Soo, Boy loves girl, has second thought, changes mind, hopes she'll come back...Miraculously comes back. I've seen this kind of short film before. Great cinematography, visuals, setting and Quality falls short to poor screen/scriptwriting. Also Kevin is abnormally tall - as always, but it seems to upset the proportions when posed next to the girl. Don't know if that was intentional though. In any other case, I'm just being picky and I liked it anyways. Great start guys. Cheers
I (Hao Lin) really appreciate the fact that instead of bashing, you gave a very detailed description on what was wrong and what was right. Thank you! I agree with you that my script writing falls short of extraordinary and that it doesn't even come close but I tried my best to have a story to catch the audience. As for the height difference it was not intentional, the 2 actors were the only people i could find on such short notice. Again Thank you very much.
is this based on a true story..
manyxsmiles 1 month ago
SWEET DOLLA TEA FROM MCDONALD'S, I DRINK THAT.
RightToBaerArms 4 months ago
@RightToBaerArms
SUPA HOT FIA, I SPIT THAT
iFSProduction 4 months ago
Great work. I think the script could have been a bit better, but it'll get there in time my man. But keep with the movement. Official.
TheOfficiality 4 months ago
That logo is sick.
aznboi4sa1e 5 months ago
who else thought that spot on the kid's arm was a bug or something but it turned out to be a mole
rzheng3489 5 months ago 4
thumbs up if you spotted a faggot taking a seat on a bench at 3:18
IVIrPimp 5 months ago 19
Soo, Boy loves girl, has second thought, changes mind, hopes she'll come back...Miraculously comes back. I've seen this kind of short film before. Great cinematography, visuals, setting and Quality falls short to poor screen/scriptwriting. Also Kevin is abnormally tall - as always, but it seems to upset the proportions when posed next to the girl. Don't know if that was intentional though. In any other case, I'm just being picky and I liked it anyways. Great start guys. Cheers
tootsie400 5 months ago
@tootsie400
I (Hao Lin) really appreciate the fact that instead of bashing, you gave a very detailed description on what was wrong and what was right. Thank you! I agree with you that my script writing falls short of extraordinary and that it doesn't even come close but I tried my best to have a story to catch the audience. As for the height difference it was not intentional, the 2 actors were the only people i could find on such short notice. Again Thank you very much.
iFSProduction 5 months ago
Fucking yes.
JDropssx 5 months ago