IELTS Written essay from start to finish (part 4 of 4)

[vineethsn]

Thanks Ryan. Much appreciated. I never knew how to write an organised essay. Now I saw a live example how to organise an essay.

Cheers,

Vineeth

[iamtapu]

one of the best instructions for practising writing for IELTS but I have a feeling this essay has less then 250 words.

as far as i know, Less then 250 words is one of the criteria to loose marks

[MrQbanboy]

Thanks for all your help Ryan...

[yashu471]

thanks ryan it really helps us alott... should i giv u ma queries will u answer it...???

[EnglishRyan]

@yashu471 Hi Yashu471,

Yes, you can join my online course and email responses directly to me. For more information, please visit my blog.

[bauyrzhanable]

Thank you very much Mr. Ryan. You really did good job!

[vannikyo]

thanks........ ^_^ now i can make more organised essays heehhe

[234KARTIK]

excilient

[blondetaste]

Hi Ryan, I definitely want to thank you for the videos. However, I feel like the essay is pretty much a repeat of 2 main points- convinient and tastier and feel that the examiners will take this as a repeating sentences and mark the whole thing down. Any suggestions would be great. Thanks.

[daffody]

Ryan, which is the best way to enrich your vocabulary fast in order to write a good essay? I feel like I don't have enough extra vocabulary to express myself.

[daffody]

Thanks a lot for this helpful information. Hope to do well on the day of the test which is at the end of July!

[dsalahe]

thanks a lot

u are such helpful person

[AfghnRonaAkbari]

sir u have said that shouldnot use subjuct pro in our eassay than why u use i in this eassay. this eassay is all about myself why??????????? plsss sumbody ans it

[MyKatherine12]

Thank you very much, I am really appreciated your help

[0imli]

brilliant job Ryan. Keep it up.

[saimawaheed07]

An excellent video. Essay writing concepts are very much clear.

[ramadan1985]

Thank you so much :)

[thinkingalotLOL]

thanxxxxxx

omg i have my ielts test tmw and i was so confused about the steps for a good writing

you actually guided me to the best :)

thats was so helpfulllll

[ramalov]

Perhaps i was thinking the way u think. I got the answer after reading the question over and over again (one is never gonna lose if he concentrate on question while reading it). I got him, i got him why did he do that. Why did he use Personal pronoun all over.

[ramalov]

Miss sinajasmin, U gonna have a closer look at question first, a deep look. May be u ill understand how did Mr. Ryan used personal pronoun. Mind you, Answers are always in the questions, but a strong concentration to get a good hold of that question is required. I m sure he did it, he made it happen.

[SinaJasmin]

Dear Ryan, thanks for taking the time to teach others! There is one thing that came into my mind when I watched this video. It may be wrong for IELTS, but stating a personal preference is not called a thesis itself. For me, a thesis is some kind of claim. In this example "I prefer to go out instead of cooking for myself because eating in a restarant is more comfortable." Simply saying that you prefer sth is not a thesis for me.

[youravidfan]

Hello Mr Ryan, thank you for your tutorial. It's really helpful and your lesson is very detailed. You are a very good teacher. You are my idol!

[molihua2008]

very good job!!! been so worried coz i'm in china's obscure city, can't find a decent english book but finally, turned to you tube and i found you..thanks so much..i hope i'll do well..

[EnglishRyan]

Hehe thanks for the comment! Which obscure city are you in?

[molihua2008]

hi, i see you're here in china also, anyway, i am working as a nurse in an orphanage here in xinyang, south of henan province. been wanting to do the ielts exam for the 2nd time, i got a 6.5 in writing and so i want to take the exam again, maybe it'll be better..got hooked up in your videos..really nice..xie xie nin

[AinurAdeBlckDI]

This was Awsome! great job! Thanks so much. Ive been searching for the essay's plan n now i found it! Hope, ill get my 7 band and more! Also, good luck to ALL condidates! May we have God's smile on those days! Amen! :]

[usher1111111]

very helpful, thank you.