Vin, you did a great job with this short. It tells a story, as you say of a circular narrative, so that I can see how the beginning came about, and see how it would continue to replay for them until the real issue was resolved. I look forward to having you as part of "The Conversation".
Um, having issues are we now? You would think that people would support gay film makers instead of harassing them about one of their productions not being about something gay. The key word is because he, the film maker, is gay. Get over your issues and find some way to express yourself in a positive light.
i have sooooo many questions :S...why'd the freak take the handsome dude and leave the chick alone? who is the sinner? are they mourning over their childs loss? didnt they both contemplate suicide? why didnt she die? and finally why is the demon spotting a beer gut :P :P ok 4get the last one but some1 summarize this clip for me!!
The sound was a little weird. The art direction was great. The camera work could've been better. The acting seemed a little forced especially when they were yelling at each other. But the story was REALLY good. I liked it! 5 Stars!
Con: Some of the framing/camera work while they're talking in the dining room. The shot selections could have been a little better (handheld vs stationary; lookspace). The editing had a couple of early shots that seemed to be quick, as if they were only to keep continuity together.
Pro: The art direction and use of color (especially red). The actors are very good. The music is perfect for the story along with the use of sound effects to invoke a feeling (creepy). I also like the way the shot with her hanging and the crucifix in the background work together.
haha i get it it a made up mini triller horror thing with the wiered man
that man in black made me laugh
what is that man haha
realy
me0me0hehehehe 2 years ago
anyone no why there are no trailers to the film the pact with megan mullally in
and she was choking then turned round and said your late so quick haha
me0me0hehehehe 2 years ago
c'est pourri ! translation ==>> that sucks
seferya 3 years ago
K, this had potential until that fat guy in spandex and the dimestore ringu sound fx. B4 that I was totally engaged with the characters and story.
kallistiX1 3 years ago
i would love to know why this is under the 'gay' tag. Is it relevant to it or is it referrin to the expression 'that's so gei'.
leojboby 3 years ago 2
I encourage any and all criticism (positive or negative), but refrain from personal or offensive remarks or I will remove comments without regard.
faroh73 3 years ago
Vin, you did a great job with this short. It tells a story, as you say of a circular narrative, so that I can see how the beginning came about, and see how it would continue to replay for them until the real issue was resolved. I look forward to having you as part of "The Conversation".
TheHIVConversation 3 years ago
Um, having issues are we now? You would think that people would support gay film makers instead of harassing them about one of their productions not being about something gay. The key word is because he, the film maker, is gay. Get over your issues and find some way to express yourself in a positive light.
TheHIVConversation 3 years ago
oh yeah and where does the gay part come in?? :P it's in ur keyword!!
RimzMeow 4 years ago
As the director/screenwriter I identify as a gay male, and therefore posted my film in groups with gay themes or creators. I think it's qualified.
faroh73 4 years ago
i have sooooo many questions :S...why'd the freak take the handsome dude and leave the chick alone? who is the sinner? are they mourning over their childs loss? didnt they both contemplate suicide? why didnt she die? and finally why is the demon spotting a beer gut :P :P ok 4get the last one but some1 summarize this clip for me!!
RimzMeow 4 years ago
All I can say is think of it as a mythic circular narrative. Shrug.
faroh73 4 years ago
I think it's pretty damn great...good work
brennalozano 5 years ago
Eerie yes, reminds me of David Lynch's work, I liked it,keep up the good work!
WildChildAlienFilms 5 years ago
not bad, i liked it
EEEmovies 5 years ago
Also the song was really cool.
TheSe7enthSon 5 years ago
The sound was a little weird. The art direction was great. The camera work could've been better. The acting seemed a little forced especially when they were yelling at each other. But the story was REALLY good. I liked it! 5 Stars!
TheSe7enthSon 5 years ago
Con: Some of the framing/camera work while they're talking in the dining room. The shot selections could have been a little better (handheld vs stationary; lookspace). The editing had a couple of early shots that seemed to be quick, as if they were only to keep continuity together.
But overall, pretty fucking awesome.
happytimeharry 5 years ago
Pro: The art direction and use of color (especially red). The actors are very good. The music is perfect for the story along with the use of sound effects to invoke a feeling (creepy). I also like the way the shot with her hanging and the crucifix in the background work together.
happytimeharry 5 years ago