Good progression..... Good hook in the chorus.... Got the message but try to thin down the verbage and the amount of syllables to be more direct with your audience..... Good voice.... Do more!
deanrasik 2 years ago
Good progression..... Good hook in the chorus.... Got the message but try to thin down the verbage and the amount of syllables to be more direct with your audience..... Good voice.... Do more!
deanrasik 2 years ago