Fuck brez0991. It's backward. You are not relaxed enough. The material needs tweeked, but the motif is fresh and intact. What you need is a series of ten minute spoken word pieces, shot in black and white. It's the presentation that is flawed. Let your jokes make babies, and raise them as your own.
all of your jokes were not funny, whose are? but you have a nice and easy relaxed delivery. and the jokes which were good, were very good and inventive. keep plugging away. you CAN do it.
Some of those jokes took too long. A long trip for a cheap laugh. Shorten them up.
RevDrWally 1 year ago
Fuck brez0991. It's backward. You are not relaxed enough. The material needs tweeked, but the motif is fresh and intact. What you need is a series of ten minute spoken word pieces, shot in black and white. It's the presentation that is flawed. Let your jokes make babies, and raise them as your own.
-------Mike Hall
outlawscumfuck667 2 years ago
all of your jokes were not funny, whose are? but you have a nice and easy relaxed delivery. and the jokes which were good, were very good and inventive. keep plugging away. you CAN do it.
brez9091 2 years ago