@Caspar33 Thank you. It's interesting that you say that. I produced it this way because I was concerned that my facial expressions would distract from the sound of the poem. It's a lot in a short space, and I feel like it's one to close your eyes and listen to. Thank you for the kind comment!
@sonofwalt Yes, such an interesting question. I guess the ideal is to say to yourself, whiich you did here, 'What does the poem want want me to do?' Much of the time this is not easy BUT ALWAYS worth sticking with it over a period I think. And there's no reason, except for the pressure of time maybe (but the poem of course doesn't recognise that as a problem) and one can always try different things -see which you think serves IT best. Getting to the heart of it is all I think - V best regards.
Very well read...didn't know this poem...interesting...will have to think on its meaning...
Poemsapennyeach 8 months ago
@Poemsapennyeach Thank you, Kristine! I am very happy you liked it.
sonofwalt 8 months ago
oh yes...hot and cold...either end of the same mean stick.
marycigarettes 9 months ago
@marycigarettes Ain't it the truth.
sonofwalt 9 months ago
snarf!
Iam5narf 9 months ago
@Iam5narf I couldn't have said it better myself. Thanks, friend.
sonofwalt 9 months ago
Nice one - its what you don't add I think makes the difference.
Caspar33 9 months ago
@Caspar33 Thank you. It's interesting that you say that. I produced it this way because I was concerned that my facial expressions would distract from the sound of the poem. It's a lot in a short space, and I feel like it's one to close your eyes and listen to. Thank you for the kind comment!
sonofwalt 9 months ago
@sonofwalt Yes, such an interesting question. I guess the ideal is to say to yourself, whiich you did here, 'What does the poem want want me to do?' Much of the time this is not easy BUT ALWAYS worth sticking with it over a period I think. And there's no reason, except for the pressure of time maybe (but the poem of course doesn't recognise that as a problem) and one can always try different things -see which you think serves IT best. Getting to the heart of it is all I think - V best regards.
Caspar33 9 months ago
Just perfect.
wbarreguy 9 months ago
@wbarreguy Thank you, B!
sonofwalt 9 months ago