Dude, not trying to be negative...but the rhythm guitar at the beginning and throughout the song is out of tune a bit. The lead guitar is staccato, it needs to be legato. Make the notes longer instead of having them end abruptly.
Has a definite happy feeling to it!!! :)) And that's something people like...
Personally, I prefer writing with FL Studio---you can see some of my pieces at my channel if you're interested. Of course they are very different than what you've got here.
I think with some digital mastering, this song could be even better. :)
I agree with ayliffe1. Get some VSTs to liven this up a little. I appreciate your prob more of a guitarist but the drums gets pretty annoying! Check out addicitve drums!
Do u have a MIDI keyboard if so, then DO NOT use the microsoft sw Wavetable synth for drums or anything else for that matter, use VST instruments, you can get hundreds free online.
Bela les paul cara!
caio211cjbr 8 months ago
Yes, I know that this song is out of tune and time however it was my first experience about digital recording...
gofrencio90 9 months ago
nice job man!
store1992 11 months ago
Dude, not trying to be negative...but the rhythm guitar at the beginning and throughout the song is out of tune a bit. The lead guitar is staccato, it needs to be legato. Make the notes longer instead of having them end abruptly.
~Adam
legendAHry 1 year ago 2
Has a definite happy feeling to it!!! :)) And that's something people like...
Personally, I prefer writing with FL Studio---you can see some of my pieces at my channel if you're interested. Of course they are very different than what you've got here.
I think with some digital mastering, this song could be even better. :)
ScottDillardHall 1 year ago
cool. good job
TheRattlerProduction 1 year ago
yea, really need to do something with those drums, gets really annoying after a while.Look at EZDRUMMER. thats the best vsti i found for drums.
SquishBeats 1 year ago
@SquishBeats
naa ezdrummer is lame
use addictive drums or superior drummer 2.0
produccionesmiranejo 1 year ago
We get the point, you have a peice of shit scooter/bike (if you would call it that)
MackTheViking 2 years ago
amazing solo!!!!
reynalee1 2 years ago
I agree with ayliffe1. Get some VSTs to liven this up a little. I appreciate your prob more of a guitarist but the drums gets pretty annoying! Check out addicitve drums!
Like the solo!!
AlexanderCollection 2 years ago
great!
i8i7 2 years ago
Do u have a MIDI keyboard if so, then DO NOT use the microsoft sw Wavetable synth for drums or anything else for that matter, use VST instruments, you can get hundreds free online.
ayliffe1 2 years ago
Quite bad to be honest.
JustStayDown8800 2 years ago
what u talking about? it's great!
gibsonsg3444 2 years ago 2
Nice job man. Guitars are a tiny bit out of tune, but other/wise perfect. Check out mine at /watch?v=RPXhhUNXHD8
JosephIbrahim88 2 years ago
yeah cool but you need to add some velocity to the drums but good stuff! I like the solo.
GFACE83 2 years ago 2
beautiful videos and photos, but why always write in English that I do not understand?
hotantomaldigola 2 years ago
I also like the sound, yeah!
AlbornozEgidio 3 years ago
Great video!
Niox117 3 years ago 2
dude you rock!
angie4josh 3 years ago
I'm sorry but I'm italian and I don't know english very well. I don't understand: "lets sayyy...the triangle?"
Thank you.
gofrencio90 3 years ago
Ever considered a career in, lets sayyy...the triangle?
nemesisprogram 3 years ago
show some respect
gluv1 2 years ago
nahhhhhhhh, don't feel like it.
nemesisprogram 2 years ago