I don't mean to be a 'hater', but based on part one I'm not clicking on to see the other parts (not even for free). If I had a few bits of advice it would be to compress the dead moments between dialogue while still maintaining clear diction. Also, make the initial scenes as colorful and picturesque as possible (rocks and night scenes ain't cuttin' it). This is a horror film and we know that bad things are coming. Bright and cheery early scenes take the edge off. Good luck!
That was done well but I think the narrative in the beginning kind of ruined it. I also think that the name probably could use a polish too cause it tells you way too much about what's going on. Sorry for being such a critic but I just felt like I had to say it.
I can take constructive criticism. I agree with you. My producer and I had a falling out in the middle of the project and I was left to finish it on my own. I was hoping to make it longer but, I felt obligated to my cast and crew to finish the project with the footage I already had. My next project will be alot better! Thanks!
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (1) People got to learn; make a negative criticism, then explain why it is what you think ! Otherwise you look like a 9th grade dropout. So, I'm gonna have to guess for you.
Hollywood adds compression and bass to make that "warm" sound in a narrative. If your editor (machine) doesn't have a compression feature, then you have to go to somebody who does. Most of these service want up to $400 an hour, 4 hr. minimum. Nobody is even going to budge for less than $100.
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (2) What's wrong with the tittle ? Anyone looking for a demon film, will know they have found it, when they see Demon in the tittle, especially when it's the first word appearing in the tittle. And, is not "night" associated with "scarry" ? The tittle... "it tells you way too much about what's going on... " If that was correct , the tittle would be something like, um, "The Four Hiking College Kids & the Demon that Awakes in the Night in the Lonely Forrest"
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (3) As for @prncessleia (funny name for a boy) Cheese ??? Cheese refers to low quality comedy usually to do to a script that does't allow the talent to take their prowes seriously.
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (4) What are some good points about this film ? 1. The narritive expands opon and even conceptuallizes the traditional meaning of "demon". The protaginist's demon is academia. It is implicitly asking, what are your demon(s) ? Your turn to define them to your descretion. (2) Conflict. What is any story without conflict, but no story at all. From the very first line, in this film, you are given the exactly what you sublimely want - conflict. (3)
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (5) What's are some good point about this film ? - Continued (3) Humor. The inter-jection of a brief & subtle humorous image to lighten a stressful situation, ala: boy falls off cliff scene to girls look over the cliff scene, simultaneously, catering to the market for a token boob-scene was so cleveraly timed. And so un-expected !
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (6) As for CTHULHUSURVIVOR - "... make the intial scenes more colorful and picturesque as possible ..." The initial six scences are of nature; grass, flowers, trees, fallen tree limbs, bushes, creek, formation of boulders in the creek-bed, wind and sky. I thought the 3rd scene; with the water at the bottom and the sky and woods in the distence was beautiful. That meets my standards for picturesque in nature. Would you like a ferris wheel or would a peacock do ?
:0 lets have kodak moment in hill country and ill fall off a hill!!! aaahhhh lol I love making fun of b-grade movies :P maybe he fell just to get some booty lol
I love B-movies, too. This project was supposed to be a "starter" project. It didn't turn out as well as I would have liked it to. But, the producer and I had a falling out and I was left to finish the project on my own. Thanks for watching, though!
what this movie misses is GREAT BIG FUCK!!
qwuezalothus 6 months ago
well so far the directing and the filming are good the acting well ...
CorrieKatczynski 1 year ago
At 3:30 that guy should be dead, he fell backwards and would've easily busted his head against a rock.
airfoce2009 1 year ago
Cheeeeeeeeeeeeese.
prncessleia 1 year ago
I don't mean to be a 'hater', but based on part one I'm not clicking on to see the other parts (not even for free). If I had a few bits of advice it would be to compress the dead moments between dialogue while still maintaining clear diction. Also, make the initial scenes as colorful and picturesque as possible (rocks and night scenes ain't cuttin' it). This is a horror film and we know that bad things are coming. Bright and cheery early scenes take the edge off. Good luck!
CTHULHUSURVIVOR 1 year ago
This would be a lot better if it was 7:07 shorter and there wasn't a part two.
TheJomogogo 1 year ago
this film is offensive and degrading to dogs!
azrial4421 1 year ago
mt home made movies are better acting than this click on my name and take a look tell me what you think
Cashello 2 years ago
Terrible acting indeed!This looks like one of those home made movies.Even Cradle Of Fear was better then this!
XDahliaXHideX 2 years ago 2
terrible acting, i am sure i wont be watching any more of this, total crap
davidhaythornthwaite 2 years ago
wow where john fell off...kinda bad acting..no offence
DeadRomance7 2 years ago
That was done well but I think the narrative in the beginning kind of ruined it. I also think that the name probably could use a polish too cause it tells you way too much about what's going on. Sorry for being such a critic but I just felt like I had to say it.
M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 2 years ago
I can take constructive criticism. I agree with you. My producer and I had a falling out in the middle of the project and I was left to finish it on my own. I was hoping to make it longer but, I felt obligated to my cast and crew to finish the project with the footage I already had. My next project will be alot better! Thanks!
zeus210w11th 2 years ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (1) People got to learn; make a negative criticism, then explain why it is what you think ! Otherwise you look like a 9th grade dropout. So, I'm gonna have to guess for you.
Hollywood adds compression and bass to make that "warm" sound in a narrative. If your editor (machine) doesn't have a compression feature, then you have to go to somebody who does. Most of these service want up to $400 an hour, 4 hr. minimum. Nobody is even going to budge for less than $100.
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (2) What's wrong with the tittle ? Anyone looking for a demon film, will know they have found it, when they see Demon in the tittle, especially when it's the first word appearing in the tittle. And, is not "night" associated with "scarry" ? The tittle... "it tells you way too much about what's going on... " If that was correct , the tittle would be something like, um, "The Four Hiking College Kids & the Demon that Awakes in the Night in the Lonely Forrest"
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (3) As for @prncessleia (funny name for a boy) Cheese ??? Cheese refers to low quality comedy usually to do to a script that does't allow the talent to take their prowes seriously.
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (4) What are some good points about this film ? 1. The narritive expands opon and even conceptuallizes the traditional meaning of "demon". The protaginist's demon is academia. It is implicitly asking, what are your demon(s) ? Your turn to define them to your descretion. (2) Conflict. What is any story without conflict, but no story at all. From the very first line, in this film, you are given the exactly what you sublimely want - conflict. (3)
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (5) What's are some good point about this film ? - Continued (3) Humor. The inter-jection of a brief & subtle humorous image to lighten a stressful situation, ala: boy falls off cliff scene to girls look over the cliff scene, simultaneously, catering to the market for a token boob-scene was so cleveraly timed. And so un-expected !
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
@M0Nk3yB34n3dJ3Nk1n5 (6) As for CTHULHUSURVIVOR - "... make the intial scenes more colorful and picturesque as possible ..." The initial six scences are of nature; grass, flowers, trees, fallen tree limbs, bushes, creek, formation of boulders in the creek-bed, wind and sky. I thought the 3rd scene; with the water at the bottom and the sky and woods in the distence was beautiful. That meets my standards for picturesque in nature. Would you like a ferris wheel or would a peacock do ?
BrotherOfLove84 1 year ago
wow he would have died bullony
UndeadBeaner 2 years ago
this is fuccckkkiinnn ggggggggaaaaaaaayyyyyyy do something better u fuckin quers
TheSiCkestT123 2 years ago
:0 lets have kodak moment in hill country and ill fall off a hill!!! aaahhhh lol I love making fun of b-grade movies :P maybe he fell just to get some booty lol
Mandy86lynn 3 years ago
I love B-movies, too. This project was supposed to be a "starter" project. It didn't turn out as well as I would have liked it to. But, the producer and I had a falling out and I was left to finish the project on my own. Thanks for watching, though!
zeus210w11th 2 years ago
are you working on any other projects?
doranda777 2 years ago
Yes. I'm working on a feature length comedy scifi. I hope to be finished this year.
zeus210w11th 2 years ago
quit explaining your self................folks are going to shit on you regardless
pieceofsweets 2 years ago
Man dont tell me this aint real, gerr the one chick is hot.
FAUSTIANDAWN 3 years ago
this hoe made?
Easton2411 3 years ago