river/mal - the boy who blocked his own shot

[rabbitspliff]

soz couldn't help noticing, 2nd paragraph you've written deicide.

"Deicide is the killing of a god." sounds abit nietzsche-ish, no?

did you mean decided? lulz.

[rabbitspliff]

what? this is news to me, river and mal? i always thought mal and inara had something for each other, and didn't river have something for her brother? oh yeh that scene was cut, probably due to incest being pretty unacceptable in society lol.

[jimmyboo12]

I swear I thougt it was going to say "the boy who blocked his cock" lol

[riverfiretcm]

Okay nice story, and good job...but mal only loves river as a daughter...

[BrowncoatReader]

Hi, i like the video. Good job. The plot was almost exactly like Serenity, but thats ok :)

I was just wondering, how do you get the video clips onto windows movie maker? I've been thinking of making a video too, but i'm not sure how to.

if you could help me out that would be great. :) I rated it for you too.

[littlemotel410]

oh thank you. i don't know how i would do that, i'm not great at writing fan fics lol

[vfergus]

I love the Story!!!! You should seriously make it into a fanfiction...I love the video!

[cdj800m25]

4 you lexi ill always love you always

[littlemotel410]

thank you bunches and obviously me too! lol

[pica624]

awesome i love firefly/serenity and brand new :)

[littlemotel410]

thanks

[eldritchowl]

Nice editing. Interesting shipping.