Where DId I Go Wrong? (original Song)

[CurtisMateer]

Catchy number, it would suit the son's big production well too.

[dnarbbrand]

I co wrote this with steamrocke must admit i sung and played it so bad but thanks for the comment

[plattform5163]

Once more a very nice song from you! Thanks for sharing it!

[dnarbbrand]

thanks for coming by and leaving a comment

[Oswlek]

I like the idea behind this one. Back in the 60's it could very well have been a hit.

[dnarbbrand]

thanks fo your comment and yes sometimes i am stuck in the 60's - to be honest i don't like the final version that much i did it quite badly

[Fusionartist202]

Cool and upbeat!

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks for your positive comment -

[lewisthemusician]

You haz RAWRRRRRR SKILLZ!!!!!!

[dnarbbrand]

O RLY?

[lewisthemusician]

YA RLY!

[dnarbbrand]

NO WAI!

[steamrocket]

I'll have what  u 2 are on please!!! #:-)

Like father, like son Lewis. Let that be a warning to you!

[cbrb40]

That's cool. You do remind me of those two, L & M.

They used to write a lot together then wrote their own songs,then collaborated on a few again later on. I know what you mean and you both write great melodies and lyrics. Hard to say who's a little better. I've heard more of your songs and you write some awesome melodies that are hard to beat.

You guys keep rockin!! :))

[cbrb40]

This is more uptempo. Great song again. I just wish you could get them to a studio and polish them up. You and steamrocket are just great songwriters. You always have that hit sound going on.

Love those songs. :))

Does one of you write the lyrics and the other the music when you collab?

[dnarbbrand]

That is a very interesting question lol - to answer it the best i can - we both are capable of writing melodies and lyrics which i hope is demonstrated by our own individual channels. When we work together there isnt a set formula - I think Steamrocket is a better lyricist than me but he would probably say - I am quicker at doing lyrics in terms of melody again that could be instigated by either one of us. remember he was my friend from school so we know each others minds very well!!

[buniluvr]

Sweet! Reminds me a little of Paul Weller. I give you ALL stars. 5+********

cheers

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks - it is meant to be in the style of Paul Weller so it is great you picked that up

all he best

[MsEllieJ]

:) Great Job. I always love to see what you guys come up with.

[dnarbbrand]

Thanks as always - didn't really nail it as i wanted but after a few takes gave up

all the best

[MsEllieJ]

Ha. Yeah - been there, done that.

[steamrocket]

Glad you liked this one too. Mind you, it didn't come out as well as planned so there might just be (shock, horror!) a re-release on the schedules. Keep 'em peeled!

[MsEllieJ]

^^^ Always do with you guys. :) Take care kids. ;) (And looking forward to your next one)

[steamrocket]

Everything back in the right place now, and available on steamrocket channel!