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  • Bravo

  • Great poem!!

  • Wunderbare Lyrik ! Danke schoen.

  • 100/100 :)

  • how funny.....nice job

  • cool poem and good reading!

  • that was niCe..

    thanks for Sharing:D

    kimberly

  • Slavery! A fight man has had and will continue to have for all eternity. perhaps!

  • 5*5*5*5*5*tars from: smi-ren-ger

  • I want my tail back! oh wait, I mean, good poem... Awesome story, thanks for choosing that one, you have a good ear.

  • good work!

  • Hmmm, ever think of taking a half cred poetry class? You have great potential, and a lot of talent, but.. there's always room for improvment. I used to hate it when people told me that, but after I actually took the class, I saw a huge improvment. You should think about it.

  • of course there is room for improvement, effort has never been my greatest skill, the poems i have done are only the ones i have learnt in primary school ,

    as for creative writing , english litreture , i have been given the best education , britain and ireland can offer

    your right though i should make an effort,

    what does the word talent actually mean?

  • talent is a power of mind or body considered as given to a person, at least thats what is says in Matthews 25:14-30..

  • ok , weird choice of pictures

  • Wow, that was truly an amazing reading there. A truly sad subject and story.

  • Nice one! Thanks 4 sharing :o)

  • that's a really super reading Brendan. Chas.

  • yeah its what your saying at around 2:11 the pic that is shown and the way there tails were paraded once cut off just made me think!

  • TY much 4 sending!!...peace

  • Yeah, it is interesting.

  • sad poem,nicely read and put together bafr1

  • interesting........

  • That is a sorrowful story.

  • good video. Interesting how kipling observes the coloured people from a outsiders, almost sympathetic way. That is until in the last verse he refers to them as "And the monkeys walk together, Holding there kinsmens tails"

    Food for thought.

  • Wow. That is an interesting tale, and one of my new favorites. Thank you for sending. Aloha!

  • Thanks for sharing the great poem and images. Truly inspiring.

  • great!!!

  • Beautiful especially with you reading it bafr1 thank you! Merry Christmas!xx

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