@soccermom4212 Thank you for the critique. I'll take them in consideration next time. Lol I was trying to make it his theme song by making it sound insane, but comical at the same time.
Lost: The instruments here go so well together, I like the feel and the tempo. But I'd prefer for the violin (I think it's a violin, maybe a cello. I'm clueless lol.) to come in later in the song. I see it starting very soft and slow, building instruments as it progresses, then tapering back off.
Darkness: I love this one, too. It's creepy and strangely calm, which is exactly the way I imagine a Darkness Sickness song would be. Also, I noticed the wolf fight sounds blurred in the background. That's perfect. I just have one comment...at 1:12 it seems to get thrown off beat. There are a few instruments in there that aren't the same tempo as the base of the song. I think if you take out the guitar riff (or whatever it is lol) at 1:12, it will be perfect.
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SnowWolf100 2 months ago
@SnowWolf100 thank you
superclayperson99 2 months ago
wow your music is so beautiful you have talent
ilovewolfsxxx 2 months ago
@ilovewolfsxxx thank you ^^
superclayperson99 2 months ago
wow this music is amazing! ^-^
paintdragoness 2 months ago
@paintdragoness thank you
superclayperson99 2 months ago
Oh and don't take my suggestions if you don't agree with them. I don't want to be bossy, especisally considering I'm no musician. So thanks!
soccermom4212 2 months ago
Lovely overall. I can't wait to use these ^^
soccermom4212 2 months ago
@soccermom4212 Thank you for the critique. I'll take them in consideration next time. Lol I was trying to make it his theme song by making it sound insane, but comical at the same time.
superclayperson99 2 months ago
Blind Insanity: Ferno's theme song! It's official! Lol perfect all around.
soccermom4212 2 months ago
Lost: The instruments here go so well together, I like the feel and the tempo. But I'd prefer for the violin (I think it's a violin, maybe a cello. I'm clueless lol.) to come in later in the song. I see it starting very soft and slow, building instruments as it progresses, then tapering back off.
soccermom4212 2 months ago
Darkness: I love this one, too. It's creepy and strangely calm, which is exactly the way I imagine a Darkness Sickness song would be. Also, I noticed the wolf fight sounds blurred in the background. That's perfect. I just have one comment...at 1:12 it seems to get thrown off beat. There are a few instruments in there that aren't the same tempo as the base of the song. I think if you take out the guitar riff (or whatever it is lol) at 1:12, it will be perfect.
soccermom4212 2 months ago
The Silver Light: Yes! Awesome! It's very ambient and fits the theme of the series.
soccermom4212 2 months ago
Peaceful Days: Slightly generic. If you just add a couple things (maybe some violin) It'll be great. But I'm not a musical genius.
soccermom4212 2 months ago
I love these! You're in. Let me make seperate comments for each song lol. I want to tell you what I think of each.
soccermom4212 2 months ago