stuff's aight. I saw some newer stuff and saw you were trying to slow down and work on flow. I got that lot myself when I first started spitting, but I learned if the speed feels natural do it. Ain't gotta work on slowin down, just picking up the recital speed while maintaining the flow. thanks for the friend add.
Genius. your lyrics and rhymes are absolutely amazing. Favourite lines: "You cant push coexistence on the knowledge of youth" and "i manipulate & fabricate your very persistence, calculating the distance from this to the end of existence"
Good stuff dude. I would only say be a little more clear.
you have a different style of rapping because you rap quick and its like every other word rhymes which can be good depending on the person who is listenings taste.
"...then Im going down like Clay in The Wire" - I love how I get that line now :)
PaperRosesx 6 months ago
This is a pill of fucking dogshit. wow!
MrsElebella 8 months ago
nice sweatshirt
xcarroll03 1 year ago
its not a pile of shit... a pile of shit is what i drop in the toilet and this isnt that for sure XD
TripleHeadedSheep 1 year ago
@TripleHeadedSheep Umm, thanks lol.
JackMoranRain 1 year ago 2
nice dude sick lyrics. keep it up
50bukz4lyfe 1 year ago
THIS GUY IS HOT GARBAGE
bill1000able 1 year ago
yhu suck bitch
bill1000able 1 year ago
كل زق طيب
ABOOFNOON 1 year ago
Dude, I don't even like rap, but if this one is really yours, I gotta tell you, you have some real talent there, keep posting vids :) Subbed
mynsky 1 year ago 3
@mynsky r u fuckin crazy this shit sucked ass
bill1000able 1 year ago
dude keep it up mann thats ill mann no bull shit
heli666tama 1 year ago
your good but your more of a poet than a rapper you dont have to rhyme every word lol
opgangsta1193 1 year ago
stuff's aight. I saw some newer stuff and saw you were trying to slow down and work on flow. I got that lot myself when I first started spitting, but I learned if the speed feels natural do it. Ain't gotta work on slowin down, just picking up the recital speed while maintaining the flow. thanks for the friend add.
UnknownCrypt 1 year ago
anyone can write this sheee, its takes skill to freestyle
indoodubly 1 year ago
Yeah Boy I'M GOING DOWN LIKE CLAY ON THE WIRE!!! :D
shieeeeeeet!
Bananarepublicboy 1 year ago 2
Wow, thanks. I'm glad someone finally caught the Wire reference. Greatest tv show ever.
SHIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEET!!!
JackMoranRain 1 year ago 2
nice where you from ??
lbakajoe 2 years ago
Genius. your lyrics and rhymes are absolutely amazing. Favourite lines: "You cant push coexistence on the knowledge of youth" and "i manipulate & fabricate your very persistence, calculating the distance from this to the end of existence"
JamesDeansGirl1 2 years ago 4
your good u sound like immortal techique and flow is like him dats wats up u speak the truth
edwardtoys22 2 years ago 6
Good stuff dude. I would only say be a little more clear.
you have a different style of rapping because you rap quick and its like every other word rhymes which can be good depending on the person who is listenings taste.
Good work :)
EgliLika314 2 years ago 3
Whoa!
Easterknight2461 2 years ago 5