Hmmm, ever think of taking a half cred poetry class? You have great potential, and a lot of talent, but.. there's always room for improvment. I used to hate it when people told me that, but after I actually took the class, I saw a huge improvment. You should think about it.
of course there is room for improvement, effort has never been my greatest skill, the poems i have done are only the ones i have learnt in primary school ,
as for creative writing , english litreture , i have been given the best education , britain and ireland can offer
good video. Interesting how kipling observes the coloured people from a outsiders, almost sympathetic way. That is until in the last verse he refers to them as "And the monkeys walk together, Holding there kinsmens tails"
Bravo
budhasac 3 years ago
Great poem!!
Gordieiati 3 years ago
Wunderbare Lyrik ! Danke schoen.
hoffmann9471 3 years ago
100/100 :)
sanchezdot 4 years ago
how funny.....nice job
Audrafay 4 years ago
cool poem and good reading!
nitehawk57 4 years ago
that was niCe..
thanks for Sharing:D
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kimberlysim94 4 years ago
Slavery! A fight man has had and will continue to have for all eternity. perhaps!
realnutty01 4 years ago
5*5*5*5*5*tars from: smi-ren-ger
smirenger 4 years ago
I want my tail back! oh wait, I mean, good poem... Awesome story, thanks for choosing that one, you have a good ear.
yawehking 4 years ago
good work!
HomeTownPublishing 4 years ago
Hmmm, ever think of taking a half cred poetry class? You have great potential, and a lot of talent, but.. there's always room for improvment. I used to hate it when people told me that, but after I actually took the class, I saw a huge improvment. You should think about it.
ducttape411 4 years ago
of course there is room for improvement, effort has never been my greatest skill, the poems i have done are only the ones i have learnt in primary school ,
as for creative writing , english litreture , i have been given the best education , britain and ireland can offer
your right though i should make an effort,
what does the word talent actually mean?
bafr1 4 years ago
talent is a power of mind or body considered as given to a person, at least thats what is says in Matthews 25:14-30..
ducttape411 4 years ago
ok , weird choice of pictures
daglan 4 years ago
Wow, that was truly an amazing reading there. A truly sad subject and story.
deanbenji 4 years ago
Nice one! Thanks 4 sharing :o)
reVerse2bfree 4 years ago
that's a really super reading Brendan. Chas.
brychar66 4 years ago
yeah its what your saying at around 2:11 the pic that is shown and the way there tails were paraded once cut off just made me think!
cemtex1 4 years ago
TY much 4 sending!!...peace
AbbottSupreme 4 years ago
Yeah, it is interesting.
Eriikc 4 years ago
sad poem,nicely read and put together bafr1
paisleypower30 4 years ago
interesting........
cemtex1 4 years ago
That is a sorrowful story.
traceur9 4 years ago
good video. Interesting how kipling observes the coloured people from a outsiders, almost sympathetic way. That is until in the last verse he refers to them as "And the monkeys walk together, Holding there kinsmens tails"
Food for thought.
benevolentbob 4 years ago
Wow. That is an interesting tale, and one of my new favorites. Thank you for sending. Aloha!
yawehking 4 years ago
Thanks for sharing the great poem and images. Truly inspiring.
LuisLomeliMD 4 years ago
great!!!
DTG16 4 years ago
Beautiful especially with you reading it bafr1 thank you! Merry Christmas!xx
wtfiswrongwitya 4 years ago