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  • Legit

  • @Sigrestbrandon it's great how was it hard for u

  • @mybest333 it was good.  But if YOU want u can listen to maybe like eminem or any rapper to get more ideas for you so

  • SOMEONE HMU PLLLZZZZZ. IM WRITING A RAP SONG FOR SCIENCE CLASS!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ PLZ PLZ<3333

  • PLEASE REPLY - i have been working on this since yesterday, and it seems kind of quick, but i made a song, and finished before i found this video... man you weaker than Tyler the Creator don't even seek help from a mediator your destruction leads to my construction your induction to the hall of fame means nothing but shame everything you stand for is a set up rig that's why nobody even comes to your gig let me tell you it was a great addiction but now I must fight this infliction HOW IS IT???
  • Does this guy actually talk like that or is trying to be black?

  • please i need to get contact with you cuz i want to be a start i know how to dance but dont know how to make songs so please givve me a phone number so i can call you or add me on fab my name is anne kerry monvilus please dont eggnore me its my biggest dream ever i am 14 years old thanks already

  • how to make a GREAT rap song:

    step 1:write offensive lycrics and sing them fast in a beat

    step 2:add a nostalgic music sound or brodyquest or some nice music to the background while you sing

    step 3:????

    step 4:PROFIT

  • All of what I have actually happened at one point.

  • Every school id go theyd say nah bro just quit before you try to take a chew outah life and get bit.

    They think they know me but this child they'd see who they think is happy is full of sadness and anger

    Towards all these other kids and thinkin bout hangin himself with a hanger...

    So what do you guys think bout wat i have so far?

  • hey check out my song "what did i do" its kind of a personal song but you can tell me on how i can improve

  • yo like he said he had moments in his life that he hadd to thank god im just getn started with my raps yo all u got 2 do is reach 4 the sky and grab his hand and till him ur demand im not tryn 2 be rude but once god is in ur life every thing will be alright my life was filled with darkness and then there was light now u wouldnt know that till u see from my sight and i just might go again if every thing alright

  • not making a diss song again

  • half his moustache is missing

  • Thanx man...it's gonna help me with my music assignment...^_^

  • That was some sick freestyling

  • really helpfull. thanks for these man. cool dude.

  • you could of uploaded this video faster and saved us time if you would of only told us to make some sense with our rhymes.

  • If You Need to be taught How to Rap You Have No business Rapping. @KINGOFRAP FOLLOW THAT!

  • Lil wayne should watch this

  • Ya cuz rap lyrics have fellings

  • I got notn to dooo so I was forced to watch ur videooo word I'm out LOL that sucked hahaha I fail at rappin

  • Babbaa Spaaxxxx lol :)

  • Check out my sounds if you like dark... inspire me!

  • I bet dis Homboy from Texas

    H-town Representin

  • I feel bad dat I get studio time but dont take my rapping serious ..........

  • Im 15 and ive been writen for awhile but just started up my channel. If you could come check me out and tell me what i need to do to improve i would appreciate it. Give me some thumbs up to help me get started out. Just tryin to persue my dreams.

  • support the underground industry, check out you tube . com / altimit online, official music page

  • i like how this is the first time i've seen an english speaking white man with subtitles... Just sayin

  • u see wa um sayin?

  • jelly roll!!!

  • thumbs up if you think lil wayne should watch this video, he doesn't make any sense

  • EVERYONE WHO THUMBS UP ON PLUCKOFFICIAL COMMENT COME TO MY ACCOUNT BECAUSE I CLOSED MY OLD ACCOUNT, WHICH WAS PLUCKIFFICIAL. I CLOSED IT CAUSE OF THIS ONE HATER BUT THIS IS MY NEW ACCOUNT SOO YEAH!

  • your a good at rap and writen raps

  • see i want to make music and get known around my city; not to be world famous but to tell people whats goin on in my head and how i feel; like tyler :/

  • im just trying to learn how to go fast, like busta rythmes fast

  • Can i have the lyrics that you said cuz they sound cool

  • i like how in the beginning when he was saying rhymes he says Dr.suess rhymes

  • Im new knew to rapping

    Getting excited and crapping

    If you know what I mean

    Im lovin this rhyme scheme

  • Hey check out my one and only video on my page, i wrote my lyrics, made my beat and even photoshopped me a nice album art. Please let me know what you think!!

  • lol fail movember advert in december...

    but still a great ad for a great charity

  • yeh thanks now i know im doing raps correctly

  • @PluckOfficial  me too

  • he did that with ease urrgh

  • pm i want to send u a rap i made up from ur advice

  • Over 100 of the best ever rappers teach you how in the book, How to Rap...learn from the best

  • you know hat im saying

  • @PluckOfficial I wanna be a official singer.

  • Honestly i started rapping a year ago and i mean i never went on youtube and looked at these videos but thing is everything he talks about i did and now im waaaay better than a year ago not sayin that im super great but ive improved alot and well i have a rap crew which its me and my homie and were gunna get a mixtape released on March 20th were calledd NGR look us on facebook itll have a green background

  • I Just Cant Do It, I Need Some one To Give The Lyrics. I Sat At The computer All Night On Microsoft Thinkin Of Lyrics But Nothing Came Up.

  • @Uk202trooper1 haha, try a rhyme dictionary online, they have multi syllable rhymes like this guy is talking about. Just looking at it is gunna get u going. Also, when you're bored, read a dictionary and write down longer words that have a good sound to them :)

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  • Yo you are good I been rapping for year but ii did not understand the music lingo at all. I watched you joint about bar and chorus's and some others and finally got some understanding. Keep it coming.

  • is it me or does this guy talk about food a lot

  • I really want to become a rapper but there's no hope for people from New Zealand because its such a small country and theres no opportunities :(

  • @Licence2KO u have equipment dude? i can get u a lil fame here in Cali :)

  • @310marco Nope not really any equipment lol, how would you do that im across the world?

  • @Licence2KO i was ganna say if u wanted to colab lol cuz i have done colabs with ppl over the internet that i never met lol!

  • @Licence2KO Lol im keen to battle though, which beat you wna use?

  • @PluckOfficial Follow ur dreams

  • @wolborg3 I am here to enlighten you on the pretentiousness of (c)rap. I have talent, just not in a failed attempt at music.

  • i kinda liked the tree that was blue, it was fun and creative....lool but i can see what your saying....you want content at is elevated,..right. Well thats cool you got a cool channel and you goota anice flow.

  • Rap is not music. Call it what you will, just not music. Music requires actual instruments or singing.rap is talking with a beat made by a computer playing in the background. Not music. Call it poetry, just not music.

  • @SkylitDriveFan123 Are you kidding me? I am a classically trained pianist who is formerly educated in music theory and it very much is music. Poetry is NOT set to a musical time signature like rap is. It's vocal percussion. The drumming of vocals with the entire spotlight falling on flow and rhythm. IF you're actually educated in music you will notice how rappers fit their lyrics over the certain amount of kicks and snares in the beat's percussion. NOT poetry.....

  • @PluckOfficial if u want to become a professinal rapper you'll have to learn how to count music. get a book on percussion rudiments

  • @50CentOfficialClips well this guy is jellyroll & is an amazing artist

  • @50CentOfficialClips you saying eminem cant rap

  • @VioLenTBlaZex1 no hes just one of a kind

  • No. I don't know what you're saying :D

  • yoo i like this dude hes foreal

  • SOOOO good!!!

    

  • Real talk.. rap is a lyrical art form that any ethnicity could indulge in.. there are no boundaries on what genre a person seeks to express themselves through music..

  • Eminem isn't black my friend

  • "That wasn't lyrical. That was ignorant."

  • JELLY ROLL!!!!!!!! i love this dude (an actual rapper)

  • this large puerto rican man is stoned off his mind

  • So pretty much your fucking telling people to be all hard core when there not man like fuck u your just some stupid ass fucking red neck who has some nigger friends and I bet u wish every night u were just as black as them

  • i think hes been hanging out with a little to many black people.

  • i stay fly do u see see that man so high if i made a bad song thumps up

  • @ttlittle1

    Check My New Hpw To rap Video....... This Oens Good, But My Go More Indepth With Multie syllable Rhyem Sches, And How To Actualy Be Better

  • yo yo my name is mike i like 2 ride my bike and i also think that u should take a hike now look at that piece of crap it must b wearing a cap im not even sure this is a rap but if u want me 2 stay youll have 2 pay and i might even say hey give me some clay im only 11 years old so i understand if my rap is bad thumbs up if u like
  • who the fuck does tutorials on how to rap and second of all i've never even heard

    of this guy.

  • "i once had a tree and it was blue, and i was cool, and my momma was true...what it dew?"

    damn i had something similar to that written down! i gotta start from scratch now! Fuck!

  • Why are we comparing Metal to Rap? They're two completely different genres!

  • I don't have to put these word into rhythm for u to know it's a rap haters gone hate and fighters gone fight but imma spit two words like one an two and u better believe it's gone be a fuckin knock out

  • Ive just made a rap and i have used all rhymes and cant think of More!!!!

  • excagra.. lol

  • Rap is incapable of evolving, this its popularity will plumit when people get educated enough to realize that. Rap takes no sophistication or education. In 40+ years rap has not evolved in any way, shape, or form. In the same span of time, metal has evolved to a point that would take other genres centuries to. That which does not adapt dies, ask the dinosaurs, they didn't adapt.

  • The best way to become a rapper is to get angry as hell and then start writing the stuff you hate on a piece of paper than fabricate the word into rhyme and verses that suits your style, same goes to other genre, especially grunge and metal which is my personal favourite.Im a guitarist and I wrote songs, so..i dont know what dafuck I just said.

  • i'm wrapping up the rhyme like a smooth poetry

    with the funk in the tongue, fuckin' punk will get you stung like a bee

    i started with a lopp,then a shoop, damn , I'll shoot

    with hip hop,i pump up,pump up, I'll never stop

    It's time to get rough , guv had enough of sucking up

    to tha big fat bum , listen up, here I come

  • Rap is pretentious. The "underground" proves it. Rap needs its own special word to describe an "artist" who is undiscovered or is not mainstream. Any other genre doesn't need it's own word to feel special. Rap beats also take no talent or creativity. No notes or real instruments. If there are no real instruments and it isn't dubstep, it isn't music. It is pretending to be music.

  • @SkylitDriveFan123

    Mozart is real music, but rap is still fun as hell

  • A guy I know had a debate about music. He said rap is difficult because you need to rhyme more words than in other music. I made the argument that needing to rhyme restricts your lyrics and then proved that rhyming words is not difficult. Observe. Stick, tick, flick, trick, sick. Tie, lie, try, fly, high, dry. Gun, run, bun, nun, sun, ton. Observe, conserve. Blow, throw, mow, hoe, dough, grow. And so on

  • @SkylitDriveFan123 You are obviously a moron Rap is alot harder to make then gay Skylit Drive. You were only naming common words used, not compounds like this guy was talking about. And I would consider Rap more of music than Dubstep cause Dubstep is completely made by a computer and not all rap beats are done by computers plus Rap has lyrics. I also love that you consider Metalcore music and not Rap when every Metalcore band is exactly the same.

  • @poserdisposer69 BULL SHIT! My point wasn't how hard big the word is, it was that rhyming words is incredibly easy. Part of my 1st grade education was to list a few words that rhyme. Now shut the fuck up or I will stab you with a KNIFE after I kill your wife. See, two very simple rhymes. Rap 'beats' take no talent or thought. No musical notes are written. Metal Core actually involves writing notes and can convey emotion without needing lyrics, rap needs lyrics to convey emotion. I am right again

  • @SkylitDriveFan123 You don't need notes to feel emotion and if you watched the video you would know that I'm am not just talking about ryming big words I'm talking about rhyming multiple syllables. I am sick of everyone in Metal, including people that listen to your garbage, always saying Rap sucks and is for the mentally challenged , yeah Drake sucks but he isn't even a rapper. Why don't you go listen to some good Rap then come say that there is no thought process behind it.

  • @poserdisposer69 dude don't hate Metal just because some metalheads hate rap,Rap and Metal are 2 great genres so don't make this war worst

  • @666nothingleft I don't hate Metal, my favorite kind of music is Death Metal but I'm a saying that every other MetalHead is too stupid to see that Rap is music.

  • @SkylitDriveFan123 " rhyme restricts your lyrics and then proved that rhyming words is not difficult. Observe. Stick, tick, flick, trick, sick. Tie, lie, try, fly, high, dry. Gun, run, bun, nun, sun, ton. Observe, conserve. Blow, throw, mow, hoe, dough, grow. And so on"

    When you try and prove a point your rhyme skills are invalid. You have the lyrical capability of a 1st grader.

  • Good Advice bro..thanks

  • this guy i so rite hes baically sayin to all u new rappers dont be like lilwayne be like eminem whn u rap

  • this is funny not cuz hes a caucasian fluffy guy in a shirt but cuz i didnt kno ppl needed a tutorial on rappin it shud just come to u feel me it hud just be a natural sumthin happened rap bout it it help to read the thasaurous tho

  • What?

  • 10 facts about you:

    1.You are reading this comment

    2.You are realizing that this is a stupid fact

    4.You didn't notice that i skipped three.5 your checking now

    6.Your smilling

    7.You are still reading my comment

    9.You didn't realize i skipped eight

    10.You're checking again and smilling about ho you fell for it again

    11.You're enjoying this 12. You didn't realize there are only supposed to be ten facts.post this to one video and tomorow will be the best day eve

  • Jelly Roll!!!!

  • I searched this but I didn't watch,

    I broke tips like I was just hatched.

    Now I paused for a while, probably 30 minutes

    cause for now I have to admit that this is my limit

    I'm a coward, feeling smaller than Muggsey, though I could be bigger than Howard.

    I disregarded flow for a while, you know why? because pure words are my prime.

    So for now, I'm not gonna quit, I'm just gonna write this as my last

    I got temporarily lit, similar to this little match..

  • I'm an aspiring rapper. I'm hoping to influence people through my music. I'll be posting videos of my raps, and hope that I'll progress through time.

  • It's also important to relate your lyrical content to your life and use a little imagination to add creativity. Example: Lord please forgive me for these insane sentences. But the boy been sinning sense pain injured his innocents. Raised him in villages were the under privilege is under paid ,so getting paid raise a minor to menace this. A little feeling with honesty and word play.

  • if i sent my lyrics to you could you give me a little feedback?

  • fantastic advice

    im making a rap song and didn't know where to start and you just started me off

    so thanks

  • He is high lol but good tips

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  • you are really good!!

  • are you sure

  • Can y'all forget about the fact that he's white, and take his advice 'cos it's pretty good. Stop segregating yourselves then complaining about it later.

  • I know there is alot of people giving this guy crap for being white, but he actually has pretty good advice.

  • Anyone want 2 learn how to rap/emcee pm me. Am gonna give free lessons for a limited time/ period

  • thumbs up for jelly roll!

  • keep pressing 9

  • wow youtube is all haters i swear. i dont know i think you have so serious skills. white boys word up

    

  • pause it at 0:04

    

  • ur a fuckin bitch not thinkin bout shit talkin 2 ppl like its a game wen rly ur lame.

  • haha a guy named jelly role, hidin in a studio like a big belly troll, i like dissin thats how i roll, i'm a pissed off teen with no soul, so pay my toll and take your ration, drugs took away my compassion but not my passion to keep mashin these illicit thoughts that were self taught and explicit. ya my life i miss it but i'm ready to kiss it and risk it with these slit wrist. fuck mainstream rap

  • I New A Kid Named Drew At 15 He was Abused/

    At 16 His Life Was A Bitch Just Used He Tried to Join A Gang Crew/

    2 Years Later people Lookin At Him Like Yo What Happened To You/

    He Skipped School Just To Hang Out WIth Ignorant Fools/

    A Week Later He Ended Up Dead In His Mom's Swimming Pool/

    Decisions Are Like A Boomerang It Can Hit You Hard Or Soft/

    Be Happy With What God Brought Cause In The End You Choose/

    Its Certainly True This Is A Tough Game I Stand Bold Fearless Not To Lose/

    emotional Rap C

  • Yo im 15 im english and i love rapping i want to do it myself but every time i start rapping or freestyling i get a mind block wich basicly means i cant find nothing to rhyme it really annoys me and it really fucks up my confidence i just want some help and tips thanks.

  • @thedoakes13 Do you need some help??

  • Ya'll know his name is Jelly Roll? He's signed with Three 6 mafia right..

  • No I Don't Know What Your Saying!

  • I slipped some rohypnol inside of your alcohol

    waiting for you to drink it all

    by the time that you doze off ive taken your clothes off

    i think i like roofies just as much as you boobies

    respect

    

  • i like the blue tree bar better than the south knocking them out lol

  • that wasn't lyrical, it was ignorant.  Haha

  • bad glossy puns all ad nauseam

    rap jaws become one fad posse front

    that caused sheep from struggling masked cocky chums

    ironclad thoughts benumb so no sad flaws debunk

    you add gauze because those bad thoughts begun

    bad thoughts need rum ‘cause you never have flossed the gums

    what has caused the rub? Is it how dad spawned the son?

    did dad awe the mum with some mad shots, redone?

    but forgot to facade the dong before the lad lost the cum?

    compound syllables, know what I'm sayin'?

  • Cat and hat rhyme...but Ecetera doesn't! - Joke

  • Lil Wayne is Ignorant...

  • who gives a fuck if hes fat? he know how to rap so shut yo traps. Nigguh

  • i think you're the only rapper worse than Justin Bieber

  • @JaredGivens1 are you fucking stupid. yes

  • Thank you !!!

    

  • shouldve known not to trust expert village! whatw rong with me?

  • wow wow nop nop nop is that a fat guy trying to tell me how to rap lol

    oh shit what is going on

  • i hate ads

  • Nice I like that

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  • That wasnt lyrical, that was ignorent

  • im good at write raps but bad at rapping them. if anyone wants to make a youtube rap please message me about what you want to rap about and i will message you back with some lines. someone give me a shot?

  • Pause at 1:33 ;D

  • @Ggaby6977 lol

  • Leave this for the black people

  • @mprefero stfu u ass hole u a hater bitch ass

  • if this guy know that why is not legend like tupac XD XD

  • sorry but i dont take rap advise from a fat white guy in a striped shirt....

  • @414Media I'm sure he will cry himself to sleep because random internet guy #23,451 doesn't like the way he looks or is suspicious of his product. Thanks for the laugh and have a great day.

  • @414Media sorry but he probably better than you, why don't you actually upload some shit and lemme know how easy it is to rap

  • @Scotlank You can't really teach someone how to rap man some people have it some don't thats just life

  • @SIRHENNY1 yeah you can't teach flow or style but good lyricism is something you can always improve on

  • @414Media

    shut up 

  • @414Media What about one of the greatest there is Vinnie Paz?

  • @414Media He obviously know's more than you if you're even on this video >.>

  • @414Media You're an idiot! if you heard this guy rap you would probly shit yourself

  • @414Media maybey ppl dont like gay comments from a bigliped fridchicken guzzing black guy whith a dick in his ass and idgaf what ppl reply

  • @414Media ah shut up he's doing his best you mug. if you don't like it, don't comment.

  • @414Media Thats because your a fucking Nigga aint you! Come Get me!