Gray Team Transmission One: Inception

[Kirthert]

What's the song/music at the credits called, please?

[TheLekoloHawkGamer]

Wow I wonder how much time it would have taken to get all those armor permentations again but I don't think thats the case...how did you get so many actors?

[grandsaga]

This has some good voice acting in it.

[malicestories]

Where could i speak to this Mr. Duke Robear?

[OniLink147]

One of the voice actors sounds like Rina-Chan from Newgrounds.

[mindlesstube]

decent

[JoBoss3]

Its a good machinima... very nice, but I would suggest working a little on battle scenes, but all in all, it was probably 4.5/5

[gangstersqu1rrel]

yeah, i agree with anzianihyden, the acting was a little cheezy and kinda boring. the action scenes were kinda blah. it didnt COMPLETELY suck though, the storyline is great and so is the way you edited it. so, 3/5 probably

[Xepher013]

not bad. needs some work though

[TrekkieAtlantis]

Awesome video guys, this is definately my favorite Machinima series:)

[endwar24]

I don't know what kind of crack your on, but can I have some?

[lazydog223]

androids...explaines the perkyness when wanting to go into the battle..owell great movie!

[moonlightarc]

anyone know were i can see more i go to halo union and i cant find anything

[JamessFord]

I'll refrain from throwing any insults onto your work, but I had some problems with it: first, the script is somewhat stilted (eg. the scene where the CO is killed). I know from experience that writing a believable script is difficult, but please try to hone your skill in the future. Secondly, the battle scene(s) are unshaped, for want of a better word: the shots a seemingly cobbled together in a random fashion. I'd suggest you try to put a sub-plot into the battle scenes. Otherwise, good work.

[AntonGMiller]

dude, u proved me wrong. i had low expectations watching this, and it blew me away. The cinomatopraphy (or how ever u spell it lol) was fantastic and captured the hecticness of the being at war, as for the script, its hard to judge on the first episode, but i thought it was pretty good. i hope to see this materialize into a great machinima series. good luck

[Zeta067]

If you pay atentions to the sheilds you see that they were overloaded.

[gangstersqu1rrel]

i think it would have been better with the gunshots

[Hamun002]

One thing that I think would help the series alot is if you used different ascent colors on the androids to help tell them apart. Maybe put their number on their shoulder, other wise it is very confusing on which is which.

[Clim8Productions]

I admit this had more story in it but i liked the oringnal better

[unrevan]

you guys are gay if you say he's gay

he's only trying his best unlike you guys that can't even make vids

he at least brings something to us

[DispatchFilms]

It looks to me as if its suppose to be some short of cyber traing, thats why the shields are there.

[shenaniganry]

Yeah, I realized that about 20 seconds after I typed my comment.

[Maddisser101]

horrible

[HHRB0664]

It's still dumb as shit.

[limeboy44]

how you got a wraith on snowbound

[D3ad1te]

Lmao keep it down before you get us all fragged

[DarthCadeous501]

I liked the older version a little better.

[peregrine93]

same but this version gives more information that will most likely come in handy in future episodes.

[ZelahnZero]

The well wishes are appreciated. I do apologize for the roughness of certain cuts. We wanted to improve on the performance that was given in the original pilot, because it was all pretty haphazard. We also thought that forcing people to sit for 20 minutes to get the gist of something that only takes 10 was unfair. So this nutshell version of the pilot is more so within our quality expectations. Recycled scene aside.

[16235]

the first seemed a little easier to follow

but I liked this one as well

[MadSimon000]

I agree with kNoT911 because some of the scenes seem to jump but I still a good version I hope GRAY TEAM contuies on to being a great Machinima.

[DP715]

You know you're a popular machinima series when some random idiot shouts "FIRST!!!11!!one!1" with no other good comments about it.

[kNoT911]

i liked the first ver of this one better.. sorry

[incubusrocks117]

and nice video!!!!! looks really good. can't wait to see the whole series!!!!!!!

[deght]

It's already out!

This is just a re-do

[incubusrocks117]

omg. well i knew that a bunch of the other episodes(i think up to 3 now?) are out, but i didn't know that this was a redo of them.... BUT COOL!!!

[DP715]

Incubus, you just killed a puppy.

[incubusrocks117]

aw.......why?:(

[DP715]

Read your first comment.

[incubusrocks117]

yeah ok i read it, i don't get it

[DP715]

Now go watch the newest (or second newest) episode of Inside Halo.