I'd LOVE to go to NYFA... Too bad I live in Australia :(
I thought it was a good film for your first try, and as IamThevshi so blatantly pointed out some typical beginner mistakes, it's good to know what not to do when making a short film next time, although I would've cut back on the swearing... :D
I like to feel sexy....knowing someone is watching me ..wanting me...turns me on!BADLY! I like to flirt and pose..and sometimes i like to get WILD! how? ..he he..come in video and youll see:-)) maybe u can teach me something..or maybe i will ! come visit me at - MeetYourFling _dot_ COM - my user-id there is fianna-hwwm chat soon on cam :-) bvjpzk
MY God dude ... it was my first time making a short film, its not suppose to be perfect ... it was to make us get our first experience at filming. And obviously it is COMEDY ... not everything is suppose to be taken seriously
I'd LOVE to go to NYFA... Too bad I live in Australia :(
I thought it was a good film for your first try, and as IamThevshi so blatantly pointed out some typical beginner mistakes, it's good to know what not to do when making a short film next time, although I would've cut back on the swearing... :D
Was this one of those Summer Courses they run?
skyangel102 2 years ago
Thank you! And yeah, looking back at these big mistakes, I just gotta laugh at myself for missing them, but it was my first try.
Also, yeah this was one of those 1-2 week summer courses.
RastaBwoy 2 years ago
nice
myhappylozez 2 years ago
I like the visual of the crowd in a line following the guy. Nice.
JackHL 3 years ago
BADDDD! =]
[as in good of course!]
rly talent u r David!
MimO1414 3 years ago
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I like to feel sexy....knowing someone is watching me ..wanting me...turns me on!BADLY! I like to flirt and pose..and sometimes i like to get WILD! how? ..he he..come in video and youll see:-)) maybe u can teach me something..or maybe i will ! come visit me at - MeetYourFling _dot_ COM - my user-id there is fianna-hwwm chat soon on cam :-) bvjpzk
FirefighterSON 3 years ago
RASTABWOY keep them coming! <3<3<3
laurajmccann 3 years ago
just wana ask you written any plot segmentation??
kven148 3 years ago
????????????????
JENSSCHLAU 4 years ago
And jesus christ, you can see the actors waiting for someone to say action at the beginning of some of the running shots.
By the way, what the hell is going on?
IamThevshi 4 years ago
MY God dude ... it was my first time making a short film, its not suppose to be perfect ... it was to make us get our first experience at filming. And obviously it is COMEDY ... not everything is suppose to be taken seriously
RastaBwoy 4 years ago
WELL FUCK PANCAKES, OKAY?!
IamThevshi 4 years ago
In the pan shot with the dramatic music THERE IS A FUCKING CAMERA ON A TRIPOD IN THE BACKGROUND. WTF?! wow pay attention to what is on the screen!
IamThevshi 4 years ago
Fine, except for the framing - its really loose, as is the shot composition in general. A few continuity issues as well.
IamThevshi 4 years ago
wow... this is great... I really like it! xD lol xD
MusicIsMyLovePaula 4 years ago
wtf
woodleggy4 4 years ago
another great vid. keep um comin boy
thatgerltruxi 4 years ago
where did u get that song please tell me i reall want it the one in 1:40
pablopenguinking 4 years ago
just search for one winged angel on limewire u should find it
RastaBwoy 4 years ago
that was really cute.
cheermedown 4 years ago
amazing
killerdown 4 years ago 2
This is great!
kadestuart 4 years ago 2
lol alil random buh its gud id never have the brains to do summat lyk that lol xx
xdarlOxgalx 4 years ago
lol thanks alot
RastaBwoy 4 years ago
no propz :p
xdarlOxgalx 4 years ago