the oldman was buried under the floor ... as the psychopath stated ..the cops had no clue of this dilemma .. thus, made them coffee as he LOTI (LOTI = LOL on the Inside) at there faces, which then he, had power ... and felt power ... pure power over the life of the "this" evil eye :D
Dude This Shit Was Fucking Retarded, You See Once Upon A Time It Was My FAVORITE Book && Im Pretty Sure You Just Ruined It for Me You Are Such A Baddie Plz Do Me A Favor And Get Hit By A Fucking Truck You Infidel Scrub
I painted an expression of this poem. It was intense. All the kids in my class wanted it. The truth is all the artists went underground and turned into healers. But I think we are coming up for some air now. I think it is time to share our paintings and drawings. At least that is what I am doing.
I hated the heartbeat. It was good for a home made video and I liked the voice but that horribly put together attempt at a heart beat was sad and ruined the whole point of the ending.
im reading this in school .....ugggh its the creepiest thing i ever read but, this helps me out a little bit............................... THIS MOVIE IS BETTER THAN MR.JINGGLES!!!lol(inside joke)
The old man was buried under the floor AFTER being dismembered by the killer.
"If still you think me mad, you will think so no longer when I describe the wise precautions I took for the concealment of the body. The night waned, and I worked hastily, but in silence. First of all I dismembered the corpse. I cut off the head and the arms and the legs.
I then took up three planks from the flooring of the chamber, and deposited all between the scantlings."
Though the killers voice sounded crazy i belive it would have been much more creepier if you acted completly normal and calm until intense moments that acted a bit more drastic
the oldman was buried under the floor ... as the psychopath stated ..the cops had no clue of this dilemma .. thus, made them coffee as he LOTI (LOTI = LOL on the Inside) at there faces, which then he, had power ... and felt power ... pure power over the life of the "this" evil eye :D
SupaNami 1 month ago
its the ither eye
blackopesghost 3 months ago
haha we watched this in my reading class at school, since we were reading the story
GilstrapStudiosAlt 4 months ago
Dude This Shit Was Fucking Retarded, You See Once Upon A Time It Was My FAVORITE Book && Im Pretty Sure You Just Ruined It for Me You Are Such A Baddie Plz Do Me A Favor And Get Hit By A Fucking Truck You Infidel Scrub
mobaby614 7 months ago
I painted an expression of this poem. It was intense. All the kids in my class wanted it. The truth is all the artists went underground and turned into healers. But I think we are coming up for some air now. I think it is time to share our paintings and drawings. At least that is what I am doing.
Mineretta2012 10 months ago
Horror novel see video book trailer
dltanner99 10 months ago
but it was very good... i liked it
star7703 10 months ago
whoa whoa whoa... the old man was not killed that way, the bed was flipped on top of him and i guess he suffocated
star7703 10 months ago
I hated the heartbeat. It was good for a home made video and I liked the voice but that horribly put together attempt at a heart beat was sad and ruined the whole point of the ending.
IdentityCrisis7311 1 year ago
@IdentityCrisis7311
For you, what was the point of the ending?
CMDRmcgrath 1 year ago
i liked it when u cut up the old man that looked almost real.
baseballplayas99 1 year ago
that eye ball looked kind of like a meat ball
twilightchickie95 1 year ago
very lovely done. maybe u should've used more emotion when u tore up the planks, but i liked it :D
icecreamfairy8 1 year ago
out of all of his poems this and the raven hount my mind
Aryarad16 1 year ago
nice ending it was a great touch to the already great story
allisonrh953 1 year ago
that was pretty awesome great job guys
chunk9362 1 year ago
yes. you are my idols.
littlefishyfaces 1 year ago
Lolz I love how at the end of credits you put, "firing squads are not funny"
Pokemonangel9 1 year ago
Great job!! I totally fell in love with this video!!
carleykeys 1 year ago
lol dude that was awesome!!! i loved itt n nice effectss :P
toshanbrina 1 year ago
this is amazing. I looooove this story, and u rly should submit ths 2 a film contest... it would win :D
BillieJeanGirl2 1 year ago
is that a marker hes smoking?
airsoftcharlie 1 year ago
lol i love it and i really liked the twist at the end!! This is so fucking awesome. you should submite to a short film contest. love the eye. lol
100themagicman 1 year ago
so awesome same as catsidi reading it in school its quite cool but the book is good as well as this
TheScoop99 2 years ago
im reading this in school .....ugggh its the creepiest thing i ever read but, this helps me out a little bit............................... THIS MOVIE IS BETTER THAN MR.JINGGLES!!!lol(inside joke)
catsidi 2 years ago
great film!!! how did you do the special effects? the dismembered body, the guy murderer getting shot, and all the blood, how did you do that?
theholyshit12 2 years ago
read this today in school ugh that was scary damn!
pirate4ever9 2 years ago
Omg. Absoloutly amazing. And I must say the murderer is quite attractive. =]
FallenWhiteRose 2 years ago
that was incredibly freaky....
wrenssis 2 years ago
AMAZING...haaa,cool end.
ChatterBell 2 years ago
i love this!!!! it is so amazing, so scary, he is truly the master of pschological terror!
I love how, throughout this whole thing, he is trying to tell you how hes not crazy, then how he kiled some one.
WOW!
BillieJeanGirl2 2 years ago
Awesome job boys!!! I will be showing this in my middle school English class!! It ROCKS!!
kguere 2 years ago
so awesome!!
WhatsForDinner300 2 years ago
God! this really helps me a lot in my English oral reading this monday! thanks 4 those who made the video..
soulfie 2 years ago
the music is great i wont that sound
subwaytosally08 2 years ago
Excellent
ShadoomxX 3 years ago
its a little differnt but u got somthin
muthetaPHI 3 years ago
isn't the version you're using from a reading text book?
greatphillip2 3 years ago
if you don't get it find The Tell-Tale Heart and read it! it's easy to follow.. or try the Pit and the Pinduluem!
OMGerardWay 3 years ago
2 q's...did they kill the guy at the end in the book?and was that ketcup on that guy?
sasukefangal2019 3 years ago
to answer your first question, yes he killed him, severed the body and hid it under the floor boards
monkeytamer742 3 years ago
i no tat i meant the crazy dude at the end
sasukefangal2019 3 years ago
the old man wasn't killed that way... the oldman was buried under the floor. the killer took three planks of the floor...
harry0116 3 years ago 3
The old man was buried under the floor AFTER being dismembered by the killer.
"If still you think me mad, you will think so no longer when I describe the wise precautions I took for the concealment of the body. The night waned, and I worked hastily, but in silence. First of all I dismembered the corpse. I cut off the head and the arms and the legs.
I then took up three planks from the flooring of the chamber, and deposited all between the scantlings."
Did you read the edited version?
CMDRmcgrath 3 years ago 4
great job but damn it man u gave me the creeps!! Great reading=)
lisababy85 2 years ago
@CMDRmcgrath
What are they going to do? Kill him?
bazinga1998 2 months ago
That was a good video.
Though the killers voice sounded crazy i belive it would have been much more creepier if you acted completly normal and calm until intense moments that acted a bit more drastic
MrDevin2011 3 years ago
WOW,,, almost enjoyed it too much xD
BlinkMeOneEightyTwo 3 years ago
excellent
that guy should seek therapy...
GanglandProductions 3 years ago
that was awsome dude
that really was
good job XD
kimberly161 4 years ago
Wow great job!
I really enjoyed it
Schmuck214 4 years ago
Very good job...I love the camera angles, and then ending, especially, but it's all really great...
Saberiel 4 years ago
Wow! Nice job.
2Dchan 4 years ago
At first I was scared to tears by the voice!
paprlantrnanimegrl4 4 years ago
you have mad skillz ben
theshreddedwheat 4 years ago
hay gusy wat is goin on hure?
fraggleroxorz 5 years ago