IELTS discussion essay writing (part 5 of 5)

[EugeneTSY]

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[yasirg11]

Mr Ryan i love the way you play with your words my friend. great work. thnx for help

[sarang4ulove]

thanks a lot, it is very useful for me. because i m myself prepare at home for ielts

[SaherishMazhar]

Thank you sooooooooooo much.It is quite helpfull and clear.Thanks again for this great effort.

[hudchahot]

thank lotssss..

wonderful !!!

[viraj9999]

Hello Ryan. Nice tutorials I must say. However I have few questions. You have used the word "Thus" 3 times in this essay. Why don't you use different words instead of using "Thus" always. Can't we use other words like "Therefore", "hence" etc instead of using just "thus" always? And you have also used "It is clear that" 3 times. Can't we just rephrase the sentences instead of using "It is clear that" always?Won't be it a good practice? I hope to see your point of views here on my comment.Thanks

[Anastassik]

Hello! Thanks a lot for your help!!! I will have IELTS in a couple days, so I need a quick review :) your videos are very helpfull. Thanks again :P

[hebagamal85]

fantastic thanks alot

[Vitiuxa]

This is brilliant! Thanks!

[MrGavinRossdale]

thanks ryan :)

[ahmmmmm21]

this is a kind of discussion, i've been looking for.. clear explanation with examples..thanks soooo..much Ryan...

[MrBobstha]

Thank you so much for uploading all these videos which helped me a lot....!

[pring17pring]

thank you very much sir..

[boblee666]

awesome, now i learned that how to write an essay with out concrete facts, but with ambiguous and reasonable speculation. Thanks Ryan, you rock!

[Anastassik]

@boblee666 haha thats true lol and it is COOL

[dongdanhoaquochang]

Thanks a lot to 5 videos

[alelondon86]

me again it is wrong to write on the other hand i think because in the essay we need to support only 1 point of view we won't be able to compare is't it?

[shijiskaria]

thank you very much ryan this is great work s well as help

god bless you

[emsiriable]

nothing to say but thxxxxxxxxx

[AntiThanShwe]

very helpful, thanks :)

[sunitej]

excellent video!clear idea.thanx Ryan

[xianneh]

writing essays made easy. Thank u so much!

[saimawaheed07]

Excellent video. You made my concepts very clear for writing an essay.

[38darlington]

Thanks heaps Mr Ryan.

[clivetoms]

Thank you Ryan for this video, its been a great help.

[teasan]

wow, thanks for sharing, this is very helpful! 5 stars

[SHADAI7EL]

Thanks .. You're really good doing this, this wil help me and those who needs too .. many tkhs

kind regards ;)

[luciferasegene]

thanks alot for every thing u provide ....May ALLAH bless you

[geographic07]

thank you so much for all 5 videos on how to write a discussion paper.

[shakelegs]

A question if i start my essay with information first then my opinion at the very last does it work or no

[theenlightened1s]

Very informative video! Thumbs up! But I have a question. You used word 'analyzing' which is spelled lie that in US English. While in British English its spelled as 'anaysing'. Is it OK to use American spellings in IELTS exams which is run by British Cambridge/ESOL?

[Tnargav]

Yes it is just decide, at the beginning, which you will use and don't switch between UK/US.

[sandsprincess]

another round of applause!

this video is very informative and helpful! thanks ryan! i hope i will get at least 7 in the writing section of ielts. i will be taking the exam this weekend.

:_)

[christech82]

Thank you for this video Ryan, your essay is very strong and covered all the points you mentioned

[KOFwhiz]

Excellent Essay Ryan, I will keep this in mind when I go for my provincial on the 17th of this month :).

[firefightt]

merci infiniment

[miser199]

your transitional expressions are easy to use.

[miser199]

dude, you are amazing...this is really helpful.

[PsychdellicShrimp]

thank you this really helpful

[aruntabing]

very good

[1228am]

thankyou so much for this video

its an excellent tutorial for us non-native english speakers

its amazing how often i come to a halt while writing because of the so called "writers block" . so its so nice to see how u overcome these "blocks" almost effortlessly the way you do ..like:

*using a clearly defined outline

*avoiding identical words in the same sentence and

* using linking words

it gives me a insider's view into the thinking process of a good writer

thankyou so much once again :)

[jameslot]

This video very helpfull. thanks Ryan. you are great!!!!!!! and saw your pic in other website, you look very handsome !!!!

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[ramchandra38]

very nice

[jsantoyoc]

thank you thank you!!!!!

[14613668]

iT'S AMAZING EXAMPLE OF ESSAY !!!!

THANKS..

[LuiiSchen]

hey I'mn from germany and we have to write an discussion essay in the school and I will write a test tomorrow and that was very helpful for me thank you very much . ..

[DavideAlbanese]

Is it correct to write 'CAN NOT' instead of 'CANNOT' ?

[Elearning123]

As far as I know, Either (CAN'T) or (CANNOT) are both true as the first is used in UK and the second is widely used in the US. and I don't think we can separate CANNOT as americans adopted it like that.

[DavideAlbanese]

thx a lot!

[Africangirl122]

Thank you very much it`s so helpful and really I starting to improve my writing thank you again Ryan .

[tatarrinho]

Thanks a lot for your explanations. You've an excellent skill to teach.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

[Dakamum]

Execellent!!!

[yizhihenanjing]

Thank you very much, nice to meet you and I hope you don't mind to befriend me . I will add your account in my list right now

[fairwitoutfear]

You made things so easy thet i could not imagine in the first place . And i thank you very much for your help and encouragement . God bless you !

[interceptingfistryan]

It's my pleasure. Best of luck

[AinurAdeBlckDI]

You cant even imagine how u help me with writin tasks! thank you very much! ive never knew some of rules uve shown. But now i know :]! May God bless You! Amen!

[AinurAdeBlckDI]

sorry, ive never known* lol

[comitern]

Hi EnglishRyan. Love your videos. Great help for students. I'm a teacher myself and I would love to be able to put videos up on Youtube. Unfortunately I'm a noob so I'd like to know how you put the video together. Can you point to a video that can show me what to do? You're doing it on Word. Are you using a camcorder? I apologise for my lack of technical know-how. I'd appreciate your help.

[EnglishRyan]

Thanks! I use a program called CamStudio. It's free. There are a number of helpful tutorials on YouTube that can get you started. Good luck!

[GhOnAu]

@comitern It was wonderful, It lights any darkness about how to write and how to categorized types of essay, thanks alot

[LleonSivor]

Thank you~

[batulaw]

nice! very helpful... God bless