(contin.) also, the audio was really well cut, but i kinda think it could have been a lil smoother in transitioning between shots.
this is ur film though. so some of my suggestions might step on some things u did on purpose. i don't mean to offend at all.
i love how in every shot it looks like u didn't limit urself to ur surrounding. and having no dialogue... that's one of my favorite kind of techniques. playing on all the visuals. great job!
This was the final project for a beginning film class. While I believe I progressed since the first project, I am by no means a serious filmmaker. It was also shot in 3 days with limited time, locations and equipment.
Thank you for the criticism though :) It is much apprieciated.
(contin.) also, the audio was really well cut, but i kinda think it could have been a lil smoother in transitioning between shots.
this is ur film though. so some of my suggestions might step on some things u did on purpose. i don't mean to offend at all.
i love how in every shot it looks like u didn't limit urself to ur surrounding. and having no dialogue... that's one of my favorite kind of techniques. playing on all the visuals. great job!
akaneo17 2 years ago
This was the final project for a beginning film class. While I believe I progressed since the first project, I am by no means a serious filmmaker. It was also shot in 3 days with limited time, locations and equipment.
Thank you for the criticism though :) It is much apprieciated.
thorton2006 2 years ago
wow! this is excellent considering ur position! that's really kool!
and ur welcome :)
akaneo17 2 years ago
veeeeeery nice. i love the eerie feel to it.
i feel like the ending could of have some closer with the guy's girl that he got the ribbon from (correct me if i'm wrong).
tip: if ur trying to do a serious film, don't use auto settings on ur camera. it destroys the look of some shots.
akaneo17 2 years ago
Nice ending
Darnack7 2 years ago