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  • ohhhhh bad Joe and Brooke lol

  • Im so glad— Brooke starts, but I cut her off.

    Shut up, I breathe and I lean in.

    HAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!! shut up. Thats so funny!!!!

  • like u know in movies when the girl like goes crazy when a guy kisses her neck? well, thats how it is for brooke, like her neck (lik everyone else) has a spot that it... feels the beat at lo

  • Kevin is startled, so he jumps up. Right at that moment, we hit a bump and it sends Kevin flying. Like, literally flying through the air. He lands on the floor with a loud thud and both Molly and Brooke have horrified expressions on their faces. I myself am grinning like a fool. It just looked so cool! I wish it were me Ive always wanted to fly.. lmao! I FREAKING CRACKED UP AT THIS PART!I WANNA FLY TOO!

  • Ahahha

    I KNoW!

    AHAH

  • WHOA!! One word. Intense.

  • Sorry i didnt get to comment.

    Great chapterrr :)

    I saw ftsk.

    awesomeee!

  • Really?! That's SO cool !!! :D Did you get the duet w/ Selena Gomez today?

  • OMJ IT DIDNT TELL ME U POSTED!!!!!

    ahhh ti is getting hot up in there! lol

  • oh lalaaaa! xDD

  • "I myself am grinning like a fool. It just looked so cool! I wish it were me Ive always wanted to fly "

    hahahhahah this part was great

  • haha everyone's making out, nice! xD

    Although, I did laugh when Kevin went flying lol

    When something like that happens, I normally ask if the person's okay first, then, if they are, I just burst out laughing. It's just a routine I go through lol

    Ooh! Someone's getting a little heated! I know they can't go far but eh..what the heck lol

    Awesome chapter xxx

  • you are such an amazing writer!!!! i love your stories soo much!!! =) xxx

  • wooow lol

    intense haha

  • love it more plz!

  • noo!!!! post more!!!! plz? **baby face**

  • that was well awsm waitin for the next oneeeeeee with my fingers crossed that joe doesn't break his promise

  • love it love it

  • oh wow!

    lol that sounded so dorky ^^ haha

    awesome chapter =]

  • awesome chapter !

    cant wait for the next :)

    i like read your series in 2 days and their totally awesome :)

    you have really good writing skills !

  • arg! cliffy -.-"

    lol

    awesome chapter! supper funny:D

    please post soon

  • Oh no!!!!!

  • noooo..stop it..dont make him break his promise and 4get his morals...omg...they need 2 be stopped somehow

  • hahaha joe wants to fly... he shud drink REDBULL GIVES U WINGS srry inside joke haha. lol great chater!! wow they were getting busy.... lol

  • omg i can't believe you stoped there!!!! lol

    plz post mooore!!!!!

  • ahh. what an ending. that chapter was worth waiting for! cant wait for the next one!!

  • Kool

  • oh sheeet. lol

    i can't wait for the next one :)

    this one was cute. more nick and summer please!

  • amazing....joe =]

  • gees why did you stop there!!!

  • OMJ!

    You can not stop here!

    Please please please post soooooon :D

    ♥

  • OMGGGGGG your so evil!!!! how could you stop it there!?

  • Omg wats gonna happen cant wait :)

  • um, wow! they're getting busy backk there haha

    dont just stop there!!

  • you can NOT stop there...then again you can im reading new moon 2nyt so im goin 2 sleep......sorry im selfish but oh well hahahaha

  • I myself am grinning like a fool. It just looked so cool! I wish it were me Ive always wanted to fly

    rotfl! joe....joe,joe,joe...XD

  • moreee

  • Gosh... YT wouldn't let me finish my comment xD Okay, here goes... I love you buckets, you know that :D Oh oh oh, wait, I just realized I've got the best one yet ^^,

    I love you three amazingly awesome naked marble babies :D

  • Holy shiz :D This is intenseeee. <3 it!

  • OMG you seriously can't, mark my words, CAN'T leave us hanging there!! That is soooooooo CRUEL!!! Haha I just realized everyone's making out.... what if Frankie/Denise/Kevin Sr. decide to show up xD That'd be kinda AWKWARD!! xD Sorry, I just love that word xD I laughed sooooo hard at the 'It just looked so cool!' lol xD I can totally imagine Joe spacing out like that xD Okay, I know this isn't much of a comment, but you know I'm like almost sleeping at the moment, so this is all you're gonna get

  • amazingggg.

    joe and brookeee areee gettinnn it on!

    lmao.

  • OMG you can NOT stop there!!! please please please post more (: one more today! please!!! :D

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