the cluttered sky

[tjrinrok]

I give the lyrics 5 stars except, the very last line, I think is a little hokey. I like the sentiment, just think somethin' else might be better to say it. I want to play harmonica like you.

[KrisShred]

Great tune. Beautifully played

[FiveDollarGuitar]

music aside for a moment, the words...the words...the words.... I was so busy listening I didn't even notice you were missing a shirt.

(saw some other comments about the shirt, or lack there of, noticed it then)

[ResearchX]

Great music and the lyrics are fantastic. Great job and "Five Stars".

[grmpfie]

Understandable that you are hot.. *grinn*

but like I said.. it's a pity for the video..

Got a response on my log from a dutch fellow that said "you found a pearl.."

I agree..:-)

[YCoriginals]

pearls don't wear clothes either, must be hard to get the right size, 'it's a pity' some people are offended by nakedness, i think it should be compulsory

[grmpfie]

Like the music.. even put one of your songs on my website.. one where you are wearing a shirt..:p

Would have liked to put this one but for your naked chest.. a pity

[YCoriginals]

sorry johanna, i'll try and be respectable in future;)) it gets hot with my cheapo lamp/mic stand

[vocalbrush]

I just really needed to hear this right now:)you're an amazing artist.

[YCoriginals]

hey mrs brush, y'know i love your music, so i'm glad i could do something for you too, mucho luv 2U :))

[Viktorcz]

another great one, I really like all the ac stuff, keep it up cocker

[stringtheories25]

wow great song man, like the vibe, nice recording too, ignore that other comment it's the wrong chsannel

[YCoriginals]

lol okay man, i do that sometimes, cheers:)

[paddedroom1981]

wow great song man, like the vibe, nice recording too

[la1880]

wow this is something!!! you wrote this great song only an hour before!! wow

xoxox

[stechan1092]

wot an beautiful tune!!! bravo!!

[YCoriginals]

i've had them tattooed on my buttocks

[YCoriginals]

i think a certain 'ParadiseLost' (wink wink) person , thought that was a reference to him , when of course it wasn't?! But even paranoics have real enemies!

[YCoriginals]

lol thanks Bobz, i'll empty the bins now i'm back ;)

[YCoriginals]

hey lampy, your girly buff thumb's tougher than that girly dumb puff:))

[SpaceshipRentals]

fucking great - so plain so simple - I sometimes forget myself this is what it's all about. Beautiful. Wish I wrote it.

[YCoriginals]

thanks man, this was supposed to be the next song you wrote, but i hacked into your 'list of songs to do on spaceships ' and stole it, cheers :O)

[chevkoch]

Very soothing.

[YCoriginals]

thanks chevkoch:)

[wolfgang8u]

excellent video very calming sets the soul at ease for the weekend. nice harp playing also. brings the heart to what we have all left behind. the words are liberating

[YCoriginals]

thanx wolfgang, a big compliment!

[Yezidism07]

very good! ;)

[YCoriginals]

cheers YeZ:)

[secretstrummer]

I really like your stuff. It's always catchy and has a nice groove. Bravo and 5 stars.

[YCoriginals]

cheers secretstrummer, i've been trying to sort out about A'Dam gigs, it's tricky tho man! wil be in touch:)

[deedeebyrd2]

Bravo! Yeah, I read how you wrote the song...that's what I do...write it while fresh in your head as well as perform it.....Nice and Raw....

[YCoriginals]

yea, i agree, nice n raw is still the best deedeebyrd, i'm gonna cancel the London Philharmonic Orchestra for my next one.. unless they all change to a blues tuning, thankya:))

[ParadiseEarth1]

Sweet tune, nice flying song closer to the place many hope to be for destiny***** :^)

It's an honour to be inside this good circle.

[YCoriginals]

thanks man, flying without a license..?!! we might all get caught out one day:)

[ParadiseEarth1]

Heh heh Bro... I was hoping you got some friends at high places... :)

Neat stuff at BroVirgil's ( VMandanici ) Channel -- demo how he use software for recording (his remake of ahem, my Time & Place). :^)

[AlterEgoTrip]

Does that shadow count as a double image? I'm seeing colour where there is none.. :D its very beautiful as always..I don't think there is really a difference between a song you put together in an hour and one you put together in a week or a month.. it just comes together when it does.. the honesty of the moment can't be manufactured.. its always beautiful!

[YCoriginals]

okay AET, fair cop, yea, the shadow is a double image :DD well spotted! thannksss agggainnn DD:)

[ACU5TIC]

Brilliant man,great style

[YCoriginals]

fanx ACU5STIC, glad you liked:))

[southernfolkrocr]

this is my 2nd favorite original i've heard since i been surfing youtube, i was sitting here harmonizing with you and i got goose bumps. Seeso's thank you for leaving me is still my favorite but this is also an instant home run for me. thank you for sharing, you rock!!

[southernfolkrocr]

added this one to my vlog so all who come can see how brillant you are

[YCoriginals]

thanx southernfolkrocr, i appreciate your support n comment:))

[dmio2]

You have quite a gift with your use of the language. Nice performance (as always).

[YCoriginals]

thanx dmio, gotta catch up after a small break, loved your last one..anymore snake bass grooves in the bag? hope so:))

[KenwoodKlown]

@#$% dude so cool! Lyrics are kick ass too, I especially like the "sooner or later i think we'll find..." part. Wow.

[YCoriginals]

my fave too KK, 'just a line that we can't divide..all looking thru the same eyes', thanks for the feedback man:)

[13thDimension]

YeS :D

[YCoriginals]

cheers 13Dementia :)

[13thDimension]

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de·men·tia [di ménshə]

n psychiatry cognitive and intellectual deterioration: the usually progressive deterioration of intellectual functions such as memory that can occur while other brain functions such as those controlling movement and the senses are retained. See also senile dementia

[YCoriginals]

Well said! Now try and say that out loud whilst juggling three tangerines...not as easy as it sounds eh?

senility sets in a lot earlier nowadays salinity sets a lot in earlier

nowadays

it sets

[HuggableAngel]

wow  i love the lyrics and the tune well done ((((HUG))))

[YCoriginals]

thanks huggable ((((o))))

[visionarydreams]

Oh yes, this is great! Peace and 5 stars!

[YCoriginals]

thanks visionarydreamer:))

[esmusical]

I always think you're in that scene from Apocalypse Now with the ceiling fan :)

[YCoriginals]

lol, i'd just drunk a bottle of whisky and smashed a mirror aswell (not really, just a cup of tea), cheers esmusical:))

[townstra]

Great song! 5*****

[YCoriginals]

cheers townstra, loved the 'self-esteem' tune, real words man:)

[chickiesgrettagirl]

who we are .who we were nice lines

excellent tune Yellowcatz

[YCoriginals]

thanx again chickies, change is the only constant, as they say:)

[stealurface1976]

excellent tune bro...i usually do the same thing...write then record...sounds tight to me man! 5 stars

[YCoriginals]

cheers man, i usually spend the longest trying to get the phrasing right, but yea, it's good to just jump in and get the bones of a new tune straight away,

think i should try more of that:)

[stealurface1976]

lol yea i'm the same way

[1badassgirl]

excellent yellow!!!  your such an inspiration!!!

[YCoriginals]

hope u got the tunes 1badassgirl, if not let me know, cheers:)

[ikbeninbalans01]

Love love & love it

Love of everything..

L & P

[YCoriginals]

hartelijk bedankt friends, LNP2U2 too:))

[cooles1]

I couldn't turn lights down, I can't see anything... I loved it Yellow!

[YCoriginals]

ssssankyou x

[tricia3007]

Cool!! 5*

[arthurbrick]

Love it, love it, love it. This one got me straight away. It's one of your best man, all the best stuff takes the least time I reckon.

[YCoriginals]

cheers arthur, yea, i agree, the quickest tunes are usually the strongest, we gotta bypass the brain somehow:)

[zyxxrd]

Excellent title, very evocative. You have an idiosyncratic voice, bring it up in the mix. I have been working in the studio with bands and solo artists for years. Let us hear your voice. Most important. Good luck, L

[YCoriginals]

thanx for the advice zyxxrd, i usually record just off one mic, so getting the balance is tricky, and this was an early take so i was holdin back a bit, but i agree wid ya, cheers:)

[Jive51]

I love the lyrics, and the harmonica, and the song, and your voice!!

That's all!

Thank you!

[YCoriginals]

thanx Jive51, peace:)

[Jive51]

May this God, who is so faithful, allow us to be less... and more...

May our ego, more or less opaque, being more and more lighted and transparent!

Jesus, how hard it is to be a human!!! How hard it is to don't be an obstacle to the light!!!

We are so... So... heavy!

[dreaminglad]

this has a great feel to it, i dig it

[YCoriginals]

thanx dreaminglad, appreciated:))

[slippereal]

nice one dude. a lot of times the freshness of a new tune give it an intangible quality. like you with the harmonica and cluttereds sky is a great title.

mb

[YCoriginals]

hey mike, there's a spaceship in the vid!! i subbed that manhattan acoustic guy btw, very good stuff, cheers:)

[slippereal]

yeah dude spaceships rock. and that guy totally kicks ass. he's brilliant.

[YCoriginals]

(it's not really a spaceship tho..jus high kwalitee special effects shhhhhhhh)

[YCoriginals]

think you're right slippy man, maybe i should do more rough n ready cuts, cheers:)

[cooles1]

I love the lyric!! cannot see it yet... still loading!! I am late home again!! I will turn the lights down low at home tonight too!

fly beautifully to your own destiny!

[eligarf]

hIyA concha and YC! i woke up to your wonderful comments and this as a video response, but its not loading. the other thing is who the heck is marking all your comments down? wTf?

but anyway, the Dvorjak is called Humoresque, so yeah, it should be funny!!!!

Love and cheers! thumbs heads and pass the peaceUP!

[YCoriginals]

hi eLi, cheers man, i think the phantom thumbs downer is EdenMaze, i've just got a hateful mail from him, calling me 'a punk' and 'a user' coz i'm not subscribed to him, and how i should support other musicians more?! He's my age, but he's a child..peaceUP eli:)))

[donT4ge2chukLevryday]

ha ha ha! when i unsubscribed to him from 1ifbyLand2ifByC4kids channel, he sent me a mail saying he was returning the favor. BUT i like your newest vid about that subject.

great song man! but where is that video you said you sent of you learning Chopin?

[YCoriginals]

hey eLi, yea, i didn't realise how many people he'd messed with,

it'll all come back on him one day, this song is how i imagine Chopin would write if he had a guitar and gobiron,

have a good weekend mate, cheers:)

[cooles1]

oK, i PUT thumbs up, but there are still some I can't.. there can not be thumbs down in anywhere!! Peace!!

Have a wonderful day everybody!!