Everything I don't want to be (original song)

[kookieman95001]

really like your songs. hope to hear more from you. great style and voice.

[LifeWithJessieLee]

you really need to get some more videos up. You are absolutely wonderful. This song is amazing, I could listen to it over and over... oh wait... I am :)

Stay true to you.

xx, Jess

[Sonnenblume55]

wow, that's all i can say. it's very very good.

Beautiful song.

like this..

greetings from germany

[nicola101008]

great song and lovely soft voice, i thought it was really good

[sarahjgriffiths]

this is brilliant, you have a great voice, really enjoyed listening to you!!

[skimboarding85]

Great song dude. You've got a wicked voice! Keep it up man.

[catchmusic425]

i wish i could download this song to have an mp3 of it!

[Nickerz91]

I think I just fell in love with your voice. Fantastic song and voice.

[RestTonight]

amazing i liked it! great lyrics! you should give us a mp3 :)

[madcowgirl4h]

Beautiful song!

[HideHollow]

I love this song !

you get 5 stars from me. new favorit.

The lyrics are amazing and your voice is awesome, too. <3

[rawooya]

2 WORDS: YOU ROCK

[vetteracer1986]

Sounds very Jars Of Clay......Great job bro!

[jessquah]

one word: brilliant. this rocks, I love the meaning and depth in it and the chords are suitably mellow. great job :D

[sariah216666]

Servus!

Also ich muss echt sagen, dein Lied is unglaublich.. Wie schafft man denn sowas?

Ich kann schon mitsingen, so oft hab ich es gehört.

Ich wünschte, ich hätte es geschrieben.

[devilishdiamond]

this song is amazing... lyrics reminds me of myself right now...

[MyUntoldStory]

wow. das is echt.. mir fehlen die worte

[Minikwon1991]

uve got a kool voice man keep up the good work!!!!!

[sexy12dragon]

I play gutair myself you really should Expand your progress and play more chords and spice it up a bit...i also have a baned name Second To None

[max9501111]

your voice is a one of a kind, you have a amazing voice

[rmalouko]

hey dude, well done !

i loved this song !

keep singing, great voice

[dammitmargie]

this is truly amazing.

[angelaalove]

have download your song at your space.

i really love your song.

fantastic text.

[Ancen93]

I love this song! Do you have a mp3 file for downloading? I really hope you do! Love from DK!!

[PeterPatrickPitter]

You wanna cover my song - lol what an honour! My real name is Michael Ritter!

[querubin9aime]

i really love this song.

what name should i say when i perform this on stage? PeterPatrickPitter?

is that his real name?

"Okay... this next song is composed by PeterPatrickPitter.."

' just when i thought that i moved on...'

[bbblackstash]

Now that you have your G-C-Em-D song out of the way ('cuz everyone who has played guitar has written a song with that progression), you should expand your progressions a bit. I give you props on melody and strumming patterns, but expand the chord progressions.

[KellyMullet]

I agree.

Great potential though.

Don't stop trying.

[KellyMullet]

Oh yeah...

I'm going to subscribe.

Obvious talent shouldn't go unnoticed.

[xmarshmelL0wx]

you've got such a soft voice.. it's beautiful x]

[thaathulatheef]

awesome song

[dziara6]

i added you as a fav:) you have a potential. I already hear in my head how good the song would sound with some other instruments. and you have a really great voice. would like to sing with u one day!

[tiffry]

laid back i agree, but very nice

[diam0nte]

smooth ...i feel chilled now! i would appreciate you having a look at my songs, thankyou.

-Jonny Eden

[mayerexpress]

Great job - keep it up

[markjdguitar]

Cool song. Very laid back.

[italianbsicilian]

ur really good man

[jdiaz24]

I think you have musician quality! Keep on writing and singing! I send you many blessings your way. I know soon one day you will open for a big well known artist. You've got great potential! Take care.

[allloyd66]

Wow! like it lots... and deep lyrics! nice! take a look at one of my songs and let me know what you think!!

[DyslexiaAndHeroin]

This reminds me of Jack johnson.

Good job!

~Emili!~

[samblakelock]

yeah yeah, for sure. except jack doesn't use too much open chords.

but still, great.

[holdencaulfield101]

finally a love song under 3 minutes..good job man...check out my song "Night Gowns" you might like it so checker out ricky

[sexygrill13]

ur really good

[metalmadefaery]

i came to listen again, i love this song-Tabby<3

[blinkgirlie66]

this is awesome, i reallyyyy enjoyed it! I just started guitar and i am so excited to write my own songs someday.

[imahomophobe7]

rlly nice song... idk if you have ur treb rlly low er what but on the g2 and c2 seems like u never even touch the b or e strings kinda makes the chords lack some thing ... maby hit um every 4 er something idk mess aroud.. but over all a rlly great song

[jirdimaster]

Got talent buddy im making a song with a friend at the moment i'll let u know when its done i would like to hear ur opinion.

[jadeevalley]

You're talented :)

[euky89]

Very great ! I like your song (y)

[sunlouna]

Amazing.... it's really great!!

[gotmusic19]

gorgeous song, gorgeous voice

[bobsayshi94]

i LOVE this song...XD!!! it's awesome

[subahTJ]

man this song is sooooo good .. put some more:P .. you sound good

[Kolbe22]

nice

[Lukeymundo]

very nice, you have an awesome voice for acoustic songs! :)

[ReinaDelCid]

What lovely song! You've got a really sweet voice, and pretty thoughtful lyrics. Very smooth, wonderful sound. Five stars, unhesitatingly.

Hey man, if you ever get a spare moment, I'd appreciate it immensely if you checked out an original or two of mine. I'd love to know your thoughts. :-)

[SlowStrider]

Still a great song!

[PeterPatrickPitter]

Hey Hurricane Steve! You can download my song at myspace. my name there is michaelritteracoustic :-) thanks for your comment! cu

[HurricaneSteve]

Yeah, This is unbelievable! Man, do you have another website or any more recorded songs anywhere?? Demo??

[HSCFattorini]

I really loved this song, dude.

A few positive criticisms, I'm not trying to say I'm a better musician or anything, just trying to help you out.

You're using G / Cadd9 / D(aug?) / E7. You might want to use your downtime between verses to arpeggiate those chords. You're holding down the 3rd fret on the B and e strings, try lifting from the 3 and hammering the 1. Sort of like a ---3p0h1p0h3---.

[RayJay09]

I love it!

[metalmadefaery]

wow this is extremely beautiful..i am in love with this song..wish i found it sooner..very nice to hear a realsong and feel the meaning behind the words and the emotion expressed through your music is extremely beautiful-Tabitha

[mysongislove33]

Your music is incredable, I write lyrics too and I was wondering if you could look at it and come up with some music. I really love your sound.

[irunat2am]

Cool song, man.  Keep up the good work

[kokkiii]

i really like this song!

[bassguitarpro88]

awesome, i love your lyrics.... keep it up

[Mimitjie]

you have a beautiful voice man. good lyrics and guitarplaying. gonna look for more now :)

[Dizzy728166]

Nice job buddy... Well done!

[BartBros]

Very beautiful..........!!! Gonna check out if there's more of U here!

[Ottawarocket]

This is an beautiful song Michael, your very talented, looking forward to more of your music.

Rocket

[asidgw19]

Hey, really good, song! Really like ur voice! I write songs too, not as good as this tho!

x

[rlisias]

Good lyrics and very inspiring song. Excellent!

[theSoNgADaYdUdE]

very well written !! glad i found out this video!! .. honestly very nice nice vocals and guitar playing too :p faved =) did you post this on modernoracle's original music database?

[Uriox]

Super fine, good voice, nice sound.

[dreaminglad]

good song sounds great

[SlowStrider]

Cool song. I like your voice.

[phiLF]

thx for your comment! your voice is really relaxing...nice lyrics!

[cdkkiss1952]

Dude you are amazing..After listening to you I am thankful that you even took time to watch me..Keep the good work..Write more..Your voice is easy to listen to...And your song is great..

[seeksthetruth7]

This song is worse than crack! I can't stop humming it...awsome dude!

[seeksthetruth7]

Holy shit dude! I was flattered by your comments on my song and came to your channel. Your voice is great for the style you are playing. I am subbing even if you have only one original song posted, keep writing, very soulful.More songs please!

[RjThisper]

Awesome voice, soothing smooth guitar!

[Espen414]

Nice Job! Next time include your face so we can see WHO is singing ;) ----E! San Diego.

[sariah216666]

ich will eine cd davon kaufen^^

[SunEyes27]

wow. this is really something else. You've got an amazing voice, man! This is even better than some Jack Johnson songs!

Oh, yeah and thanks for watching my vid.

C U at the top! (hopefully)

[joomlanet]

Most of the posted guitar videos I find here are unappealing to me. However, your tune, lyrics and singing are exceptional. Good job. I think you have a future in music.

[soptunna]

You're voice is just..amazing!:D

[moosebird01]

thanks bro that means alot coming from such a songwriter! ... soon i'll post one of my originals with some lyrics for u and everyone to check out.. i'm still kind of questionable about my singing, we'll see.. btw this song rocks i might add once again

[rolang22]

amazing song

[anardun]

This song is growing on me and I really am liking it. Is it up to download anywhere cuz I would love to listen to this more. Awesome job btw, keep it up!

[chevelle3dg]

I adore your voice.

[catchmusic425]

i absolutely love this song. your voice is really great, the chords are simply yet perfect and the lyrics are really really good. and the song has a real sense of emotion that is lacking in a lot of other just average songs. is there anywhere i can download it? again, amazing song.

[patxio]

hey , awesome!!

in french " excellent travail"!

I want a new song,you're a good voice,i like it!

can you send me the song?

thx

[krystlenjosh]

omg i love it!!! it is awsome man!!!

[djnecho]

Nice work man, really well written.

[fool4jesus]

hey really good!!! simle chords but really splendid ,especially love your voice!!!

[segould]

Great Song.You might want to show that to a talent agent. I could seriously picture that on the radio.

[austriacat]

wow.... guy the sound is Awesome.... beautiful !

[elendil1590]

Keep going, this is awesome stuff

5 stars

[Markd034]

thats friggin good.

[AnnieCanada]

You sound Awesome, Great Song~

[danandfam]

hey man...awesome song..great lyrics.

mind sending it to me??

[wolfinger321]

hey man deine songs sind einfach nur geil !!! (warum höre ich dich noch nicht in den Charts? Du hättest es verdient!!) also mach weiter!!!! ich will mehr von dir hören (schade dass du deine anderen covers gelöscht hast!! warum?)

[JFKToday]

Simply beautiful good song!

JFK

[FlyingHorseKnuckles]

If this is your 1st, then I cannot wait to hear more! This is a very infectuous number. I'm sure I will be humming it tomorrow. You ought to flesh it out with a band. I hear drums & leadwork building behind your progression and layers of harmonies. I like your style, lyrics... are you a believer? The words sounds as though you are. NEXT..!

[lisa21ben1]

:)

[Trevin11]

I like it man..good groove.

[Betsnipe]

Amazing...! Keep going! 5 stars.. :)

[greg20005]

beautifull song.

super chanson j'achèterai ton cd, tu pouré faire carrière en france!

( sorry that i write it in french but i coudn't tanslate it lol)you really have to "enregistrer" this song! you would have a great succes!

[tamianlock]

Hey Peter - listen to your song every day! Send it to me too - gotta have it! Just amazed of how many views you already got! Spread the word lol!

[PeterPatrickPitter]

just contact me!

[PeterPatrickPitter]

Sam, if you really love my song that much, I could send it to you of course!

[samuelnewguy]

Damn right tamian! cool!

[tamianlock]

Love this title! Just heard about it from a buddy. Hope someone important hears that and I get to hear the song elsewhere too... greetings buddy! (commented 3 times now, it never shows up, hope now it works)

[PeterPatrickPitter]

thanks everyone for your supportive words :-) thanks a lot!

[samuelnewguy]

that sounds great could you put it online on Itunes ... wanna listen to that song in my car!

[danandfam]

awesome man...great tune great lyrics great singing great playing..keep the tunes coming

[GetChomped]

Wow that was awesome. If you had a cd, I would most definitely buy it.

I knew you were good when I heard your Jack Johnson covers, but writing your own songs is a whole new level. Good job brother, keep it up.

[dabrix18]

perfection, great job man!