This really reminded me of the swine flu pandemic. That many people are catching the virus and are afraid to die. Others are afraid to catch it because they know death could be waiting round the corner...
Brilliant poem, I throughly enjoyed it. I love all the effects too. :-)
Human and humane stuff... love it...Nice editing of sound too. Spot on! BIG media FRENZY here and tacit prejudice in the TV "reporting." Nice to meet you.
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
Well funnily enough I was just thinking that outbreaks are getting like Astrology, Taurus the bullshitter, Pisces the fish, so Im waiting for labels such as Capricorn the Goat Flu, Pisces Cod Liver Oil flu brought to u by seven seas ensuring u can run to the crapper 5 times faster!
Cheers bro, yea this is my usual darker style. Fear being the sickness? Sounds similar to the condition Agrophobia, ten times more frightening when its real!!
This really reminded me of the swine flu pandemic. That many people are catching the virus and are afraid to die. Others are afraid to catch it because they know death could be waiting round the corner...
Brilliant poem, I throughly enjoyed it. I love all the effects too. :-)
fellowtuber123 2 years ago
Your pretty much spot on there, I wrote this right after swine flu first broke out. Cheers!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Well Done the sound Effects Match the Poem!
Cybergothneurotik 2 years ago
Yea this is my usual darker style, thank you!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
You have put a lot of thought and energy into your productions. Well done.
Zeeceei 2 years ago
Thank you so much for saying that!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
our last real predator
13thDimension 2 years ago
True!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Human and humane stuff... love it...Nice editing of sound too. Spot on! BIG media FRENZY here and tacit prejudice in the TV "reporting." Nice to meet you.
XaveJamesGrey 2 years ago
Pleasure ot meet you too and thank you for your kind words!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Interesting. I like the darkness feel of it all. Paranoia will destroy ya. Thanks for the share.
Violeta
BahenaD 2 years ago
Your welcome and thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Hello VisionGhostPoet
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
love the ending! BAM!!
Peace, Love & Inspiration to YOU
Vickie
onegroovycharmer 2 years ago
Hello VisionGhostPoet
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
love the ending! BAM!!
Peace, Love & Inspiration to YOU
Vickie
onegroovycharmer 2 years ago
Hello VisionGhostPoet
cool sound effects, passionate presentation & love the darkled depths of the variable messages entwined within each line....fear does ravage a soul through many life forces...
love the ending! BAM!!
Peace, Love & Inspiration to YOU
Vickie
onegroovycharmer 2 years ago
Wow! Thank you Vickie, thats a great comment and wonderful words, thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
ahh couldnt come at a better time, new york city once again in a flu panic, thanks to the exaggerated media, to instill fear in us all!!
once again great spoken words ;)
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elviradark6 2 years ago
So I heard, I once said on Myspace "The greatest threat to the virus is the paranoia of its victims!" Glad you liked that, thank you **hugs**
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
you have the coolest voice ever!
now you're name makes alot of cents lol
santiagodevill 2 years ago
Thank you! Hope so!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Wonderful.
samdougken 2 years ago
Thank you!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
I love it when someone compares me to that legend of a man!! Thank you!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Interesting and moving.
tinySpectacle 2 years ago
Aye so was the Virus :) thank you Lo **hugs**
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
When viruses learn to laugh, I reckon it'll be the last one! Effective soundtrack, adds to the piece.
dashpoet 2 years ago
Well funnily enough I was just thinking that outbreaks are getting like Astrology, Taurus the bullshitter, Pisces the fish, so Im waiting for labels such as Capricorn the Goat Flu, Pisces Cod Liver Oil flu brought to u by seven seas ensuring u can run to the crapper 5 times faster!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
I guess Cancer got there first ...
dashpoet 2 years ago
hahaha!!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago
Nice work. Very timely as well. Come check out some of my spoken word stuff. Peace.
allgoraro 2 years ago
Real trippy poem, man I wrote something actually similar about fear being the sickness..5 stars/fav..I like the effects and the timing too..
IraqIsWhack 2 years ago
Cheers bro, yea this is my usual darker style. Fear being the sickness? Sounds similar to the condition Agrophobia, ten times more frightening when its real!!
VisionGhostPoet 2 years ago