nice dude, one thing i would advise though is that the kick does not need to be so violent, esspecially for for a gun of that caliber. Things to keep in mind with guns:
The larger the caliber, generally the greater the kick
The heavier the gun less the kick
The kick will be less of a crisp jerking movement and more of a jerk at first and then a gradual movement back into the aiming position.
(Keep in mind that the kick will also be back as well as up.)
@TheAkcriminger there's many ways to do it, I wouldn't be the best to tell you though, find out what editing software you have (Windows movie maker, sony vegas, or whatever you have) then search for a muzzel flash tutorial on youtube
i love the first scene its a real classic, then i love the last scene and that words that are being said. I would say its a master piece but for a homemade movie it could go. I hope u make more movies!!!!!
@LewymonProductions yah i used the inglorious bastards soundtrack but i dont see how this is about a group of people who kill nazi's and just because its black and white doesn't mean its a rip off of sin city
Really just not good, acting was lousy, setting was awful, it cant be 1933 with a 2004 chrysler in the adjacent driveway. improve your planning, your setting, and your acting and you'll be golden
@7GeorgeB1 thats not our real address! And it doesn't even show state or zip code, it doesn't even show country what if I live in england or austrailia or africa? you don't know
Over all the film was good. I not sure what editing software you use but it looks good. However if anything I would consider the film more of a drama then a action movie. But still very good 5/5
@DuskPictures I use sony vegas pro 9 and I just put action because people would probably search action before drama, just trying to help people find the video
wow you could at least get fiting clothes
theguy466 1 month ago
What is the orchestral piece in the beginning? I really want to know.
PosadkaFilms 3 months ago
too muxh reciol you put on the gun... u jerked it back to far up...
SABERTOOTH886 3 months ago
yeah because they had modern stuff in 1933
michaeljacksonsupr 4 months ago
the kick of the gun was a little to much
sk8dood98 7 months ago
i love history until 1980
ultimatetrex1999 7 months ago
lol modern cars in 1933 ;) good click though :D
vanwmelo 8 months ago
the clothes dont look very "1933"
chalz234 8 months ago
nice job dude
magicBobdaan 8 months ago
nice dude, one thing i would advise though is that the kick does not need to be so violent, esspecially for for a gun of that caliber. Things to keep in mind with guns:
The larger the caliber, generally the greater the kick
The heavier the gun less the kick
The kick will be less of a crisp jerking movement and more of a jerk at first and then a gradual movement back into the aiming position.
(Keep in mind that the kick will also be back as well as up.)
Great camera work though dude, good job
BijouxBuddyBoys 9 months ago
hahaha 1933 and there are modern cars parked all over haha
baconater400 9 months ago
Hey, PLEASE tell me, how did you make the gunshot effects?
TheAkcriminger 9 months ago
@TheAkcriminger there's many ways to do it, I wouldn't be the best to tell you though, find out what editing software you have (Windows movie maker, sony vegas, or whatever you have) then search for a muzzel flash tutorial on youtube
Jtp101z 9 months ago
@TheAkcriminger He prob use adope affter effects look up some tuts
Killer360Hacks 2 months ago
Love little indie films like this
fixdeluxe1 10 months ago
Could have been better
maximusthecockatiel 10 months ago
yup....1933 with all those new cars and fancy looking houses and there werent water heaters in 1933 bro
jeuny24 1 year ago
@jeuny24 There were water heaters, and fancy houses in the 1930's
DaSoggyWaffles 9 months ago
yup....1933 with all those new cars and fancy looking houses
jeuny24 1 year ago
terrible casting for the little girl role....
ashattack10 1 year ago
2:32 seriously dit u miss that shot ;p
MightyPeepz 1 year ago
LoL Stop been sucj kill-joys. Aaaahhh! xD Not to bad Mate! '')
TheDodgyBurger 1 year ago
1933 with 2010 cars, awesome
SWoRNxKiLLER 1 year ago
please dont kill me what ever they are paying you ill double it...
how much you got kid?
$10
~BOOM HEAD SHOT! lmao
123kiwi2 1 year ago 4
Tht wuZ awesomeness
ktpoll94 1 year ago
Awesome and disturbing.......sweet
TenisFoot123 1 year ago
OMG that assassin must of had the money to get shoes that werent invented untll 80 years later, and the cars
gameboy12341 1 year ago
*BOOM* not enough ...
59starmichelle 1 year ago
Uuum, I was expecting men that weren't going through puberty, little girls who have their own homes, and explanatory plot line.
xXCH1MPXx 1 year ago
Assassin's aren't usually going through puberty ...
screamobassist102 1 year ago
i love the first scene its a real classic, then i love the last scene and that words that are being said. I would say its a master piece but for a homemade movie it could go. I hope u make more movies!!!!!
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blackhawk8927 1 year ago
lol that little girl didnt even seem that scared!!!
sorazon111 1 year ago
I love how he looks under the pillow :)
Thedanmetzler 1 year ago
her shirt say 19:44
tsume12 1 year ago
nice.
CTJackalProductions 1 year ago
Bravo Nice
JustoShow 1 year ago
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"how much money you got kid?" "Ten dollars." LAWL
maxiepc 1 year ago
Yeah, and they had 21st century cars in 1933, did they?
rjconnolly64 1 year ago
@rjconnolly64 thought the same
Yourani145 1 year ago
I love the opening credits. Very 1940's look to them :)
filmaholic730 1 year ago
Great work man , that was heaps good just a bit of improving and it'll be perfect!
SKILLZKILLZ43 1 year ago
Good job with the music! Continue working on videos, I can see you doing great in the future!
redwater1912 1 year ago 2
whats with the tiny pistol making shit big holes in the wall, and how could he miss a girl from like 4 feet away if he's a professional assassin??
AdmiralTom1 1 year ago 2
@AdmiralTom1 I guess he's not so proffesional after all now is he?
Jtp101z 1 year ago 2
@AdmiralTom1 the girl moved.
maxiepc 1 year ago
10 dollars. BOOM!
vaginapwner093 1 year ago 4
shirts alittle big on u
TheSniperx12 1 year ago
oh makes sense what is his record exactly
roguekid431221 1 year ago
why does he have to make a living does he have a family or something he could just get a job at a store
roguekid431221 1 year ago
@roguekid431221 he couldn't get a job with his record
Jtp101z 1 year ago
that's a complex plot for a homemade movie
CuddlesDaisy 1 year ago
awesome movie. it felt so real.
brina4606 1 year ago
Totaly Ripped from Inglorious Basterds and Sin City
LewymonProductions 1 year ago
@LewymonProductions yah i used the inglorious bastards soundtrack but i dont see how this is about a group of people who kill nazi's and just because its black and white doesn't mean its a rip off of sin city
Jtp101z 1 year ago
@Jtp101z Yeah but the way he is doing the voice over and the Death scene too.
LewymonProductions 1 year ago
@Jtp101z I wanted to do a voiceover I've never even seen sin city before
Jtp101z 1 year ago
nooooooooooooooo
roguekid431221 1 year ago
oh no that wall is it ok
roguekid431221 1 year ago
@roguekid431221 nope the walls damaged forever
Jtp101z 1 year ago
the little girl has some timing if she can dodge a bullet
roguekid431221 1 year ago
that assasin is retarded
TheSeirraltor 1 year ago
you put too much kickback when u shoot the handgun
xXMikoMaster13Xx 1 year ago
Really just not good, acting was lousy, setting was awful, it cant be 1933 with a 2004 chrysler in the adjacent driveway. improve your planning, your setting, and your acting and you'll be golden
capjack92yahoo 1 year ago
the girl need prctise acting a bit
TheMShow2010 1 year ago
Awesome video and editing! What editing software do you use?
SlopyFrog 1 year ago
@SlopyFrog sony vegas pro 9 its pretty good for proffesionals and begginers i recommend it to anyone
Jtp101z 1 year ago
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Hmm...
That pistol's recoil looks unrealistic,
and when you shoot her the blood is too much, if you shoot her in the veins (neck) it should be but you shot her in the head.
The other special effects are okay :D
A great job!!
llSzKzllHunter 1 year ago
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llSzKzllHunter 1 year ago
this is really good! i dont even care that theres modern cars in the intro :D
TheCGIMaster 1 year ago
lol "whatever ur gettin paid ill double it!" "how much money you got kid?" "ten dollars." BAM!
varoom300 1 year ago 2
@varoom300 ha ha yah i liked that line
Jtp101z 1 year ago
thats sweet man
JackBauer2442 1 year ago
U STUPID IDIOTS
at 1:23 it shows ur address
now when a rapest comes
u shall be sorry
7GeorgeB1 1 year ago
@7GeorgeB1 thats not our real address! And it doesn't even show state or zip code, it doesn't even show country what if I live in england or austrailia or africa? you don't know
Jtp101z 1 year ago
@7GeorgeB1 thanks for pointing it out now its even more obios
nejiguy1 1 year ago
@7GeorgeB1 ya thats a pretty stupid comment i dont think the rapist will search every city in the world to find one person stupid fuck
irishwolfgang 1 year ago
your defiantly getting better
JeromyOrien 1 year ago
yo dog dat was tight dow!
123Dahood 1 year ago
that actually made me cry a little bit at the end
Idontknow10z 1 year ago 14
Shutter Island and Inglourious Basterds I see...
tintinstooge8 1 year ago
@tintinstooge8 Yah thats the music I used, also I used a little bit of schindlers list in the beginning
Jtp101z 1 year ago
Over all the film was good. I not sure what editing software you use but it looks good. However if anything I would consider the film more of a drama then a action movie. But still very good 5/5
DuskPictures 1 year ago 3
@DuskPictures I use sony vegas pro 9 and I just put action because people would probably search action before drama, just trying to help people find the video
Jtp101z 1 year ago
Great job, this was pretty good. Haha except the first shot of you walking was ruined when the camera suddenly shook lol.
snappycapz 1 year ago 2