But seriously the beginning bit was SO long, I mean that was time wasted, you literally showed EVERYTHING a person does when they wake up in the morning. The cop should've had like pictures of the man he was chasing all over his bedroom to show he was obsessed with the bad guy.
AND LOL@YOUR TEACHER WALKING IN then your stupid friend gave it away by looking at the camera. I want to watch more!
@MyUsedTissue he's in his room why would he have pictures of the suspect all over his wall? Wouldn't it make more sense if he had info at the station wich he did with his file? and we never went to acting school so sorry about the small mistake, And the intro was so long because it builds suspense no point getting straight into it without a understanding of the story. Thanks for the feedback.
@scrambaldfilmsJosh Don't actually know, he seemed like he was obsessed with the villain. Still great story you did a great job. Shame Malcolm's too lazy to do any more movies.
As if you haven't got a part 2!
But seriously the beginning bit was SO long, I mean that was time wasted, you literally showed EVERYTHING a person does when they wake up in the morning. The cop should've had like pictures of the man he was chasing all over his bedroom to show he was obsessed with the bad guy.
AND LOL@YOUR TEACHER WALKING IN then your stupid friend gave it away by looking at the camera. I want to watch more!
MyUsedTissue 1 year ago
@MyUsedTissue he's in his room why would he have pictures of the suspect all over his wall? Wouldn't it make more sense if he had info at the station wich he did with his file? and we never went to acting school so sorry about the small mistake, And the intro was so long because it builds suspense no point getting straight into it without a understanding of the story. Thanks for the feedback.
scrambaldfilmsJosh 1 year ago
@scrambaldfilmsJosh Don't actually know, he seemed like he was obsessed with the villain. Still great story you did a great job. Shame Malcolm's too lazy to do any more movies.
MyUsedTissue 1 year ago 2
lol @ joel
DizzeeRaskalGB 1 year ago
lol at the very start, harry's name is spelled wrong
steveclews 1 year ago
cant wait til the 2end part i wounder whats gonna happen...
ANDREWAPTED 1 year ago
Really good film much better than your past films, keep up the good work can't wait to see part 2.
Guyyouwishyouwas 1 year ago
wow
breadman2k1 1 year ago
pro film best so far !!
joelakuman 1 year ago 4
I want part 2 Now!
Good work
wowwows 1 year ago 4
Awesome man!
scrambaldfilmsJosh 1 year ago 5