You do have a really sensitive approach in your vocal and have nice tonal colours. However you are not breathing correctly and I can tell this is uncomfortable especially as the melody ascends. Please do watch your diction for future recordings. But on the whole keep at it :D!
you are messing up the diction, with all due respect!!
Its Seh-behn Crew -Deh-Leh and that D, all Italian D's in this song in fact, are dentalized. You pronunciation is not right for most of this song. You say "fee-day-lay!" (!!!!) with all due respect, that is very wrong. It's feh-deh-leh, all of your diction is coming from your nose! Your sound can be quite nice, but gets ruined by your nose/ lack of diaphragm support!! Keep practicing! you have a natural voice!
besides the breath and support issue, which i hate talking about support cuz its something different to everybody but i think we have a case of the snot spot. lol. i think what you were trying to do was not sound nasally and singing through that space where your throat meets your nose. the spot where when you snort it vibrates. you have the right idea, you just need to work on it, and breath and support are really the things that will fix it and make it sound great. keep up the good work.
Hi, perhaps you will like my videos. Watch them on the MISTRMORNE channel (type it at search page of youtube). Keep up the singing . It's a lifetime's work, methinks
Hello. Yes, the pronunciation of the DE is too closed and your voice sounded for me too nasal. Do not mistake projection with putting your voice in your nose. Yes, the voice needs more support, so more breathing work. The timbre sounds nice. Keep up the good work.
the pronunciation is off. dehleh not deelee. "e" is eh and "i" is ee.
Why does it seem that you are singing a head voice here? I think you might be tense in the neck and shoulders. I'm no expert or anything, but that was my problem for a while (i sing post-hardcore rock music also). Your lows are great, but those mids need work.
I would suggest brightening the tone actually, because right now you are kind of "swallowing" your voice, and that is making it hard to keep the pitch. Don't try to force a dark tone at a young age, because it will sound unnatural
fits the voice really well! Good choice of a song. Open the throat more, Watch your Italian vowels, and work on keeping tempo. Your expression is pretty good! Keep the focus in the mask of your face, you are going flat. A lot of people have had this trouble in voice lessons and youtube...can't wait to hear more from you...you are talented.
You could add some more vibrato to it to make it even more lovely... and make sure you hold the vocal phrases out as long as possible with the purest tone in mind.
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HamlenCardarelli523 1 year ago
You sound like the lion from the wizard of ozz
brittleigh14 2 years ago
You do have a really sensitive approach in your vocal and have nice tonal colours. However you are not breathing correctly and I can tell this is uncomfortable especially as the melody ascends. Please do watch your diction for future recordings. But on the whole keep at it :D!
paulwilsonmusician 2 years ago
I like your voice a lot, you sing with great sensitivity. you have talent. I'm looking forward to hear you after training. Good luck!
neelsdp1 2 years ago
What nationality are you?
you are messing up the diction, with all due respect!!
Its Seh-behn Crew -Deh-Leh and that D, all Italian D's in this song in fact, are dentalized. You pronunciation is not right for most of this song. You say "fee-day-lay!" (!!!!) with all due respect, that is very wrong. It's feh-deh-leh, all of your diction is coming from your nose! Your sound can be quite nice, but gets ruined by your nose/ lack of diaphragm support!! Keep practicing! you have a natural voice!
annwnevelyn 2 years ago
Okay guys I got it now :D:D:D
Didn't even had singing lessons yet when I sang this.
But thanks for your comments I'll be working on that.
kanaldeckeldieb22 2 years ago
im not to fond of your diction
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VorozhkoAndrew 3 years ago
best version of this song on youtbe, for real
dinmolle 3 years ago
besides the breath and support issue, which i hate talking about support cuz its something different to everybody but i think we have a case of the snot spot. lol. i think what you were trying to do was not sound nasally and singing through that space where your throat meets your nose. the spot where when you snort it vibrates. you have the right idea, you just need to work on it, and breath and support are really the things that will fix it and make it sound great. keep up the good work.
mattf3nDeR 3 years ago
Hi, perhaps you will like my videos. Watch them on the MISTRMORNE channel (type it at search page of youtube). Keep up the singing . It's a lifetime's work, methinks
MISTERMORNE 3 years ago
ditto all of the above
rmegna 3 years ago
Die Synkopen haben alle gefehlt;)
ansonsten wars sehr gut!
kawimns 4 years ago
Hello. Yes, the pronunciation of the DE is too closed and your voice sounded for me too nasal. Do not mistake projection with putting your voice in your nose. Yes, the voice needs more support, so more breathing work. The timbre sounds nice. Keep up the good work.
gcafeche 4 years ago
the de le in fedele is so off.
wannabe808 4 years ago
the pronunciation is off. dehleh not deelee. "e" is eh and "i" is ee.
Why does it seem that you are singing a head voice here? I think you might be tense in the neck and shoulders. I'm no expert or anything, but that was my problem for a while (i sing post-hardcore rock music also). Your lows are great, but those mids need work.
4/5
pdilla 4 years ago
i completley agree with you
wannabe808 4 years ago
yeah. you need to sing from your diaphrams and not yout head in the mids. unless your range really isn't that good.
Jasuchan 4 years ago
Its good, but i think you need to try to work on a darker, richer tone.
oruga101 4 years ago
I would suggest brightening the tone actually, because right now you are kind of "swallowing" your voice, and that is making it hard to keep the pitch. Don't try to force a dark tone at a young age, because it will sound unnatural
JessicaBlackwell 4 years ago 2
pretty good, but you need to work on the vowels.
diannathinksso 4 years ago
wow, these are great, supportive and constructive comments, thanks very much :)
kanaldeckeldieb22 4 years ago
fits the voice really well! Good choice of a song. Open the throat more, Watch your Italian vowels, and work on keeping tempo. Your expression is pretty good! Keep the focus in the mask of your face, you are going flat. A lot of people have had this trouble in voice lessons and youtube...can't wait to hear more from you...you are talented.
singingismypassion 4 years ago
Nice job!
You could add some more vibrato to it to make it even more lovely... and make sure you hold the vocal phrases out as long as possible with the purest tone in mind.
cutiepoo92 4 years ago