Sasusaku Naruhina school trip doujinshi part 1

[AHisenaj]

I love it :D

[girly4542]

It cool

[kenyamoise]

Kool video

[freeleela]

Great job on the english only 1 mistake but ur drawing WAS AWESOME and i also like how u made hinata pissed ino x sai sakura x sasuke hinata x naruto 4evaaaa

[superkiera100]

I really liked it! You are great at drawing and your English is quite good too. Although next time try to not move the picture all the time, it is harder to read then. Keep up the good work!

[RannySkittlez]

^-^! -3

[creechick123]

I love this

[nator267]

the fight at 2:51 reminds me of school today

someone got a tabletennis bat in the head and another one got punched in the head... it was a fun day^^ lol

[2getha4eva2]

Grammar check: It's "Tried" not "tryed". "Baka" not "Baga" Hahah<3 But those mistakes were most likely typos. P:

Interesting doujin btw. It's kinda funny how this Hinata is totally opposite than in actual Hinata. ^^

[7hYShoT7]

i figured out what u have problems with, (hands) i am a good manga artist, i couldnt draw em either, so i just avoided them like u do :) but i love the idea creativity and i am watchin part 2 :)

[narutofan37211]

"omg now we all know never get hinata angrey right children."(techer)

"YES Sensei!" (students)

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^u^

[misanimeobsessed]

sa-nap hinata u r very .....  powerful to say the least but in a very good way yay love it i really do its way better than anything i could hav drawn yay fur you

<3 suki uchiha <3

[mrby90]

Darn hinata's Rock'in by cursing at karin!! If i had this many thumbs but i give it a mill or more thumbs up!! ^_^

[MsYummyYumyums]

Lol this is really good ^^

[krisy39]

wow i love ur drawing they are really good :)

[sexxibhaddgirl]

Lol! Hinata What Has Sakura Done To You? I Love Them As BFF! Hinata Tell That B*** Off!!!

[missunstoppable101]

HINATA:*HIT KARIN WIT A BRICK*TAKE DAT SLUT

[sexxibhaddgirl]

@missunstoppable101 lmao

[Bambii969]

Like 4realsz itsz toooo fast'/:'I can barely read it and i have to pause it alot of timesz'!!!!!

[andreea8997]

awsome !!!!

[KibaIsACutie]

This is awesome wayy better than what I could of drawn!!:) I totally agree with KuroTorilsme. Hinata has a mean evil side that is awesome

[KibaIsACutie]

This is awesome wayy better than what I could of drawn!!:)

[iamtheanimelover01]

hides in closet: Hinata is very scary in this.

[sasusaku5naruhina]

wow i haven´t seen this for a while

but wow it´s really cool!!!! :D!!!!!

yeiiih love it!!

[elisabedkawai]

how could u do something as good as this? its ur first and its really good! continue drawing and you will be better :D its amazing!! thank you for your work! ^^

[p34c3b4by]

its great for ur first comic :D

[16YuukiKuran]

i loved it soo much

[slayita]

it's perfect i love it .......................XD

[MEOMExVIP]

omg!!! can't wait what happens next!!

great doujinshi :D

[squishyXinXhevan101]

awesome job! =D

[randomer1996]

love it and the drawing u got skill

[Dark21Lunna]

i love it! make more please.

[YurikaGinga]

cool! nice drawings! wish I could draw that well *sighs* love it! ;D

[XDboogieroxyoursoxDX]

I HAVE TO PEE WEXTREMLY BAD BUT I WANNA WHATCH THIS VIDEO REALLY BAAAAAAD!!!! WHAT SHOULD I DO???...wait if i dont pee soon than my bladder will explode then i deffinitly wont be able to whatch this...OK IM GOIN PISS

[T01n33]

lol go hinata! lol i love ur drawings! there way better then mine lol well i like mine to but urs r friging awesome! ( yes i make up my own words lol idc if u peepcycles use them lol) 

[bumpsetspikewin18]

I'll watch this tomorrow or something...soemtime soon...I'll post another comment after I read it to tell you what I think :)

[TheCutemurder]

Love it ^ keep it up

[Misssexciebitch]

good drawing like the video x

[Jinchuuriki65]

umm....can i ask

what is the title of the song at

3:10 and 4:00

well you see the songs you put is

awesome

if you reply...thank you very much

[Jinchuuriki65]

nice one really good comic

love it

bravo

[morganrocks911]

hinata very scary when she pissed off

[amichandnangel]

i like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:)

[NarutoLuver896]

you can really draw good ! i like this

[jessica0912100]

oye me gusto tu video pero lo puedes poner en español xfis

[ArtisticUchiha1]

nice drawing and cute story line 10/10

[00alicia04]

nice u have great drawin skils dod u have an DA? maybe we can cacht out our draw's. and help each other with the manga thin ne?

[nemixina]

you are amazing i cannot believe juw drew them so perfectlyy welll done xXx

[mryoshi1221]

You go Hinata! X3 Go tell her girl!

[sailorfruit2]

these are some of the AWSOMEST drawings EVER!!!!!

[lynaebaby224]

GOOD JOB =]

[XxAna13xX]

interesting hehe i hope sakura doesnt get raped by the shadow O_O

[myxa321]

very very very very very very very very very goooood C:

[cuteanimechibi]

holy crap this is good espeacialy if its ur first! ^^

GO HINATA!!

[Taylorzxzx]

wow i have never seen that side on hinata

[lolclubpenguin4eva]

waaaaaaaah hina chan scary but cute at the same time so confused T_T

[El316]

nice job!! on this!!! you did well enough with the english XD *winks and gives a thumbs up!*

[alisonluk1110]

hinata said 'SHUT-UP-BITCH'?????? o_O

[TXgamePRO]

nice doujinshi (don't know what that mean) and you draw very well keep it up

[AnAngelsRequest]

In almost doujinshi's i saw and fanfictions i read Karin was the main villain =)) Right?

Go Hinata! You go girl!

[mitsuyishi]

hinata gets like that? :D so cool!! and your drawings are very no more than very super!!

[narutofan37211]

well for your fiest comic i would have done a worse job and thats drawing stick figures okay so don't get your self all worked up saing it bad okay ^_^

[Zeldachan023]

um, its baka not baga...but i liked it otherwise ^,u^

[Anomis4u]

what is the name of the second melody?

[superfoxcecil]

sucksss should hav gave sakura biggeerr tits

[witchyanimewatcher]

oh wow i totally luvvvvv this especially when hinata gets angry woah!

[Emobutterfly90]

The quite ones always pycho b******s (sorry hinata fans im just stating for that perido in time)

[IgorPlaya7]

You're drawing very good make more of them please !!!

[love4EdElric]

This is awsome... The art is fantastic and the story is amazing, I LOVE it!!!

[gothicadepression13]

dude/dudet (in case u take the word dude offensive) u totally rock cuz ur german nd cuz u hav awsum drawing

[Jasperlover45]

GO HINATA!!!! I like the new hinata better!!!

[gaaraXcookie13]

omg! I love this new Hinata x3

you tell ther Hinata =D

[drewfanatic22]

O.O omg hinita get mad the scary good work keep up like this ^ ^

[kagome12351]

Omfg you drawl so well r u shur this is your first doshjin sorry i have crappy spellin

[faisal277]

great english, amazing art and baddass idea i like

[perypoo123]

you go hinata!!!!!

[cherryblossom291]

did she just said b word xD i can say it a lot bitch bitch bitch bitch bitch bitch bitch ahh i just watch the video

[AngelaKGirl]

go hinata!!! lol

[hatelove5lovehate]

wow

..... are you a professional?

-__-

lol

ITS AMAZING!

[paperclipguy2]

3:03 hahaha lol'ed

[SBloodSaya]

that was i way so cooooooooool i love the way you make hinata so strong and no shy and the characters were well done for this Konoka Doujinshi i waiting for the next one good look with your work with this doujinshi

[naruto4everlover1000]

lmao goat and a bitck =Dhahah nothing personal to people who like karin i hate her guts

[hina248]

that was total kick ass !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u should mack most like this

[deipai]

U r great at drawing bravo

[KuroToriIsme]

oh shit hinata is scray when she pissed off i think it case she hangs out with sakura to much and i dont mean that in a bad way i like that there best friends and they kinda have the same personality

[cuddlylupeplushie]

nice i bit hard to understand but i could read it nice english by the way nice art could us a bit of work but great 4 a frist try (your better then me at drawing) :)

[GG3695]

I'm not a big fan of homemade doujinshi's but in this case very impressive

[TheSasukeAndSakura]

Wow how old r u

[cuddlylupeplushie]

thats rude to ask dont you think?-_-

[mihagirl]

:o greeeat job. ^^ loveeeeed it. <33

p.s : can someone tell me please what's the name of the last song ? :)

[crimsonadamantsabre]

Nice. Very creative. The characters were well done for this Konoha Doujinshi. And yes, the text in a few panels could've been a LITTLE bit, just a bit, bigger. And I wish the punctuation was better, but you can't please everyone. No biggie. It was definitely good, and worth a look. Now to look at Part 2.

[Tazzy123949]

it is amazing i loved it when hinata called karin a goat I just rolled around laughing my ass off

[pandalover710]

awesome 100 out of 5

[SakuraHaruno82]

This rocks!!!!!!!! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS

[yugisqueen]

OMG!!! i luv it its so great!!!! 5\5!!!!

[zjungta]

A bit confusing at times, but very interesting. Please do continue.

[sygopigen]

heey it's cool! grate job ^^ keep up the good work ^^

[mpire4]

that was awsome keep it up i realy loved it

[missiic]

OMG AWESOMEEE

[aiencau]

go for it hinata!

[victorworldcup]

good but wow hinata was a way other person in this comic in the original manga she´s kinda shy.. :D

[Kaitogirl1412]

Great pictures!!! Oh, and I never did saw hinata-chan angry

[Dausemus]

DAAAAAAAAAMMMMNNNNN you made Hinata into a bad ass

[ems810]

It is really good, but how long is it till part 2 comes?

[susinell]

i like it

[noblefighter89]

wow hinata just grew balls in that skit i think shy hinata is better but bitchy hinata is wycked awesome

[kelsiegurl93]

hinata dont cuss!!! but other then that it was....GREAT

[5Guinevere5]

LooL

Hinata would never say "bitch" to anyone (wish she would)

Ino would definitly say "kill her" xD

Nice work

[2010olax]

naruto se ve guapo cuando dormia al principio y sasuke se ve guapo 1:48

en españollll, no entiendo maomeno:(

[cutewolfgirl2]

OMFG did u draw that its really good waw i cant find the right word to say ..u are talented and keep them coming 5/5

[kimmyishear]

lolz who was at sakur's window was it sasuke? plz answer

[iLoveKiba100]

WAIT!!! YOU DRAWED THAT?! HOW OLD ARE YOU?!?!my mother can draw manga and it took her ten years to master it!!!!

[sasusakuforever99]

wow..That was long >_>

[iLoveKiba100]

i know, she wasnt at a school to learn it, she just moved on and bang its ready! thats girl has talents!

[sasusakuforever99]

lolz.. I agree wit ya! ^^

[iLoveKiba100]

lol

[sasusakuforever99]

ROFL!! XD Ouch my PANCREAS!! XD LOL JK

[Luvulotsguys]

Dat was rly good. Nice job

[WooisLegit]

ZOMG i cant draw like that to save my life! nice job!! ;D

luv it <3

[Dogmaster0988]

Wow! Das war ziemlich gut für den ersten Versuch war. Auch ich bin Deutschland ... auch mein Großvater war, und ich weiß, ein wenig Deutsch und übersetzen, wie es auch Englisch kann hart sein. Was schreibe ich im Moment bin ich mit meinem Englisch zu dictoinary Deutsch.

[brittpurple1]

omg your drawing was so wonderful and it was really good and you only had a few spelling eras im about to watch part 2 right now 5/5 bravo

[RandomizedMonkeys]

That very good! I wish I could draw like you!

[hasyaa33]

your drawing ish reli gud :D

[hiphoplovaforeva]

OMG YOU A GOOD DRAWER

[fruitrandomness]

I like it, though the art could use more work on them.

[shadouge4ever94]

woot woot awespme drawings and plot AND characters!!luv it 5 stars

[xLisaL]

GOSH you make Naruto look even hotter than usual. AND HE IS ALREADY ABOVE 100% hot!

[fumahoshi1]

i think ur very good at drawing

[SternchenXP]

Ok, da ich weiß, dass du deutsch bist schreib ich auf deutsch, da mein English schrecklich is. Das ist soooooo was von genial, du zeichnest wirklich gut. Echt bin voll neidisch, ich verlier nach vier bildern immer die geduld :P

So jetzt versuch ich den mist mal ins Englische zu übersetzen:

That's so great, your drawing is pretty nice. I want to draw like this too. :(

But I always stop after four pics.

:P

[ElisManiac]

3:04 the best :D

Very good work, Lady! :)

[xanimegirlxx808]

awsome pics :D WoW u and one of my friends r like the best anime drawers i have eva seen O_O but sadly she doesnt make fanfics she just draws anime then doesnt bother with it ever again unless she has free time great story by the way this is gonna be my 2nd time watching ur fanfic :D

[katieesailormoon]

lol, I loved when Hinata told off Karin! Woo, go Hinata-chan! ^_^

Your art is very very good, keep it up! :D

[charmedgal888]

Hinata told the bitch Karin off!! Great job!!

[sandratail]

fore teh fyrst time doing this it is verry good i think the i cant even dra like that in the cp ore on paper vell done 5/5

[Neishiina]

these are great drawings + vid. :)

well donee! 5/5

xx

[ninjaimmortal]

really cute!!

[Madeleine556]

Your drawings are good, Thankz x the dounjishi.

LOVE NARUHINA X EVER

[inoyamanaka923XD]

this is such a cute doujinshi!!! Good job! I

[gurlzcharmed]

wow its a great movie and nice drawings girl you got style in your future

[erika042398]

nice story i like hinata here!!!!!

[yaoifane]

nice love your drawing style wish i can draw like you =)

[funkysakura444]

ich wünschte ich könnte so super zeichnen wie du =)

das video is sowas von klasse !!!! ich <3 es

[KireiJosei17]

It's really good video!;P

I like it but you must train your drawing.

All I can say is:GOOD JOB!:P

[KireiJosei17]

Iit's really good video!I like it but you must train you drawing but is good now.:P

[Yautja297]

ok ich denke, auch wenn es mir schwerfällt muss ich dir die wahrheit in gesicht sagen...

...genial 5/5

mach so weiter xP

[lucitoelpapi]

lo puedes publicar en español si

[Nazar8989]

*fan girl scream* omfg your good at drawing!!!!!!!!!! =D

[kdfhtjral]

this is a very good video but i´m from germeny and i can´t good english XD

[yaoiqueen2627]

omg hinata called karin a bitch wow

[valelacatam1]

OMG! It's so cool ;) thanks, i really like it!

[pd1549]

i really like it smile

[132001]

hahahahahahaha its actually really really great good job I'll wait for the next one to rate him

[TheAmericanKiwi]

awesome! good job!

[HottieKim142002]

oh yea HINATA BITCH SCREAM kARIN - NOT IN REAL THOUGH-

AWESOME COMIC

[CristianButMyOwnWay]

your awesome i really like it and thanks for trying so hard when your german

[therealbuttercup123]

what is sasuke doing at 3:05

[kiLLERkUNOiChi728]

HELL YEAH HINATA TELL THAT UGLY MAN LOOKING CRAP EATER OFF AND KICK HER ASS!!!!!!!!!!

sorry got to excited and AWESOME DRAWINGS!!!!!!!!!!!

[zaqualabadself]

kill KARIN TRICK but i like the video

[chloecat16kitty]

dis is really good!!!!! im 11 and i can only draw shippuden hinata :{

[miyabixkawaii3]

rly cute. rly awesome drawing of sasuke at the end with red eyes

[Kakashirules1]

I approve as Kakashi my approval is the most important

[SasuSakuFucking]

whats the song at 3:11 ? my couisn might like that song,and just ignore my username i made it for fun

[aimy1233]

oh tht song is clean by hillary duff, i think

[ipod2cookie789]

Damn you're awesome!! O:

[chloecat16kitty]

i no!!!!!!! she didnt make hinata SUPER DUPER SHY like all the others thats what i like x)

[GGGIRLGGG818]

It's awesome! Both your drawings and storyline...I'm drawing my own doujinshi myself but I'm having trouble with the story..oh well lol keep it up girl!

[KibasGirl96]

lol this so funny but seriously kill karin!!!!!!!!!!

[lcristal09]

it so funny

[askpie35]

hinata better kick her ass

[ChibiLuver27]

Wow Ur AWESOME! Hehehehe....

U CAN draw! ^^ I MEAN SERIOUSLY WELL!

[sakurakinmoto]

it's pretty good! the thing is...Hinata's more of a shy girl but still...GREAT!!

[Nocte97]

wow! du bist echt super im zeichnen und die story ist auch total gut. du solltest wirklich darüber nachdenken ob du mangaka werden willst

[9meangirl]

ino:YES!!!kill her!!!!! lol i laughed so hard

[flowerbun]

GREAT JOB:) you should be proud! 5/5!

[sasukeslover100]

your pretty good i like it

[Theawesomepersonm]

This is awesome!!!

[gladysunshine]

i think you're an asweme drawer and you speak english realy well to be german !!!!!!!!!!!!! :p

[tea14]

wow voll hammer! die story gefällt mir schon recht gut! und das hast echt du gezeichnet?? du kannst echt super zeichen! noch ein klein wenig übung könntest dus wahrscheinlich noch zum mangaka schaffen *gg* ^^

[o0miss0sunshine0o]

WOW

echt super geworden^^

[brownieschats]

good drawings

[Sasuke71988Uchiha]

that was the best comic i ever red good music too another good comic is konoha high i think that is what it is called it is my favorite one you should see it!!!

[scottyshot34]

good drawing its better that i could do!!!!!

[usuanime]

Arigato! 5 estrellitas...♥ ♥ ♥ !

[zelda1125]

Its pretty good for the first try. Im sure you'll keep improving though.