@Akirasan The "fashion" montage seemed to have been done poorly...it needed to be more sparatic, and it didn't seem to montage-y without some montage music to go with it. I felt it should have moved faster.
Katie's voice was...bad. It needed some work. More thought, more feeling. We won't touch on my own voice acting because since the first episode I have been complaining about how bad I do. Anyways...Better luck on the next episode, I suppose.
BAH! Such a long wait and I feel this could have been done better!
dumba54 1 year ago
@dumba54 I'm always open to suggestions and criticism.
Akirasan 1 year ago
@Akirasan The "fashion" montage seemed to have been done poorly...it needed to be more sparatic, and it didn't seem to montage-y without some montage music to go with it. I felt it should have moved faster.
Katie's voice was...bad. It needed some work. More thought, more feeling. We won't touch on my own voice acting because since the first episode I have been complaining about how bad I do. Anyways...Better luck on the next episode, I suppose.
dumba54 1 year ago
MRS CRUMPLEBOTTOM! <3
SnapshotOfASoul 1 year ago
My lines seem really crunched and poppy. Hmm.
SnapshotOfASoul 1 year ago