why dont you cram a rat up your butt hole? kayyyy. and dont tell me im stupid cause im sure your a big fat hunk of crap who cant get a date. bye sweetheart :))))
the poem isnt written by her, and man, was anyone else bugged by her reading mistakes? I would post one up that didn't have any kind of mistakes like that cause it really does get on peoples nerves.
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My dad drinks and drives too when im in the car...I try to take his car keys so he cant go anywhere...but he is always so drunk that he always pushes me down and calls me bad things for no reason when he is drunk im always scared that he will die in a big car wreck because he is drunk.....I HATE THE PERSON WHO INVENTED BEER.
@RKSTaxClan Yes this is the original one. The other ones out there are shorter versions of this one. There are so many versions out there now. But this is the original one that was in a local newspaper i think in 1997. When i look for this poem i always have to go through all the other versions that have ruined this one. The "mom" every 3 seconds makes this poem. Thank you poster for posting this original version!
If your going to plagiarize "Chicken Soup for The Soul" at least learn how to read first. That is normally a very touching poem, but you managed to butcher it, congratulations that was a perfect execution of a f*c* up.
@stilljeremy84 No, YOU are the perfect exectution of a F*C* UP. If you're going to be a dick, do it somewhere else. It's a touching poem and obivously means a lot to her. So back the fuck off.
all of you guys who are putting neegative comments you need to SHUT THE FUCK UP you look dumb so just do every one a favor ans shut the fuck up alright! this is a poeeem that is true
god damn i was told to look at this ...i rmeber this crud thing from ages ago ...and pretty sure ur last words wouldnt be i didnt dirnk it drive ud be callen the other guy a prick who did ..ive lost mates this way ..and it actually tougher for the drunk driver cause on some occassions they usualy end up killing themselfs form the regret or amongst other things
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ok you realy suck cus you copyed the poem from the chiken soup of the souls bitch i hope you die fucking pieace of fucking shit you bastered and you sayed the fucking poem the wrong way idiot i fucking wasted my time and you..... uhh fuck you
drinking and driving is stupid!!! i hate all who do it!! they can ruin someones life my cousin died from a drunk driver and i will never see her again so if anyone has somehting to say that drinking and driving is ok talk to me and i will tell you other wise
ya i had a real bad wreak got a dui lucky 4 me no one was hurt but me broke my nose head injurys stomach injurys well never again i had to take dui school and they showed some messed up things
you sick dirty son of a bitch do you have any idea how many people actually die from drinking and driving and how many people die because they've been hit by a drunk driver you need to grow the fuck up and get a fucking life and even though i absolutly hate you for your comment i still would never ever wish you to expirence the pain that you would feel if something close to this happen to you so enjoy your miserable worthless life
I had a friend, she was at a party...and got drunk...her and a friend got into a car and wasn't wearing any seat belts...my friend died on impact...the person that was driving walked away. In our small region...kids have learned...not to drink and drive. Second death of a drunk teen in 3 years in my school. We will never forget. We love you all.
I am crying becasue this is so true! This happens almost everyday.Infact this happend during a PROM!The sad thing is about the death was to the girl who wasn't drinking at the PROM AFTER PARTY!The driver who was drinking who was her boyfriend did't evening think AND HE DID NOT DIE!
the reason this is dumb, is because first of all, nobody can take u seriously with that stupid voice, and i got that poem a million times in a chain letter!
i found this poem on the internet... i cried... i can't read it out loud though... i printed tons of copies and gave them to everyone and put them on the walls... i don't think i could ever drink period... when ur drunk u don't realize wat ur doin so y risk it... all i hav left to say is: i will never drink and drive...
oh i know it is so touching i read this in a book before and i like was feeling like how could someoone do that why do people drink and drive do they not think about the consequnces that it may cause to take an innocent bystanders life i truly dont think its fair and i feel for everyone who know someone who has died as a result of a drunk driver though i personally dont know anyone i still feel the pain
and my last words 2 her where go away mom i h8 you cause we had an argument last night :***(
i realy miss her and every second in my life i wish i could of sed i love you mom one last time but now she has gone to a place where i may not go there for years to come but i know shes waiting for me and am waiting for her aswell
man respect i can belive why you do it because has som1 you know died in a car crash drunken driving my mom did when i was 12 i was on the pavement waiting for her because it was saturday and she normaly takes me out to see my m8s a guy came shooting passed in the car and hit my mom if you remember thoe huge posts with the sharp thing on the end well one of them had fell near my house mom when cshing into it and it when right thew her head lik a sniper well all you can do is move on.... *crys*
this peom is soooo ttly sad it makes me cry no matter how many times i read it!!!! i will never do somethin like drinkin and drivin it has so many bad things that cood happen i feel sry 4 ne1 who this happens 2
Anyone know where the commercial based off this is? I saw this in a commercial with a girl talking next to her mom or something then it showed her body on the floor or stretcher. She put real emotion in it. This has appeared to me several times in the last year so i'm like, "WTF? I can't even drink yet! When I do I don't plan on drinking and driving! I'll pass out on the guy's lawn or something." Hell, probably wont drink at all.
Same poem but different version made me cry, cry, cry. So I translated in Tamil and recorded it and broadcast in a live show on FM Rainbow in Chennai. I have uploaded that version under 'Drunken Driving'. Please watch,comment and take care.
I agree. Actually go and don't drink, or, at least get someone like a relative or a parent drive me, no matter how old I am, and hopefully, everyone's gonna learn their lesson :'(
u suck and ur voice is annoying !!
mommytoya12 3 weeks ago
Don't drink and drive.l You might spill your drink.
bellybutton333333 1 month ago
I love the poem so sad :'(
Liz6898 1 month ago
its a sad story but i dident cry because she made mistakes
purplepassion267 3 months ago
Fuck all who drink and drive motherfuckers!
Bullshit
iMiddNight 3 months ago
First you need to learn how to read ur not good at all
281978082 3 months ago
@281978082 fuck of fag he is like 9 years old fucken troll
supermodel5011 2 months ago
this is beautiful.
i have written a drink driving poem too. please watch my video :)
siguy06 6 months ago
I knew the poem only in german and I think it is a clear message! Do not drink and drive, well no prob for me, i go with bus and train.
AidenBurn13 8 months ago
I masterbates to this one too
Princessbeauty95 9 months ago
@Princessbeauty95 God I hate you. You are quite the dipshit right I have seen stupid but man you are just some fucked up teen or something.
TrophyTSW 7 months ago
Sad :'(
ashleyyrose13 11 months ago
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MirandaJBieber 1 year ago
why dont you cram a rat up your butt hole? kayyyy. and dont tell me im stupid cause im sure your a big fat hunk of crap who cant get a date. bye sweetheart :))))
SydneyElyseBieber 1 year ago
Aww i really feel ur pain..
MyMichelle14 1 year ago
you talk wierd.
SydneyElyseBieber 1 year ago
@SydneyElyseBieber omfg ur soo stupid its not about the way she talks... the important think is that u dnt have to fucken drink and drive duhhh!!!
MsAndy562 1 year ago
you talk wierd.
SydneyElyseBieber 1 year ago
the poem isnt written by her, and man, was anyone else bugged by her reading mistakes? I would post one up that didn't have any kind of mistakes like that cause it really does get on peoples nerves.
TooHooWrong 1 year ago
how come there's so many versions of this poem?
i have the same poem in my vid in my channel
the vid was done for as project tho so its like 4 min long X)
xJeanxEx 1 year ago
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intermitrj 1 year ago
MY God... that made me cry.....
XxHopiEmoGirlxX 1 year ago
OMG!
That made me cry!!
My dad drinks and drives too when im in the car...I try to take his car keys so he cant go anywhere...but he is always so drunk that he always pushes me down and calls me bad things for no reason when he is drunk im always scared that he will die in a big car wreck because he is drunk.....I HATE THE PERSON WHO INVENTED BEER.
EmoHannah20 1 year ago
awww so sweet,and i could actually here you tearing up near the end D:
poke12masta 1 year ago 4
Good poem, you didn't make it I've heard it before, and it's not meant to say "mom" every 3 seconds.
RKSTaxClan 1 year ago
@RKSTaxClan Yes this is the original one. The other ones out there are shorter versions of this one. There are so many versions out there now. But this is the original one that was in a local newspaper i think in 1997. When i look for this poem i always have to go through all the other versions that have ruined this one. The "mom" every 3 seconds makes this poem. Thank you poster for posting this original version!
anijman 1 year ago
am i the only one that is crying hear its so sad she had to die bc of this asshole that dosent know any redponcibility
trafficstoper13 1 year ago
All I'm sayin she shoulda gotten shitfaced and passed out on her friends couch and she would still be alive all I'm saying
ajbaj303 1 year ago
aww ur crying!
MegaMusicfans 1 year ago
Great Job :D
funnymoney207 1 year ago
If your going to plagiarize "Chicken Soup for The Soul" at least learn how to read first. That is normally a very touching poem, but you managed to butcher it, congratulations that was a perfect execution of a f*c* up.
stilljeremy84 1 year ago
@stilljeremy84 No, YOU are the perfect exectution of a F*C* UP. If you're going to be a dick, do it somewhere else. It's a touching poem and obivously means a lot to her. So back the fuck off.
VaniKayne 1 year ago
very touching..
co614dirtysouth 1 year ago
as i post this comment i have tears running down my face .. this is awful . but in a good way , it teaches people a lesson ... thanks for sharing .
pinkiepie519 2 years ago 4
Please find another person to read it, but the message is very true! DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE!
communitysharer1 2 years ago
OMG , soo sad:(
is this truee . .
TheAnnalise2009 2 years ago
is this true?
oam121197 2 years ago
I know a better version!
ARIandBEF 2 years ago
I love this poem,but there is a different version i like better.
PeachTreeGirl1 2 years ago
they had a really simular one in a chicken soup for the soul book
redneck0358 2 years ago
you really cant read very well, you forgot to read some words and your voice is terrible.. please never sing
sindrover 2 years ago 3
my eyes started to water listening to this.
this is a good and true poem.
DONT DRINK & DRIVE!!!
itsmebreezy 2 years ago 2
all of you guys who are putting neegative comments you need to SHUT THE FUCK UP you look dumb so just do every one a favor ans shut the fuck up alright! this is a poeeem that is true
TIFFLILCUZ 2 years ago 2
its daddys girl not daddys baby
imafruitloop222 2 years ago
touching poem.. but ur voice is kind of annoying :\
rawrtherainbow 2 years ago
*cries*
*blows nose into hanky*
That was so sad and a tad dark.
RobAlister 2 years ago
I cries at the end! = ) One of the best poems i have ever heard! Wonderful!
MACandLEE 2 years ago
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Learn how to read first den make a video k
chicharonsur55 2 years ago
@chicharonsur55
Learn how to type first, then leave a comment.
komokeyger 2 years ago
aweehh/!!
Faroojaan 2 years ago
it was sad but she kept messing up urgghhh
newyorkican578 2 years ago
u dont know how to read. haha. ur suppose to pause at commas.
nice poem tho.
Juliusbgns 2 years ago
its called death of a innocent
98hatakekakashi 2 years ago
UH where did you find this poem plz answer i'd like to read the whole version or a longer on if there is
TooCoolforschool1000 2 years ago
wow
Finally06 2 years ago
that was the most beautiful poem i've ever heard and if campainges on tv were more like that people would listen
TooCoolforschool1000 2 years ago
wow...that was really touching...gud job!
Simplyevil4u2c 2 years ago
wow! my speakers aren't playing, that was really sad...it should be on tv
MysteriaMagic 2 years ago
is that u and ummm your voice is weird no affence!!
shyannerox08 2 years ago
I started getting teary, and I'm a grown man. =(
FootballWoW 2 years ago
i did this poem at my dare graduation and almost evryone was crying
ZomgSoSexy 2 years ago
omg that was good
lilshawty619 2 years ago
the first time i herd this i cryd and i still do
mattNtriny47 2 years ago
This is very sad. :( I'm not crying, but I feel like it. :|
origamirox101 2 years ago
Goodness Gracious,
Your voice is SO annoying.
Add some expression to it.
And stop saying mom so much.
XP
FerSureShantielMarie 2 years ago
Lmfao.
Right when i heard her voice i was laughing XD
AND UR VOICE IS ANNOYING!
D;
PsychodelicZombies 2 years ago
uh ok how can u possibly say that, LAUGHING. lemme tell u what's wrong with that
1. it is mean to that girl
2. you have no consideration of the fact that this poem is about something that has true meaning
SO SSSSHHH
TooCoolforschool1000 2 years ago
Wow awesome, please be my friend. By the way, did you write that yourself?
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ElyshiaMusicMad4Yooh 2 years ago
This Poem scared the shit out of me when they played it over the moch crash we had at my skool for the prom
TheMainesReview55 2 years ago
ahh i love ur voice
Stela1610 2 years ago
god damn i was told to look at this ...i rmeber this crud thing from ages ago ...and pretty sure ur last words wouldnt be i didnt dirnk it drive ud be callen the other guy a prick who did ..ive lost mates this way ..and it actually tougher for the drunk driver cause on some occassions they usualy end up killing themselfs form the regret or amongst other things
decayeddonkey 2 years ago
i dont find it sad :S
andwhy are u reading it ?
let us read it :S
i dont like it when u are reaading it
but it quitee sadd . x
diamondbabeyx 2 years ago
this poem is very old.....
i dont know who wrote this
but it has gotten around the world
it is quite touching..and sad
dizadarlin 2 years ago
I am crying now,this poem is very sad
:'-(
11Brunette11 2 years ago
god, pull yourself togeather?
OmGiTiScHaRliE 2 years ago
...no words can describe this
dixiestorm94 2 years ago
yeaaa stfu pussys, it was a poem. yea shit like this happens because of ass holes. Just be safe, lol you dont have to NOT drink when your older haha
coolkidsdoincoolshit 2 years ago
my friend did this for a speech team and when she said it to me, i totally cried. Sad. I will never drink
SrawberriiHaruka 2 years ago 3
nice job on the video. i hate drinking. i think it's a stupid choice. so dont do it.
Lizzie057 2 years ago 2
aw crap! :'( i'm not old enough to drink but i really dont wanna when i'm older.......
xKEIRA123x 3 years ago
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well i drink buuhh i hav it undercontrol so no one get hurt
trust me been there done dat
tasha461 3 years ago
*drink *poem
LAfromCP 3 years ago
If you read it carefully, its telling you not to driunk and drive, it aint taking the Mick out of you you fucking twats!
Great peom, makes me wanna shead a tear. Well Done (:
LAfromCP 3 years ago 9
omg how sad
animeisforme9 3 years ago 4
im crying its so sad
Discooo87 3 years ago 3
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ok you realy suck cus you copyed the poem from the chiken soup of the souls bitch i hope you die fucking pieace of fucking shit you bastered and you sayed the fucking poem the wrong way idiot i fucking wasted my time and you..... uhh fuck you
arianamana 3 years ago
Stop being a dick and pull your head out of your ass. your probly gonna kill someone by drinking and driving!
theothernewkid 3 years ago
i dont even no y ppl drink
it smells and tastes nasty
u said mom too much
candiimandii001 3 years ago 8
drinking and driving is stupid!!! i hate all who do it!! they can ruin someones life my cousin died from a drunk driver and i will never see her again so if anyone has somehting to say that drinking and driving is ok talk to me and i will tell you other wise
TheresaElizabeth21 3 years ago 3
its sad and good
but you need to go over your reading
lol !!!!!
keefau 3 years ago
ya i had a real bad wreak got a dui lucky 4 me no one was hurt but me broke my nose head injurys stomach injurys well never again i had to take dui school and they showed some messed up things
4208jason 3 years ago
I u wankers should go die insted.
or mayb ur one of the ppl that do drink and drive!!!
adamBgribble 3 years ago
aww thats sad
ClubPenguinGirl95 3 years ago 2
Very sad, but I hope she's like 8 b/c her reading is way off...Practice makes perfect.
cyralovesmom 3 years ago
omg ya totally tells it all
yuppiemobile69 3 years ago
I nearly cryied....
:(:(..
Jadynecp 3 years ago
Very nice and true poem. But the girl reading can't read for her life. haha
MADSxLOVESxZAC 3 years ago
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this poem wants me to go drink and drive with my eyes closed petal to the metal in the deaf /blind child area during a parade for cancer and laugh
Fifteenpigs 3 years ago
you sick dirty son of a bitch do you have any idea how many people actually die from drinking and driving and how many people die because they've been hit by a drunk driver you need to grow the fuck up and get a fucking life and even though i absolutly hate you for your comment i still would never ever wish you to expirence the pain that you would feel if something close to this happen to you so enjoy your miserable worthless life
elvisangel33 3 years ago
always happy to meet a fan :D
Fifteenpigs 3 years ago
omg this is such a sad poem whoever wrote any comments like "wow whoever wrote this is a baby!" go get some feelings man god
Disturbed441 3 years ago 3
THATS SO GOOD!!OF A POEM!
loklokp 3 years ago
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what a douch bag go die then!
d0wnupspart1n 3 years ago
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what the hell is your problem?
justinahurry 3 years ago
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wtf???????ur stupid u go die!
KuRo559 3 years ago
wow.... this is so sad im crying........
ripcurl94 3 years ago
so sad
vergitacha 3 years ago
I had a friend, she was at a party...and got drunk...her and a friend got into a car and wasn't wearing any seat belts...my friend died on impact...the person that was driving walked away. In our small region...kids have learned...not to drink and drive. Second death of a drunk teen in 3 years in my school. We will never forget. We love you all.
tonertime7 3 years ago
I am crying becasue this is so true! This happens almost everyday.Infact this happend during a PROM!The sad thing is about the death was to the girl who wasn't drinking at the PROM AFTER PARTY!The driver who was drinking who was her boyfriend did't evening think AND HE DID NOT DIE!
katluvor 3 years ago
:( this is sad
smileyxo414 3 years ago
that persons matter of fact voice COMPLETELY wrecks it. by itself it is beautiful
jojogirl1000 3 years ago
the reason this is dumb, is because first of all, nobody can take u seriously with that stupid voice, and i got that poem a million times in a chain letter!
kikingirls 3 years ago
sad!!!!!!! but true
tinkerbell181413 3 years ago
my eyes hurt this is too sad
lilones02 3 years ago
i got this on an email and the person wants 5,000 names to give this to sumone to stop the drinkin and drivin and this is sad!
tinkerbell181413 3 years ago
i found this poem on the internet... i cried... i can't read it out loud though... i printed tons of copies and gave them to everyone and put them on the walls... i don't think i could ever drink period... when ur drunk u don't realize wat ur doin so y risk it... all i hav left to say is: i will never drink and drive...
kissycatgurl 3 years ago
oh i know it is so touching i read this in a book before and i like was feeling like how could someoone do that why do people drink and drive do they not think about the consequnces that it may cause to take an innocent bystanders life i truly dont think its fair and i feel for everyone who know someone who has died as a result of a drunk driver though i personally dont know anyone i still feel the pain
lalalayepzlalala 3 years ago
ahhh *cries*no fair u da good guy fuck that BAMFer=Bad Ass MotherFukcer
05461232 3 years ago
ahhh *cries*no fair u da good guy fuck that BAMFer=Bad Ass MotherFukcer
05461232 3 years ago
and my last words 2 her where go away mom i h8 you cause we had an argument last night :***(
i realy miss her and every second in my life i wish i could of sed i love you mom one last time but now she has gone to a place where i may not go there for years to come but i know shes waiting for me and am waiting for her aswell
mmbloody 3 years ago
man respect i can belive why you do it because has som1 you know died in a car crash drunken driving my mom did when i was 12 i was on the pavement waiting for her because it was saturday and she normaly takes me out to see my m8s a guy came shooting passed in the car and hit my mom if you remember thoe huge posts with the sharp thing on the end well one of them had fell near my house mom when cshing into it and it when right thew her head lik a sniper well all you can do is move on.... *crys*
mmbloody 3 years ago
This made me really sad because it reminded me of when one of my friends got hit by a car. :(:(
chillwithlil 3 years ago
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x0xox0x0 3 years ago
wow that is really sad im pouring my eyes out
how could someone do that!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vaneava 3 years ago
omg that was so sad and like her voice got all shaky at the end cuz she was crying
nickjonasluver19 3 years ago
this peom is soooo ttly sad it makes me cry no matter how many times i read it!!!! i will never do somethin like drinkin and drivin it has so many bad things that cood happen i feel sry 4 ne1 who this happens 2
perfectangel10194 3 years ago
Anyone know where the commercial based off this is? I saw this in a commercial with a girl talking next to her mom or something then it showed her body on the floor or stretcher. She put real emotion in it. This has appeared to me several times in the last year so i'm like, "WTF? I can't even drink yet! When I do I don't plan on drinking and driving! I'll pass out on the guy's lawn or something." Hell, probably wont drink at all.
KorinBeck 3 years ago
this poem makes me cry..it is so sasd!!!
charming952 3 years ago
Same poem but different version made me cry, cry, cry. So I translated in Tamil and recorded it and broadcast in a live show on FM Rainbow in Chennai. I have uploaded that version under 'Drunken Driving'. Please watch,comment and take care.
puyalg 4 years ago
I got this poem in an email...VERY touching I am crying and cyring I am never going to any of those stupid parties EVER!
luvsmiley96 4 years ago
I agree. Actually go and don't drink, or, at least get someone like a relative or a parent drive me, no matter how old I am, and hopefully, everyone's gonna learn their lesson :'(
IceBaiby 3 years ago
damn im sitting here in my room crying like a baby!
this is a very touching poem!!
Bedner 4 years ago
yeh true have u got any more poems?
anakorbay 4 years ago
i heard this poem before but in different version and am telling you it killed me inside!
anakorbay 4 years ago
I agree, the first Time I read it, I cried and every other time, when I read it, it make my heart bleed.. :') so touching and true...
IceBaiby 4 years ago