it was pretty good, the dialogue was in fitting with the genre. Concerning the music the on thing you have to remember is that when you have music over a scene you can change everything about the story. If there had been more dramatic intense music at the end, then it wouldnt have been as quirky and slightly humorous. I thought it was really good, keep it up
I have to disagree with the music statement. I thought the more upbeat music added a sense of ironic quirkiness. The filming and camera angles were also very well done. Simple, yet very expressive.
Okay? I really don't understand why people are saying the film is bad. Its really good, except for the music, the second song was to up beat for the scene. Other from that, its great! =D
For a young guy, I was impressed. My only negative was the music. The first song, while a great song, did not fit the genre at all. The third song was too upbeat for the scene. If you could have looped the middle music througout, I think it would have come together a bit better.
To all you haters, give the guy some credit. It was a great effort. If you would put useful critiques here he might learn something.
I am expecting to get that extra 10 seconds next week, I mean I was just gipped 10 seconds of 4 minute film school, my life, my world, my everything is crumbling before my eyes
good angling/shots, acting, depite his age, and good soundtrack and editing. the stairs comment was quite depressing. but the plot-line could have been better. yeah.
how do they get that movie voice so clear, or idk what it is it just sounds different in the movies. I have a pretty low voice and when i try recording myself speaking in a low, rich voice it still just sounds different. What do they do in the movies that is so different? just better quality equiptment? or do they do some kind of effect, like echo or dull?
Congratulations on making your budgeted time (though I'm not sure I should be congratulating you because it was somebody else's work). I think this is the first 4MFS that actually made it in under 4 minutes. Great job!!
That was damn impressive, Griffin. Nice job with the writing, photography, direction... A stylish and funny short. Don't listen to those nerds who can't comprehend there not being the scheduled show - they haven't been outside in a while.
come on dudes i wait every week to watch tips on filmmaking and i get this not cool i really was disapointed when this was on you guys should of had this as a weekend extra
good job dude that was pretty deep in many ways that few will understand and the shots were great too and your use of wording was awesome so yeah great job and keep it up
it's sad, because good filmmakers want to learn from these shows. for some reason i feel indy mogul has been running out of ideas to show. if your going to show other people's movies don't use valuable showtime. make another show for it.
It's was cool....I really liked the song in the beginning. That was a good choice.
henryvrgl 2 years ago
i dont want to offend any one but the british accent works alot better.
indy mogul rules!!!!
Brainbox97 2 years ago
i liked this video :)
great vid 6C
123oliveira7 3 years ago
I WONT BE GOING TO HIS PAGE!!!
cousinedd 3 years ago
that was a bit weird but it's very good filming and quite funny how he's a failure because of the F! hahaha!!!!
snowtigerz101 3 years ago
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his voice sucks
Lunatic4ever 3 years ago
because hes cool
poppyl90 3 years ago
how did you make the title screen
halo3player45 3 years ago
Go watch some good Noir films like
"The Third Man"
"Touch of Evil"
"Double Indemnity"
or "M"
Those are great films.
Noir isn't just about being sad and in black and white (Thats just emo)
monkeysinacan 3 years ago
guys, it wasn't that bad... especially for a little kid.
RicketyTickety 3 years ago
The Movie was well shot...but...I couldn't take it the least bit seriously.
thebaloob123 3 years ago 3
well that was boring.
monkeysinacan 3 years ago
Well, there was no problem in this story, and that what creats a plot, so in short this short film has no plot.
navetube 3 years ago
did I just see steve nelson in a Dominos commercial?
tonez9207 3 years ago
not the best I've seen!
ThomasIsTired 3 years ago 2
meh, it was alright.
kind of a one-trick pony.
braden11ton 3 years ago
halo armour!!!!!!!!!!!
zorlord6 3 years ago
that movie was a failure,
lolololololololololololol
frozensnakee 3 years ago
that episode is totally sucking!!!
don't do it again(((
Gekkology 3 years ago
and the 4 minute lesson would bee....
luka27tramuzgan 3 years ago
Man that was terrible, excuse me... my eyes are bleeding...
boondocksaint909 3 years ago
omfg 10 seconds left.
that's an extra ten seconds next time.
With Indy Mogul's new long distance plan, you can save your minutes from the month before, and use them later!
Great film though. I just.. might check his other stuff out. good choice guys
bordonthestreet 3 years ago
pretty good indeed
poolboyinla 3 years ago
emo...
mjmstudios 3 years ago
the film was pretty cool but i would have preferred a regular ep
Oetampje 3 years ago 2
Pretty damn good for a kid who's probably like 12 years old. I couldn't have done that when i was in middle school.
SirusX11 3 years ago 6
The vid was pretty stupad. And I was suspecting a how to. Now I am sad. Very dissapointing
LifesCrazyView 3 years ago
You were suspecting at how to from the title 'Viewer Film Screening'?
Good lord... And the word is "stupid", something you obviously are.
ElZomboFantasma 3 years ago
it was pretty good, the dialogue was in fitting with the genre. Concerning the music the on thing you have to remember is that when you have music over a scene you can change everything about the story. If there had been more dramatic intense music at the end, then it wouldnt have been as quirky and slightly humorous. I thought it was really good, keep it up
funkywoman500 3 years ago
I have to disagree with the music statement. I thought the more upbeat music added a sense of ironic quirkiness. The filming and camera angles were also very well done. Simple, yet very expressive.
paperthinhymn09 3 years ago
Okay? I really don't understand why people are saying the film is bad. Its really good, except for the music, the second song was to up beat for the scene. Other from that, its great! =D
KamelFilms 3 years ago
I noticed all the people attacking this kids film are kids themselves.
1. Children should be seen and not heard. So unless you have something constructive to say then shut the fuck up and go back behind mummy's skirts.
2. Great Job Griffin! Don't let these little wankers get to you. You'll be the one making feature films while they are serving fast food.
StinkyKnobcheese 3 years ago
For a young guy, I was impressed. My only negative was the music. The first song, while a great song, did not fit the genre at all. The third song was too upbeat for the scene. If you could have looped the middle music througout, I think it would have come together a bit better.
To all you haters, give the guy some credit. It was a great effort. If you would put useful critiques here he might learn something.
Sacmanis 3 years ago
Pretty damn good. Quit attacking the kid you fucking little queers. Keep at it man you're pretty good, and the writing was pretty damned impressive!
lefteye123 3 years ago 2
It was a pretty "meh" movie, but he's just a kid. It could have been worse.
0BatGirl0 3 years ago
faggot
helloladies123 3 years ago
Hey, not bad for a little squirt!
robtran 3 years ago
Griffin McLain rocks!
walkinthewoodsllc 3 years ago
Proof that cinematography doesn't make a movie. But he's young. Keep at it.
mckrakin 3 years ago
lol your a moron.
oldschooldude2 3 years ago
you all gave me negatives because I had the balls to call this guy out because he has no clue what he is talking about and is talking our of his ass.
oldschooldude2 3 years ago
that video was a joke, right??
tremain113 3 years ago
your voice diidn't fit the theme i think so.
pretty good movie though
bendegooZe 3 years ago 2
I am expecting to get that extra 10 seconds next week, I mean I was just gipped 10 seconds of 4 minute film school, my life, my world, my everything is crumbling before my eyes
PiratesStoleMyToast 3 years ago
lolz
yomanz1993 3 years ago
not to mention they didnt teach anything
jwalshson09 3 years ago
Lets clarify, just because you didn't learn anything doesn't mean nothing was taught.
Since so many clearly didn't like the film, then at least you learned some things that don't work in this genre.
Think before you react...
Sacmanis 3 years ago 2
4 minute film school teaches you
how to do something not show movies
they just got lazy
jwalshson09 3 years ago
Man This Sure Was Some Late Indy Yesterday
nobullfilm 3 years ago
Lol no his name is Griffin.
somecallmedave 3 years ago
at point 2:40 look at his name lol biffen or something liek that
driftingD1 3 years ago
wow that kid is a good film maker keep up the good work!
iimyoutubular 3 years ago
what a f-ing nerd!!!
simpsonfreak946 3 years ago
lol that was pretty shocking im sure you have better videos from fans????????
RandomViper41 3 years ago
That was good..
JoeyRythem 3 years ago
what the HELL !!! THAT SUCKED, u guys could air that AND WOULDNT AIR MY SPRAY PAINT THE WORLD COMPUTER EDITING TUTORIAL???
SanitySource 3 years ago
now now.
Just cause your video didnt get featured, doesn't mean it sucks like shit.
By not getting featured you'll be supporting the indie outfit of not even being featured in an indie youtube channel.. be proud.. be very proud
latenightlunging 3 years ago
whats the channel called?
SanitySource 3 years ago
hahahahahaha when he goes. thewalls with disdain then hes like "with my... loserness."
mgproductions2007 3 years ago
now a 1 minute 15 sec do to the credits
paragrin 3 years ago
I feel riped off 15 secs do to the add at the begining
paragrin 3 years ago
umm i dont think that it costs money...
HAXDproductions 3 years ago
man Some Late Indy
nobullfilm 3 years ago
"educational"
lsw24 3 years ago
i thinkthe best part, was the end,....when it was over
rockpperscissors 3 years ago
interesting
crazybilby 3 years ago
I think that Indy mogul should have a weekly show where they screen a viewers film. i bet it would get them allot more subscribers. am i right?
chrizzz 3 years ago 2
whats the name of the song in the begining of the film?.....can anyone tell me please
DarkShadow699 3 years ago
The credits are at the end ;)
Glmmovies 3 years ago
no.
JohnnyBoyf 3 years ago
"These halls' wails of disdain are drowned out by my....loserness."
hahahaha
jordanclist 3 years ago
lmao, I know, right? XD
flashbangpow 3 years ago
good angling/shots, acting, depite his age, and good soundtrack and editing. the stairs comment was quite depressing. but the plot-line could have been better. yeah.
yofomojojo 3 years ago
Great vid. Caught my interest. Didn't work well the first time, so I came for a second gander.
Keep em coming.
Prototype87 3 years ago
You lads should invest that 10 seconds in the next 4 minute film school!
BokShilBokShil 3 years ago
?????? learned nothing bad movie but good camera shots and good acting.
xDATbOIChRISx 3 years ago
yes this kinda wasnt very education even for something that wasnt 4 minutes long...
crazybilby 3 years ago
*educational
crazybilby 3 years ago
more like 3:57 film school
voyace21 3 years ago 2
record! with only 10 seconds to spare!
CarbonRevenge 3 years ago 2
how do they get that movie voice so clear, or idk what it is it just sounds different in the movies. I have a pretty low voice and when i try recording myself speaking in a low, rich voice it still just sounds different. What do they do in the movies that is so different? just better quality equiptment? or do they do some kind of effect, like echo or dull?
BrodcastMiself 3 years ago
a good microphone can help wonders ;)
xwcg 3 years ago 4
i would much rather learn something new than watch sumone elses video. The video was ok, but i was looking forward to learning sumthing cool..
evolutionfilms 3 years ago
That sucked.
madison9292 3 years ago
Hey lets see some of your videos then
(madison9292)
AtomicBunny101 3 years ago
Why does everyone do that? I said his sucked, not that mine were better.
madison9292 3 years ago
shitty fucking song
ChocolateMilkIsTight 3 years ago
that kid needs a hug
a very large hug
QuestionMarkCo 3 years ago 2
Go steve!
htmlbandit 3 years ago
LOL LOL this reminds me of the family guy independent film
yomanz1993 3 years ago
only 15 comments on an indy mogul film?
250lespaul 3 years ago
Awsome guys! KEEP IT UP STEVE!
Likethelegos 3 years ago
Congratulations on making your budgeted time (though I'm not sure I should be congratulating you because it was somebody else's work). I think this is the first 4MFS that actually made it in under 4 minutes. Great job!!
obtree 3 years ago
Lazy week ey Steve.
Bjpeg42 3 years ago
I learned nothing at school today, daddy.
cuntrytrash 3 years ago
pretty damn noir if you ask me
markfoot 3 years ago
Really nice work :)
InsaneSparrow 3 years ago
... wait that's it?
getoffdababysitter 3 years ago
That was damn impressive, Griffin. Nice job with the writing, photography, direction... A stylish and funny short. Don't listen to those nerds who can't comprehend there not being the scheduled show - they haven't been outside in a while.
LeekClock 3 years ago
after watching I felt like this episode was a FAILURE.
LukeSchneider77 3 years ago
You guys should make a new show for film screening, or just tell us about it and link us to it.
junsumoney 3 years ago
Youtube is being a bitch. Awesome vid guys!
VeggieXD 3 years ago
come on dudes i wait every week to watch tips on filmmaking and i get this not cool i really was disapointed when this was on you guys should of had this as a weekend extra
kamuran007 3 years ago
agreed.. what's the matter? couldnt think of anything this week?
jaeson86 3 years ago
I think you should make an episode about horror movies. Like film noir. It should be about the basics and stuff like that. Please.
bulc96 3 years ago
Nice, i liked this one...
Qw3rtyX2 3 years ago
There could have been a lousy joke or pun in those last 10 seconds Steve.
richardstill002 3 years ago 2
didnt learn anything
i think you guys should have to do an extra
4 minute film school next week for slacking off this week
jwalshson09 3 years ago
Thanks for airing my short! I love this show so much and it means so much to me!
Glmmovies 3 years ago 5
good job dude that was pretty deep in many ways that few will understand and the shots were great too and your use of wording was awesome so yeah great job and keep it up
DTMTroy 3 years ago
Indy Mogul being lazy
jackh1992 3 years ago 2
This comment has received too many negative votes show
omg... i hate how 12 year olds think they're fucking awesome!
No one should take their videos seriously
Qukorm 3 years ago
So.. IM might upload videos of viewers if they like it a lot... Wow... I might do one
dangsterr 3 years ago
dawn, fourth
rawjokes 3 years ago
Third times a charm
hayguys1 3 years ago
WTF??????
SeanBabyFace 3 years ago
it's sad, because good filmmakers want to learn from these shows. for some reason i feel indy mogul has been running out of ideas to show. if your going to show other people's movies don't use valuable showtime. make another show for it.
filmguy91 3 years ago
i agree
FunnyChicken11 3 years ago
pretty good film.
JesseGilbertFiIms 3 years ago 2
3rd
BlakeSkateMagic 3 years ago
u know i was just seeing if i was first lol
DylanBachmnanFilm 3 years ago
You wish.
IceDeadSlayer 3 years ago
Damn, second!
IceDeadSlayer 3 years ago
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FIRST!
JoshiiWah 3 years ago