sorry rest is really awesome man
dierenfreak10 1 year ago
@gungrave4ever Gotcha, Ill keep all of this in mind. Thats for your criticism.
hispanicmonkey68 1 year ago
Oh and believe it or not, That wasn't an alarm clock, The car really does beep like that when the keys are still in the ignition.
EricaWritesMusic 1 year ago
The key scene was necessary because keys were a mandatory prop. Obviously the gun was a horrible prop but I guess A for u for stating the obvious and I believe the description says alot needs to be fixed..
EricaWritesMusic 1 year ago
@gungrave4ever We thought we had a good gun before we begin shooting, but we couldn't find it. SO we had to use that crappy piece of shit. We had different mics set up for each person thats why the sound is weird. And the shots where the guy is talking were really dark due to the lighting we had so we had to color grade it in post. The car explosion was the main thing we had to get done before anything else, but when we were approaching the deadline we couldn't fit anything else.
hispanicmonkey68 1 year ago