Deception - Halo Machinima Short

[CriousGamers]

Wow...i made this 2 and a half years ago...TIME FLIES BY!

This had some pretty shitty voice acting lol

[sam48103]

wow. That was the right choice. What monster would kill a father in is home with is loving family. (*)>

[TheAmericanCanadian]

thumbs up if you thought this was gonna be an inception spoof.

[blizazed]

this blows

[kakapeepeepoopyshire]

this is so badly done ROFL. the hornet is in avalance *icy mountain* and when he lands, he lands on a tropical place lol. He must've fallen like 1200 ft.

[Wingzero2424]

I found this Machinima good But needs to deliver more things about the main Character I agree with Jeremstein n Winkoman3 they seem to kno their stuff

[Jeremstein]

Alright, sorry, but I have to say this too. I think, if you absolutley NEED to make a machinima with a message, make it a bit longer, that way we can see how the main character is at the beginning and how he progresses. And just because a guy has a family, doesn't mean he is not a terrorist. But hey, maybe if you take some advice from people who know what they're talking about and not those kids who are pretending to see a message, maybe you can make the first meaningful machinima ever.

[Jeremstein]

If you want to express your feelings about the world, don't do it through a halo 3 machinima. This movie tried to be deep but it failed. And for those of you commenting on this saying it WAS deep, you are wrong. Your love for Halo must just totally be blinding you or something. And dont get pissed at winkoman3. If he is younger than you, he is MUCH more mature than anyone calling him a stupid little kid.

[stealer111]

not bad! Stupid kids don't understand anything..........

[zepheroth713]

in my mind this was kinda epic but retarted

[LESTA2013]

<('.'<)

[freckles94881]

i dont get it

[t3hjayj4y]

stupid little kids never get a good message so sad :(

[Jeremstein]

yeah, but you're obviously so mature. You have a freakin smiley face at the end of your sentence!

[t3hjayj4y]

Yeah, but you're obviously so mature that you give a fuck.

[dogg2849]

who cares when the spartan program started, a mcahinima is not based off of the complete original halo story

[irishpunk678]

the date is off, the spartan program started in 2491...

[44Quad44]

not machinimas best vid

[DetoxFmL]

Great

[DoomNation1]

hey it was cool but you need to work on your script...bad..

[DARKFOX27]

.  . . .Damn.. o o;; awesome yet scary..

[lolyouarediedroflomg]

that was awsome!

[Phamductions]

that was pretty cool i like his little speech at the families house :]

[Atowncougars]

that was horendous!

[LevelCarnivore1]

not as good as "WORTH FIGHTING FOR" but its k

[elementwaef]

that was really good

[407575]

The whole family was carrying weps why the hell did he refuse?!

[FAILincorporated]

Who cares?

[DaDude9211]

LOL

[Tajem]

There are some impossibilities in machinima. Just go with it. xD

[gavan12345]

nice video make more plz and pink is ossim

[foobloo101]

i dont get it.

[chucknorisclone]

aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh there tryin to brain wash us and kill ppl tht r from americaaaaa

[GrassmanProductions]

wow wanted rip off and what

Shroomstaa said is true

[almostuneasy]

ummmm halo version of wanted?? c'mon

[CriousGamers]

didnt even see wanted, was it any good?

[elementwaef]

wanted wasnt that great actually but thats not what this is from, but thats my opinion on wanted.

[MasterHobo21]

this reminds me of Farenheit 451

[moodie69]

anyone wanna play some halo 3 mods??? canadian piro

msg me

[cloudssix]

You're a dick

[xXpwnedXx]

You know, only Bungie Employees can Give out Recon and a Troll like you should gtfo. Obvious troll is obvious kids.

[Shroomstaa]

So he goes from unquestionable loyalty, to being completely against them after he receives this one target? You tried way too hard to deliver a message, and instead made a trainwreck.

[moondog2010]

tear-ann-E

not

tie-ran-E

[CriousGamers]

yea, I plan on doing a prequel to this no matter what people think of it. :)

[W3ST4WAY]

pretty good.

could have used some backstory to make it more emotive.

[JoelJoel321]

Seriously... I think you took yourself way too seriously with this. It's almost... almost a parody of itself. Except, it's not quite funny enough.

Maybe actually give characters some depth and history before they give us a civil rights lecture in a brooding voice.

[soraisdabest]

its only a short

[Shaneisalog1]

THAT WAS SHIT

[chickenruler]

Great video. Great message. Great guy.

All the others saying that you want action and drama are words of people who don't understand what machinimas like this one are about. You have no room for drama and meanings like this one. Some people may have changed their life because of what they have seen and that has made a bigger change than you ever have in this world....

[winkoman3]

OMG THIS MADE ME CHANGE MY LIFE...

not!

WTF is with all the machinimas with a "message"

SO GAY

[gn1t3]

why does it matter if the machinimas' have a message or not?

[EuphorianFilmers]

Oh shit, machinimas that are actually good! NOOO!!!!

Grow the hell up, you pre-pubescent degenerate.

[winkoman3]

Fuck you these aren't good you faggot

[EuphorianFilmers]

Was this meant to make any sense whatsoever?

[winkoman3]

OK, take your pick.. it makes no sense and sucks / or tries to deliver a message that falls short (very short!) of influential.

BTW, since when is a machinima a good way to deliver a deep message?!

If you ask me, this is just a bullshit way to try to appear as if you understand important concepts that don't even apply to modern day society.

FUCK YOU!!!

[EuphorianFilmers]

Fuck you translates to: "I don't understand you, why are you so much better than me?"

And actually, yes it is. If you've ever seen Misconception or Memoir, you'd think differently. But probably not, considering you're just a kid who think swearing on the internet is a valid way to get your point across. And also, being a kid, you probably wouldn't get the message anyways, seeing as all kids are narrow-minded.

[CriousGamers]

I hate being late to the party...

Winkoman3, It isnt our fault that the words "SOI SOI SOI" and "ROFLCOPTER ARBIEZZZ" gets you excited.

If the kid stuff is what does it for you, then maybe you should just keep your subscription to The Arby and Chief playlist, cause it seems like thats all your gonna understand...

[EuphorianFilmers]

>_>

Way to be late, Chilled.

[JamanBaby]

Shit im late too.. Anyways fight fire with fire..... FUCK YOUR MOM WINKO BITCH LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLO­LOL

[vidmaster147]

not very well put together

[noneman227]

good, but it went too fast

[MachinimaGrunts]

The idea. not so good.

[teh1owner]

Bad voice acting :(

[D22314]

ok i guess, but needs some work

[Chris45970]

Why the fuck does it matter douche?

[masterassassin93]

just asking

[gamerguy12345]

uhh... why the hell is that funny?

[davidallan92]

That was surprisingly good

[RabidSporkProduction]

The idea is good.

The script and acting is...well...awful, to be frank.

[shadowvowed187]

Brilliant, just chilled chaos

[Jamielordofgingers]

this could have been good, be the message was too forced and in the face of the viewer. a more subtle method would have made this much better

[Levahk]

I loved where he sniped from I was playing one game I used a Gravity jump booster and got on there and sniped the fuck outta the blue team took them awhile before they relized I was up there we scored a Flag while they were dealing with me HEHE

[Hunter7023]

I though it was quite well done. I did enjoy the script to an extent though... Just thought you threw all this at us to fast, to quick for my tastes.

[jeffgaur]

Great. I like how people are making more i guess you could say "artsy" machinima instead of just penis jokes and slap stick humor machinima.

[KillerGnome101]

nice but a little to much on the heavy thinking and it needs more action in its mid but over all ill give it a 9 out of 10

[halo3players]

deception is my gamer tag

[DRTisKING]

i was expectiong a belly full of lead and a pool of their own blood th drown in style speech

[Goten3620]

Pretty good, it sounds like something I would think about...

[TenchinMogutso]

Everything sounds like hes just giving a serious speech that hes reading off paper... no emotion.

[RC1312Kad]

Oh, and if you're going to "report unsuitable videos", maybe you should go after the ones that are actually bad.

[RC1312Kad]

Lol...pompous idiocy, much?

[overkill1994]

good video! good job!

[LordCorinth]

"i will become an asian of change''

''you can't eckskape your fate''

alright, i thought it was pretty good but the voice work needs to be better....

[tyler12345p]

wow that speech to him self was so gay!

[kilrmonjaro]

it seems like you told us a story that wasnt going anywhere

[CriousGamers]

so you think ;)

[DemonAPX]

Why? There is no swearing, there is nothing wrong, it is perfectly legal. Now shut up and stop acting like you're on top just because you have "Video Monitoring" in your name. You're one big insecure fraud.

[c1t4d3l]

UTubeVideoMonitoring <Douchebag Alert! This guy pop's his collar for sure.

[MELONHEAD13B]

What the fuck was that? Fucking nazis?

[ITriple3HelixI]

Good story line but it seems the script may have been, a little poor.

[Morsore]

dialog needs a little work wen you speak it.

and just the writing as well to make it more vague.

but well done.

[Xepher013]

that was gay

[DarkMewtwo0513]

Ah, just like Deus Ex Machina...

Don't ask.

[ProfBlahson1]

pretty good. did kinda make what you trying to say a little too abvious though

[guitaraddict467]

CHEESY.

[scottsickle]

Nice Work

5/5

[puppyboy1113]

its in HQ?

[f123456789knvm]

now war is pretty retarded if you ask me i mean like it can be used for good reasons like fighting someone who wants to destroy everything and what not but yeah... listen to the messege...btw way im not saying war games are dumb or unfunny they are fun so yeah listen to the messege

[legendarybod]

halo rules and always will rule until the games are completely gone, otherwise this game will still dominate the online industry.. EVERY DAY I get on xbox live there is someone playing it and they own several of the newly released games that are also great online don't cut down halo unless its a fact that halo sucks dojopunk

[MKRTI]

halo is ok. there are much better games.

[ChalkyVaati]

like what gears of war 2?

[wdililn]

portal, half-life, mass effect, call of duty 4, little big planet, to name a few.

[zerato33]

its tyranny not tirane

[medalofvine]

good concept, but it needed to be longer and give more detail into the story.

[CriousGamers]

hey, yea I am actually going to be doing a prequel that way I can give more info behind it and explain it more

[imDead630]

sounds like a poem

[kingcool3216]

its not opposite day

[schizosareneveralone]

then y did u watch this ?

[dojopunk]

omg who the fuck gets tired out from driving a warthog

[zerato33]

i was thinking the same thing

[dojopunk]

damn u guys r putting up videos like world of warcrafts makin millions of bucks thats pretty freakin fast if u ask me

[Niguara]

love it. and yes his assassination could have been more well thought out. overall 5* from me :D. haven't seen a machinima of this type yet

[alexman9000]

i love machinima, but i didint like this video.

it wasent that good.

[dartvader117]

good message. but the use of "conform" and its many divisions was a bit overkill. find a new word and the semi-repetitiveness of this will end and youll be left with a great story

[Amacalot]

serious machinimas for the lose

[captainloonan556]

dude really nice!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!

[wikikomoto]

FUCK NO

[militesofSparta]

good morals, but the would-be assassination scene needed to be more decisive in turning the characters opinion on conformity. He just looked at the guy for 1 minute and decided not to snipe him.

[Halo22Crap]

the area around 3:00 was pretty weird considering he was talking to himself.

[xIv3n0mIx]

I feel this video is about the U.S. government.

[kurt2552]

this sucked.

[CheeseDanish780]

NO I DONT WANNA PLAY GOLF/...damn advertisements

[phantom0325]

good message but video wasnt that good

[utubesucksbals]

Somewhat decent story, it would've made more sence and be higher rated if the person he attempted to kill was actually evil all along, the "agency" or "government" he worked for woldnt have sent him to kill an innocent person, unless their being a greater purpose behind it, unfortunetly it appers theres not, meaning this is just a boring story with a little bit a philosophy and truth to it, 1/5.

[CriousGamers]

no, a government doesnt have to deem why they want people killed, as long as its labeled a threat to their own agenda.

i.e. under President Bush you could be taken from your home, stripped from your belongings and be in a camp somwhere if your labeled a "public enemy"

what qualifies for that, only he knew

[ImaNICEbadguy13]

It was ok, kinda weird. 2/5

[rokin75]

so true

[HaloUnion]

needs better cinematography but pretty good nonetheless. Please check out our videos guys. Big things coming this March 8th from HU.

[FuzzyPicklProduction]

awsome speach when he was goin to snipe

[goguu]

voice acting could've been better but pretty good anyway

[PettyOfficerBurns]

iyo8 how about you make something better than come back and say it

[Marcus42493]

memoir was way better

[Charmwing]

... I'm not sure why people aren't getting this. It's pretty obvious what happened if you listened. :P

Nice job, dude. I'm liking all this new Halo machinima that has some kind of meaning behind it. :)

[CriousGamers]

thank you and I will continue to make them as long as one person can respect the video and its message :)

[skaterose]

make a part 2

[kylemproductions]

i think it was good....

[Yutasa]

it was okay but it could be better =)

check out my videos xD

[Kyros2012]

gaygaygaygay

[iyo8]

wow you suck, dont judge it to be "gay" just because it wasn't a comedy.

[AssassinsReign]

good.

[rebabrock]

i dot get it were the team the guy worked with killing him because he diddnt kill the right guy

[X3MUSEWOOO]

no you douche, because he disobeyed orders

[3608394]

Well it wasnt too bad, but it could be much better

[quadstrike]

that was horrible... it made no sence, this is when ppl with a message use the wrong game to express it :/

[CriousGamers]

you didnt understand it? If you want I can explain it for you

[JustCallMeSoupLad]

one star for bad voice acting, bad writing, bad editing and bad continuity.

[CGrunzdizshitz]

epic fucking lulz

[Onadute]

storyline is good, but too short and not enough action. voices could use work too

[CriousGamers]

hopefully u would like a prequel thats been in the work.

Explains how Richards came to be, and the government

[oud25]

i didnt really like the end but loved the begining and middle

strong message there and its true about our government today

[ponchmasta007]

waaaaaay to preachy. It wasnt subtle at all.

[flergin352]

lol ok snow then jungle.....

[sanji572]

Pretty good machinima,the camera lighting was off but beside that it was great.

[MCQ22Productions]

This is great. Great work Chilled!

[jbeckett25]

that was kinda stupid

[AndreFTG]

gay girl voice lol

[tazneo1]

the storyline was good 5/5 on that, but, on the other hand, the characters were a bit too serious.

[Jmorgasmic]

sorry but it kind of sucked.....poor quality for a Machinima

[xshadowsnipe145]

this is a amzazing short 5/5

[LordPeligrino]

Good idea and camera work. it was a little too blunt, those themes such as conformity should be subtle.

[Techwrath]

Um, it was a good machinima plot and all. But the main character just randomly decided to go against it all, that's kind of cheesy no offense. I still gave it 4 out of 5.

[sirxerik]

this is kinda like the Bourne movies

[duzaman7]

Reminds of George Orwells 1984. War is Peace. Whoever controls the past controls the future. Big Brother is watching you.

[LordPeligrino]

To Room 101 with you.

[RIKIEatHOME]

i like it but a word of advice you rendered the video to sharp

[navguitar34]

i dont even get that ITS WEIRD! BUT W/e its pretty good

[theBCEproductions]

10/11 this is amazing what a powerful message!

[Rebornpp]

dude, that was deep... I loved it! definitly 5 stars!

[MikeGustaw]

XD im not 10 im 11 i

[iwantram3n]

nice concept, but with better voice acting and more drama it would be even better

[ethansafa123]

i used to be this guy's friend. till the motherfucking faggot turned famous and started suckin balls

[CriousGamers]

lol kinda funny seeing how ur under 10 and your would cry to me that I wouldnt make vids for you, but ill let you have your way for now

Dont want to let the little child cry

[ethansafa123]

im not under fuckin 10 im 11