I like the basic riff, beat and feel. I would love to see you add a second track over the main that tells the story over the background. I assume your using garage band or similar.
@geetarism thanks for the feedback!i do agree that it is a lil repetitive and is missing a bridge.i also feel that i need to mute the melody in between the hooks.this is far done but, i can use all the feedback i can get.thank you so much for taking the time to listen to it and for constructive critism.it really does help and is appreciated.take care hec tor
I like the basic riff, beat and feel. I would love to see you add a second track over the main that tells the story over the background. I assume your using garage band or similar.
geetarism 4 months ago
@geetarism thanks for the feedback!i do agree that it is a lil repetitive and is missing a bridge.i also feel that i need to mute the melody in between the hooks.this is far done but, i can use all the feedback i can get.thank you so much for taking the time to listen to it and for constructive critism.it really does help and is appreciated.take care hec tor
luckyg1982 4 months ago